Title: dream land ch 4
narakugod - October 11, 2004 05:13 PM (GMT)
hey I'm changing mai to mihoushi and nouta to Tetsuo
me: if you disturb my sleep you will not live to see the light of day... for sleep is my one bliss and no one shall take it away from me...
mihoushi:*still angery* What? what did you mean by that?
borgir: heheh I ment what I said and nothing more
mihoushi:*still not understanding* fine then. tell me how to get to the weapons maker or what ever it is
borgir: first would you put me down?
mihoushihow am I supposed to know you just wont run away?
borgir: you have my word * he somehow managed to twist a smile into that rotted mouth*
mihoushi:*slowly puts him down*
borgir: humans are so foolish *grabs a knife and stabs at mihoushi, she dodges a fatal blow but gets a deep cut in her right arm*
mihoushi:YOU B@STARD *grabs his arm and twist, forcing him to let go of the knife* now are you going to tell me
borgir: NO
mihoushi: fine then *breaks one of his fingers* tell me
borgir: n-n- NO
mihoushi: *this goes on for a minute or two eventually she breaks all of his fingers* Are you gonna tell me or not!
borgir: n- nothing you d-d-do can make me, I don't tell people with anger problems as bad as yours stuff like that
mihoushi: fine then maybe I'll just have to break off this arm to match your other side.......... you are knda lopsided
END
~~~~~~~~~~ reveiw reveiw reveiw~~~~~~~~~~~~
Kagome24 - October 12, 2004 12:31 AM (GMT)
narakugod - October 12, 2004 08:57 PM (GMT)
she's very protective of her brother
SesshoumaruIsMIne! - October 12, 2004 09:44 PM (GMT)
wow! that's awesome! i hope she breaks his arm, but that kind of makes me sad, because maybe....well, do you feel sesshomaru needs his other arm cut off too because he's lopsided? :cryriver: that's mean
narakugod - October 12, 2004 09:46 PM (GMT)
sesshy isn't lopsided........ reall I think i went a little over board
SesshoumaruIsMIne! - October 12, 2004 10:26 PM (GMT)
lol, yeah, he's too hot to be lopsided :inlove: but you didn't go to overboard! she's just worried about her brother! and she's stressed about it :peace:
narakugod - October 12, 2004 10:29 PM (GMT)
but still....... hmmmmmm
I wrote that at school and I rushed and I figured hell why not break borgir's fingers
SesshoumaruIsMIne! - October 13, 2004 01:12 AM (GMT)
yeah, you told me that, but i thought you already had that written down? :sweatdrop:
narakugod - October 13, 2004 03:30 AM (GMT)
Kagome24 - October 13, 2004 08:59 PM (GMT)
Keep on the good work Narakugod! ^^
SesshoumaruIsMIne! - October 13, 2004 10:29 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (narakugod @ Oct 12 2004, 10:30 PM) |
| what? |
you said that at school!!! you said that she broke the dudes fingers too me! :hehe: don't tell me you forgot!
narakugod - October 14, 2004 03:44 AM (GMT)
ok I wont tell you
but i did
WingZer0 - October 15, 2004 12:16 AM (GMT)
Getting more interesting, kinda disturbing with the breaking the fingers thing, but sounds cool. Hope to see a chapter 5.
narakugod - October 15, 2004 12:16 AM (GMT)
yeah I kinda thought I went a little far there
thanks for reveiwing :excited:
Cold_blood_ninja - October 15, 2004 12:44 AM (GMT)
to tell you the truth..the ending is not really interesting..you should continue...it's like you run and suddenly a thing trip you and u stop....you should tell us how she recue his brother and stuff...COntinue!!!
narakugod - October 15, 2004 12:46 AM (GMT)
hey I never said that was the end..... it's just the end to that ch
and hey
I will continue to work on it
Cold_blood_ninja - October 15, 2004 12:55 AM (GMT)
narakugod - October 15, 2004 01:10 AM (GMT)
kay but i gotta go now by
SesshoumaruIsMIne! - October 15, 2004 04:36 AM (GMT)
keep going on to ch. 5!!!!!!!!!!!!! pwease!!!!!!!!!!!!! :excited:
narakugod - October 15, 2004 04:40 AM (GMT)
don't worry cold blood gave me a really good idea
SesshoumaruIsMIne! - October 15, 2004 05:47 AM (GMT)
yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :excited:
narakugod - October 15, 2004 05:54 AM (GMT)
i'm just not going to post it today
SesshoumaruIsMIne! - October 15, 2004 06:07 AM (GMT)
well obviously since it's like, 1:00 in the morining1
narakugod - October 15, 2004 10:05 PM (GMT)
i'll post it later today
maybe........ I'm kinda annoyed right now
Cold_blood_ninja - October 15, 2004 10:46 PM (GMT)
narakugod - October 15, 2004 10:49 PM (GMT)
my e-mails been broken and I have over one hundred un read e-mails