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Title: The Rebels
Description: A poem


xFallenxLoverx - June 26, 2005 12:35 AM (GMT)
I paint my nails, black and purple,
I wrap rubber bands tight on my wrist,
till you can see it turns purple,
like suffacation,
like what you do to my heart,
you turn me black and blue,
so i rebel,
i rebel to you,
i rebel to school,
i rebel yo your fashions, and styles,
i create my own,
looking like a fool,
i create me,
i laugh at you all,
because you like an army of one,
all the same fake ass chick,
no personality,
just fake ass talk,
so i rebel to you,
and become real,
and read about you in comix,
and see how stupid i once was and how stupid you are,
you see i rebel to you,
and you rebel to me,
so were all just rebels,
cant you see?

xFallenxLoverx - June 26, 2005 12:37 AM (GMT)
Freaks



We Walk Among you,
eating,
sleeping,
cutting,
while you live your sheltered life,
we live ares freely,
with more emoition in one day,
then in your fake lives,
you cry when you break a nail,
we cry when are hearts get broken,
you think your life is hard,
try living in hell,
try being hated all your life,
try being a freak,
why don't you try being me?

nekoyasha - June 26, 2005 12:42 AM (GMT)
i disagree with both of them...and dont double post

xFallenxLoverx - June 26, 2005 12:44 AM (GMT)
Ok then, but umm who died and made you my master? I only answer to Lestat,so buzz off

nekoyasha - June 26, 2005 12:49 AM (GMT)
woah jeez kid i was just innocently browsing and sharing my opinion in this FREE COUNTRY. I didnt tell you what to do im just commenting and reminding you af the rules

xFallenxLoverx - June 26, 2005 12:56 AM (GMT)
ok if you havent noiticed im kinda rebel and dont follow rules so oh well its not gonna kill me

The Ubbergeek - June 26, 2005 01:00 AM (GMT)
Remind me of the famous Bérurier Noir song - 'Rebelles'


btw, vampires sucks :bgiggle:

nekoyasha - June 26, 2005 01:04 AM (GMT)
btw i am one and i havent fed for days *flashes teeth* lmao if you were a rebel you wouldn't advertise it. You just want attention. No offence.

The Ubbergeek - June 26, 2005 01:05 AM (GMT)
Depend, a rebel don't give a flying **** about what the 'normal' peples think

nekoyasha - June 26, 2005 01:08 AM (GMT)
rebel is considered a stereotype...i dont like stereotypes! EEp! lol rebels may not care but they dont have to say that they dont....they should just not care....i dont care if they dont care lol

xFallenxLoverx - June 26, 2005 01:09 AM (GMT)
w.e. you may think your a vampire but your prolly not, I no i'm a rebel and a vampire and i dont flaunt it like you so...oh well dont post if you dont like my poems, jezzz dont you get the concept here?

The Ubbergeek - June 26, 2005 01:09 AM (GMT)
Kill the fight, then! ;) user posted image

Patriot1776 - June 26, 2005 01:12 AM (GMT)
xFallenLoverx, if it makes you feel any better, you aren't a rebel to me. Problem's who you call 'normal' people being judgemental and gossiping, and I condemn that kind of behavior, because that's what led you do to do what you do in the first place. I'm not going to do that. Your still a child of God in my eyes, needing somebody to say they accept you, and I do.

nekoyasha - June 26, 2005 01:13 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (xFallenxLoverx @ Jun 25 2005, 08:09 PM)
w.e. you may think your a vampire but your prolly not, I no i'm a rebel and a vampire and i dont flaunt it like you so...oh well dont post if you dont like my poems, jezzz dont you get the concept here?

you're the one who said "Im a rebel and i dont care" thats flaunting it. I never said i didnt like your poems i just said i disagreed with them... and vampires dont say they are in their sig...thats just sad

The Ubbergeek - June 26, 2005 01:15 AM (GMT)
lestat the blonde mop never really hid it. :bgiggle:

xFallenxLoverx - June 26, 2005 01:16 AM (GMT)
no in my sig i talked bout vampires and how blood tastes good, when did i say i was, your just jelous of the fact that your mortal and i got Lesta de Lioncourt famous vampire and ex-rocker

nekoyasha - June 26, 2005 01:22 AM (GMT)
oh so your sig just talks about how much vampires such as myself rock. Oohhh you've got me scared to sleep at night :P

Patriot1776 - June 26, 2005 01:27 AM (GMT)
Ok, I think you both need to quit with the arguing. The fanfictions forum I don't think's the place for it.

xFallenxLoverx - June 26, 2005 01:28 AM (GMT)
i just gonna post my poems and hopefluy get comments about people liking them not startin crap

shirahime-syo13 - June 26, 2005 01:29 AM (GMT)
Um, I know what a rebel is and your not a rebel. And Vampires don't scare me at all :P

nekoyasha - June 26, 2005 01:29 AM (GMT)
i agree with Patriot1776... im sorry everyone. I just had to defend myself.

Patriot1776 - June 26, 2005 01:31 AM (GMT)
Apology accepted and ye are forgiven.

The Ubbergeek - June 26, 2005 01:39 AM (GMT)
This was pointless. Now, let's return to the discussion.

xFallenxLoverx - June 26, 2005 01:43 AM (GMT)
anyways my new poem:
My Life

As the world starts to crumble,
I grin evily,
I support the end,
Cuz, it'll be the end of all the fake people,
I can live in peace,
I'll be able to do what i do,
and not have to put up with normies remarks,
See the end is like the Ark to me,
taking all you preps, and normies,
away from me,
in pairs of two,
screw that take in groups of 5,
take them cligue by cligue,
they make me so sick,
to the point that i take it out in my notebook,
i write about my pain,
which to them is a game,
they think there strong,
but there weak,
they have to live a sheltered life,
so they dont cry themselves to sleep at night,
in the words of Simple Plan,
" ..no they dont know what its like, so welcome to my life!"
so you see, the end of the world to you preps, and normies,and fakes
is a day in the life of me.

nekoyasha - June 26, 2005 01:46 AM (GMT)
im not bashing you so dont take it the wrong way but it has too many stereotypes...i DONT hate it im just undecieded.

The Ubbergeek - June 26, 2005 01:49 AM (GMT)
*Coughing* remember, constructive criticism, please.

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shirahime-syo13 - June 26, 2005 01:54 AM (GMT)
that was.. um.... different

ish feel sad, no one read my poems yet :pigcry:




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