KaiXRay....I'm attempting to finish this story and post it within the next 10 mins...think i will succeed?

Disclaimer- I own my ff.net username, this story is in fact based on it but the people who own beyblade(not me) are hogging the spotlight.

Look into my eyes, What do you see?


"Kai.."His soft voice purred this familiar name into my ear. The sent shivers of comfort and realization down my back as I responded.

"Yes, Ray?"

He looked up at me. His moist cherry lips breathed a few simple words, a question actually. Except it was something I did not want to answer. It wasn't that I didn't like his question, I just didn't know how to answer.

"When you- When you look into my eyes, what do you see?"

His eyes resembled marbles, golden, sticky sweet liquid filled them as he yearned for an answer. I gazed down at his hand in mine. What did I see in him?

A savior, a lover, an amazing partner, encouraging, someone that I Kai Hiwatari wished to stay with for eternity?

He tilted his head to the right as I thought and I could tell he was growing impatient. He wrapped his arms around my neck and pulled me into a tight embrace.

Bringing his lips to my ear he whispered a few words. These words held all of our trust, thoughts, feelings and innocence.

"It's all right Kai, I think I already know."
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So what did you think? Short little story representing my name that so many people question me on. It was originally based on something completely different but I wont pull up old history. One of my first from a long time ago

It's, um, aw hell I'll just say it, completely and totally awesome!!!!!!!!!! I've ff.net as well and I'm doing one of my own in the InuYasha section. My name is the same as the one here. Of course, I haven't updated since I put the topic up but.... Anyway, keep it up!!!! By the way, what is your screen name on ff.net?

well as i said this story is based on my username so.. lol its lookintomyeyeswhatdoyouse
e...ill have to check out your account