My newest...still in progress...its more than one chapter. I'll put it on ff.net later too. No yaoi at first (sort of) but trust me you'll find LOTS later on.

Disclaimer- I dont own beyblade.

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'No!' I heard my own voice cry out while choking silently on my tears. He threw me against the wall again and I lay motionless and breathing slowly and heavily. My vulnerable figure slumps as I cry out again.

I study my surroundings but in the dark there is not much to study. The cold yet inviting urge to kill embraces me but I cannot think about that when im in battle. Feeding can aproach later.

I finally hear the sound I've been waiting for. Metal against metal scraping quickly as he produces a shiny chizzled weapon. My hand quickly reacts to this and I grab my own weapon, a simple sword. This is not my only weapon but I do not wish to change form. I don't want to feel ashamed, I want to feel strong on my own. I don't need support from my overpowering lust for blood. Besides, I do not enjoy the taste of sour blood and I can smell even in this human form he bears it.

At this time I can only breathe the musky air of this place. Why he enjoyed fighting here was a mystery to me. Bones scattered across the floor, humans, rats, owls, other random animals and once living creatures. Great beasts and warriors have went down in this place. Bone dust is issued whenever you step in certain spots.

Dont judge me by my looks, I'm stronger than I appear.

My ebony locks are tied back as we fight, thus restraining it from any interference. As our swords clash his pushes me back a bit. He is strong but only in his muscles, and of course only by a little. He still has not spoke yet though I do know his name. It is famous around these areas, all of the areas but so is mine.

It startles me to here a small but strong sound and realize he does know how to talk. I am angered at his mute voice from before but now that he speaks I relax a molecule.

"Leave your hair down, you look much better that way darling." He manages to say this and the tone of his voice distracts me. I stare at him. He still had his hood over his face but he sounded so young. I expected an old man or a demon of some sort. While I gawk he manages to reach his sharp weapon back and undo the tie holding back my hair. Great, another burden to deal with.

I follow you as you present an interesting proposal. You glance back happily.

"If I must unmask myself surely you should as well?" I ask him.

"You did not unmask yourself darling. You arrived here unmasked. I should keep my mask because this is how we met. Well...if you insist darling.." He undid his hood and let it fall back behind his head. His hair was covered in a colour of grey blushing towards clumps of blue. Crimson eyes stare back at me intensly. His locks wave slightly, a secret living within the depths of each strand. One word comes into mind. Beautiful...

"It's Rei."

He smirks, "I prefer my name for you much more than yours darling."

I tilt my head Interested in his upfront manner. He was controlling me I realized, he controlled my emotions. He controlled my emotions into realizing he was controlling my feelings. So enigmatic.

Follow me forever, please stay by my side.

I must admit I envy him. I do but battle comes before mind and heart. Battle is more important than troubling distractions. I had no time for that nonsence.

He drew in closer each time. His blade missed my skin by inches as mine did with his. He flipped it so that he wasnt using only the handle to hold it anymore. He was using the whole stick. This gave him extra force and he pushes me back. I fall back into a stone wall. He slides his blade over my throat in a teasing matter. I scowl as he smirks.

"Up for a little fun?" He chuckles.

I glare at him and say, "I don't play with my food."
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Naughty naughty kai *laughs* trust me...from the end of that chapter you know that there may be some *cough*action! *cough* later on...whether its action-action or just action not even i know yet :D once again...NAUGHTY KAI! lmao XD

yes, some more yummy yaoi ^_^ me like it, update soon

Eeeeeeeeew. :scaryangry: Bixas, viados.

If you hate yaoi then why read it?

To verify that it was shonen-ai and not outward sweaty, sensual yaoi. Fangirls. -_-

okay..... I'm just saying why post here when you don't like any boyXboy love?

To find an opportunity to bust it off, if ever. *Evil grin*

boyxboy love= teh hawtness of life. <3
But anyways... *cough*
i loved it! n_n update often. O:

very nice set and usage of words. i like.

hehe its not yaoi YET...right now it is merely shonen-ai...its not done...in the future there may be some yaoi ubbergeek ^.^

i like shonen-ai better than yaoi (it gets too hardcore for my likings) but that was pretty awesome

What is wrong with heterosexuality? Is it boring? Or it's the Radical Queerness/Feminist ideology? -_-

you can just keep on posting that..... no one cares :scaryangry:

Personaly, I think that yaoi fanhood indicate a certain immaturity of the fan toward to other sex.

bah, have fun looking at those fifs. I am not going to stop you. But, if it turn adult... ANYTHING adult, het, gay or lesbian, is verbotten here. We have kids.

ubbergeek, are you homophobic? if u arent, then you sure have a lot of problems with yaoi, yuri, shonen/shojo-ai, etc. if u dont like it, just dont read it. ur offending a lot of members here on the site. you cant change a person to your own liking, so stop trying to make us all feel retarded just because we like yaoi.

The problem is, even japanese gays don't like yaoi. They feel it's too stereotypical, saccharine and irrealist.

Believe or not, yaoi is a GIRLS thing. Were I gay, I don't think that I would agree with yaoi that much.

But fine. If it that... Stuff please you, read it. It's not of my concern, after all. I am het and all guy. As long it's not openly erotic, I won't do anything.

:|
Well, people do have their own opinions, but still..
>>

I like my boys to play with GIRLS, am I wrong for that? Those days, it sounds like being heterosexual is cliché, passé and all. -_-

Bye.

Aw, come on now, Ubbergeek.
Don't get all cold shoulder with me or anyone else. We did nothing to deserve it. It's ok to think what you want, but we like our yaoi and such. I understand perfectly what you're saying and such.

Nah, I am just saying that I'm leaving the thread before my mouth act faster than my brain.... *sighes*

Alrighty, then.



Mwahaha, I just read the fic again. xD Heh, it's still awesome.. >w<

Ubbergeek, what you said on gay japanese is wrong. I know some gay japanese people and they are fine with Yaoi. I don't know why your posting in a negative way in someones Fanfic thread but you and I can agrue over this on the other yaoi topics in the Manga and Anime forum

Anyways, Nekoyasha please update soon

reina it probably wont get to a major yaoi point, but to the point that it isnt considered shonen-ai...shonen-ai is the really sweet WAFF kind of stuff..


I AM SO SORRY YOU GUYS!!! I really didnt mean for this to turn into a whole yaoi war!! Really sorry :pigcry: dont fight!

I'll update probably soon or tonight.

Don't worry Nekoyasha, Ubbergeek started it anyways >_>

lol not ubbergeek's fault...just a very enforced opinion shall we say? oh and excuse any spelling mistakes :( wordpad doesnt have spellcheck :P

sure, anyone can have enforced opinions, but no matter how strong they are, they give you no right to go insulting those who dont share the same opinion as yourself.

Well, it's over now. So please, let's just not fight about it.
And, no pointing fingers, Syo, no matter who started it. It ain't right.

Updation!((i hate the present pov lol but i have to try something new :P)

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I feel weight on my fingertips and remember my weapon. I lift it above my head prepared to strike but Kai grabbs my wrist and twists it until i am forced to drop my weapon. It's hollow sound echos in the dark space.

"Darling," He breaths into my ear, "Tell me you did not come here wishing to injure me."

"You can't be the Kai Hiwatari everyone talks about. They speak of you as some kind of god."

"You expected someone else, no? I hope you arent dissapointed, Darling."

What am i doing? I'm supposed to be defending my village, fighting him, killing him! I could use my free hand to get out of this mess. I could shred him to bits in an instant, but why arent i?

"Temptation, Darling, temptation." He understands.

I reach up and pause. My hand remains in the air foolishly, not high like a warrior afterr victory, simply waist high. He sees this and grabs my wrist. Not hard though. He holds my hand to the wall and with his other he uses the blade on the weapon he holds to keep posed at my throat. The metal is cold but he isn't pressing hard. My other hand hurts from when he twisted it, not much but I am weak from lack of feeding. I realize, he could kill me know and be a great victor. His name would be in more legends and he would rule the land. Yet, he doesnt injure me.

The blade slips past the space below my ear and i shiver. I clench my fists.

wow, very nice, update soon :cheer: i cant wait till the actual ahonen-ai begins *hint hint*

Me either. ;D
Hehe, I love the update. Can't wait for more.

lol reina...and thanks you two ^.^ ;)