me some feedback on how to improve!!This is one of many favorites and which took me 2 months todo.I hope you enjoy as much as my other friends!!

Open tears.


To you I'm more than decieving,
Lieing,cheating,convincin
g.
If I had a dime for everything you've done,
I'd be less poor,than richer.
So,maybe my heart was ripped,
like a moster breacking free.
But tell me who really cared,
for MY well being.
Was it you who cryed for tears unshed?
Or was it him who,just laughed instead?
Was it the girl who tried just to hard?
Or was it him how couldn't get far?
My blood ripples like a pond,
that just settled untill dawn.
And my tears are like a knat,
bothersom,lazy like a cat.
And who cares as to what you said.
No one really understands,
unless...
I cannot heal,mend,or fend,
or lend a helping hand.
And when I tried to stop myself from crying,
all my feeling burst from hiding.
Sent to live in this cold shell,
cold,dank,not very well.
Knowing you,
you would not last.
To see me like this,
torn to ash.
Sent to flames,
hidden with shame,
of a game that's neither won nor played.
Filled with conceren,
pushd to a corner,
I bleed with sorrow,
of tommorrow.
To be chained with a shackle,
bound to your every word.
Yet time and time again,
i hear the flames crackle.
Pulled to teh ground,
pushed from beneath.
My rage comes,
beckoned from the sheath.
My tears fall fast,
falling to the floor.
With my blood on your hands,
I never thought you would...
Maybe it was true,
that you could not be changed.
Maybe I was fooled,
as well as betrayed.
Could you help the pain so deep inside?
Or will I have to sit here and just cry?
For everything that I've lost,
my heart and soul was the cost.
So,half of my soul returned,but not a single one,
held onto feelings I long for,
That I wish would return.
Would i hold onto hatered any longer?
Maybe it's time to say goodbye,
So i can lay here and wonder

This poem from Kikyo's perspective? It sounds like it. This must be before she meets Naraku.

Yeah...I was really board and went along with it.
My next poem is about some friends who became enimes.



Enimes

Blood glisten,fresh and new,
drips on the ground fresh with dew.
You look at me,
with anger and hatered.
WE are enimes,so it's stated.
We'll fight here,
We'll fight now.
Untill one of us is on the ground.
You took my trust away from me,
I'll take your life if that's to me.
We used to be the best of friends,
Now we are eniems untill the end.
You'll die here,
You'll die now.
You're so sorry,
I know,
Good bye.

You have good taste in words so keep of the good work...

Thank you...I'll try and get the rest of my poems from my computer.It doesn't have a working A drive so I have to write them down!Silly me...

I see....thats okay I have problems remebering where I left my poetry book... :cutesw:

Almost there...


Anyways...heres one of the poems that I can at least remember.


To be dead and unseen,
to cry for things not need.
To be held by the wrists,
not able to see my long gone sis.

To not hear what you said,
To just cry instead.
To bleed with my hands,
No one understands.

That this pain is what hurts,
throw the ball to divert.
And when I cry,
I'll reach for the sky.
To show my fear,
I'll hold you dear.
I just can't leave,
If you feel me,
I bleed.



No name for it though but,if you could help with tha name,that would be help.(Not a poem of Kikyo like my other one.This is of me...because...i did have sisters two of them but they died prematurly.)

Nice poem, I'm bad at names so I'll be no help.

By the way, Happy B-day

Thank you!!

Sent.

Two can play a game,
with a life and death name.
With on the line of love and trust,
you were sent down here from above.
But with my broken heart,
I awoke with a start.
Realizing you was what held me up,
from the coldest and dankest places;but.
As I lay here and cry,
I wonder why.
Why did you kill all of those people?
How could you live and still smile so proud?
As you tell me why,
I look to the sky,
and pray that I won't cry now.
You turn to me and smile,
that proud smile again.
This is what you said as you turn and take my hand.
"I'm a killer not a lover,
And love me for who I am and not what's been covered.
I'm still the same person,
But with a different version"
So again I sit here and wonder,
wishing it wasn't true.
That you hadn't killed all those people,
And lied to cover it through.
But,you did,just to feel what's it's like,
to live your life in vain.
As well as full of hatered and maybe shame.
I begin to realize that I was sent here too.
But my purpose was so different,
I was meant to guide you.
Down the right path,
The good and not the bad.
And realizing that I thought you were good,
makes me laugh.
It was because of you,
that made me true.
I can relive my life again.
So,I walk down the lighted path,
Away from the dark.
Leaving back that solem dream,
And you was a start.
So I can live my life full
and begin a new dream.
Full of life,love and prosperity.

Hey!!I got them finally written down!!My hand hurts so much from all the time it took but it was worth it!!

Here's my other fav!!

Home

Is home a place far away,
where the trees blow with grace?
Or is it close to where evil dwells,
and hatered begins as well?
Home is what I call,
a small place to go.
When troubles get you down and low.
But when I'm here,
I feel at peace,
and I show my true colors.
Of skill and powers never knowen,
and many true wonders.
Back at home I feel so small,
like a bird in a cage.
No one knows this true wonder I have,
and I'm the one to blame.
And back there,
my true friends wait and greet me with a smile.
But back at home the friends I have,
They nag at me all the while.
Back there is one who cares most and true of all.
He's stuck with me through thick and thin,
Through snow,ice and once again.
I find that place alittle scary,
because of so many dangers.
But back at home I get real board,
so I head back there again.
I smile to myself as I walk this bumpy road,
because I feel so fine.
All of my real friends right next to me,
helping me get by.
I look at the face of the one who's so true.
He looks at me with a frown on his face,
and that makes me blue.
Maybe I have no home,
to bleed my heart to.
But for right now,
this is my home.

This one is of inuyasha talking to kagome...It's a little sad and a little surprising.DOn't know why..

Cry

Please,look at me.
Don't let the tears fall.
You're fine aren't you?
We got through it all.
You'll stay by my side,
and help me get up.
You won't take me for granted.
I love you most of all.
And I hope to make it through,
the worst of it all.
But I need you here,
by my side.
Look into the sky and see the little stars?
Each one is a wish made by me to let you live.
And I know they are coming true,
because you never get hurt.
But when you do I blame myself,
and curse to the Gods.
That how could they let you feel pain,
all of the misery that world holds.
And I rest my arms around you shoulders,
and the tears begin to fall.
I try to hold you close,
yet your trembling body falls.
I watch helplessly as you sob on the ground.
You know the fate that is held,
that is now bound.
I lean to you and you push me away,
saying I'm a jerk and get away.
My heart falls as you run,
I look at my hands and think what have I done.
And then I close my eyes as something new comes,
something that you do,
that I had once done.
The tears fell down my face,
and I welcome it with open arms.
I'm sorry for what I done,
I'm for all i've caused.
This pain you feel is my own doing,
Which I never should have caused.
Kagome,I'm sorry...
Please just...
Don't run.