Yup pointless poetry..please read for i do not like it...maybe if someone encourages me to I might. Im high right now and i wrote this while i was high so it might be out of whack...and no i dont do drugs im just sick and had really strong Nyquill ...that stuff rids the pain a little too much


Take the gun and shoot me down
Baby I don't deserve you
Dangerous, kill me now
Please shed tears for me too

I wanna die here in your arms
Wouldnt have it any other way
I know you're angry I'm sorry
Kill all the troubles today

I'm sorry if I ever hurt you
I simply must say
Shoot me down into your arms
Make the pain go away

Sing me to eternal sleep
Sing me to the grave
Your last kiss and your last touch
For so long i have craved

Darling kiss me, pull the triger
I want to go wrapped in your passion
Say good-bye let me go
Rid your old obsession

Our love is rusting but when im gone
It will surely stay
Like a song stuck in your head
Cast your fears away

Honey destroy me
So our love will remain
Hurry, quickly now
You're slowly becoming insane

Take the gun and shoot me down
Baby I don't deserve you
Dangerous, kill me now
Please shed tears for me too

Dont forget me, dont move on
Be happy here beside me
My love my love ill come back for you
Soon, you wait and see.

Dark, very dark and tragic. You say the Nyquill may have done that?

Nyquill tends to do such things... I blame it all on Nyquill...to put it in perspective...Nyquill makes you depressed :bgiggle: and it makes you feel like you can fly :D

The meds I've been put on to keep my pain under control while I recover from my surgery have had a bad habit of messing with my internal clock to where my days and nights got mixed up for a few days straight. I've gradually eased myself off of them and now I'm back to sleeping more normally.

im making a story to go along with this fic :)

very dark...... but really good..... yet so so dark

I like it :)

thank you ^.^ my story is almost done....you can imagine that if the poem is dark.. only god knows what the story will be like ^-^

O.o can't wait to read it

im almost done...ill post it here...it is a tearjerker and not only because its sad but because of the angsty romance..

I like the poem. :O
It's very dark and tragic. ;]

thanks! :)