Hello, there, fellow writers!
I know I've posted a story before, and never really updated it, but this one I'm sticking with. I like this one, and I hope everyone else does, too. So, please comment, give whatever critic is needed, and please, try not to be too harsh. I'm not the best writer! xD

Chapter 1

Dennis sat on his bed, his knees huddled against his chest, his back against the cold wall. He was breathing shakily as he watched his friend sleep silently on the floor besides his bed. Damn him... He cursed. He tricked me.. This is all his fault! He shook his head hard, squeezing his eyes shut, remembering what happened only hours ago.
His parents had left to go out, and left Dennis and Trevor alone and responsible. They had been playing video games, having fun, doing their thing, until Trevor suggested they order pizza. Dennis shrugged, agreeing, and called the number. While they were waiting, Trevor was joking around, telling funny stories, and just being silly. When the pizza arrived, Trevor and Dennis sat down on the living room couch, talking. Then, Trevor started getting close, and Dennis felt uncomfortable. Trevor got so close that he was practically leaning on Dennis's shoulder. He looked at Dennis seductivly, eating his pizza in an almost teasing matter. All Dennis could do was stare. He felt something inside him that he could not explain.
He always liked Trevor, a lot, maybe even a bit more than friends, but he'd never admit it. He didn't want people to think he was gay, cause he wasn't. He just felt that Trevor was special in a way that he could not say. He knew that his buddy was maybe a bit different, far from being straight, but he never did mind. But now, he was going a bit too far. Trevor leaned up towards Dennis, and he noticed something about the boy's eyes that he never noticed before; a desiring lust that was kept inside of him. Dennis leaned back, and Trevor dropped his pizza on the table, and moved his hand slowly up to Dennis's face, gently caressing it. Dennis gasped, trying to resist, trying to tell him to get off, but couldn't find it in him.
Trevor swooped in, his lips pressings against his friend's. The boy's eyes shot open, his cries muffled by the unexpected kiss. Dennis found Trevor's body pressing against his, and he felt weaker and weaker by the minute. Trevor broke the kiss, opening his eyes slowly. He looked into his friend's eyes, noticing how surprised and taken aback he was. Dennis whimpered softly, unsure of what he should do, how to react. He was still under his older friend when the door swung open, and in stepped his parents.
"Trevor?! Dennis?!" His dad said, sounding surprised, and the look on his face was disgusting. Trevor still layed atop of his friend, and Dennis closed his eyes, wishing the floor would just open up and swallow him whole. His dad walked closer, getting a better look. "What... were you two doing?" He asked, and Trevor shifted his weight above of his friend. He climbed off him, and sat with his legs crossed and his eyes glued to the table. Dennis layed there still, wide eyed, can't believing what was happening. "I...We...He...I...I..." Dennis stumbled over and over inside his mind for the right words, but the all came out in a jumbled mess. He swallowed hard, and shook his head.
Dennis sighed, letting his knees drop and layed against the wall some more. "That seemed so long ago..." He whispered, running his fingers through his hair. He layed his hands on his lap, staring at Trevor. He looked so.. peaceful when he slept. Nothing like the boy who was filled with lust earlier, the one who tried violating him only hours ago. His bowl cut dirty blonde hair spilled around his face, while his head rested on a hand, his mouth hanging slightly open.
He couldn't help stare him, though. His heart fluttered in his chest, feeling as if it was about to burst through. Oh, what am I thinking? He thought with disgust. I'm not like that. He then shook his head. "Oh, damnit, Trevor, I can't help feeling like this...." He sighed, brushing a few bangs out of his eyes. "I knew he'd be up to something... Someday...." Suddenly, Trevor's bright green eyes fluttered open, staring right into the owner of dark hazel ones. He blinked, then got up into a sitting position. "Hey, Dennis..." He began, shifting his gaze towards the ceiling. "I'm-" But Dennis cut him off. "Don't, just don't talk. Don't even say anything. I just want this night to be over." Trevor started him, mouth agape in a gawk. Dennis layed down, his back towards his friend. Those eyes... He thought. They were full of rejection and hurt... Those eyes would haunt him forever.


Whee. Remind you of someone? Yep. Based off of Bankotsu and Jakotsu! O:

lol. Yep, Bankotsu and Jakotsu written all over it. Me like it, update soon <3

Lol, thanks. >w<
I'll update once I get more replies. :]

O__O It...was...good!! ^___^ My name is Dennis! (step-step name) ^__^ Very good....it had to be two guys? >__<;

O: I luff the name Dennis. >w<
And thanks. xDD
And yes, it had to be two guys. Cause that's just like, omg, hawt. >_o

good story Aika. update soon. well written too.

yes, update soon :3

Lol, ok. I'll get to work on the second chapter and post it up. ^^;

Thanks for the comment, Dante! <33

ur a good writer. but should check my story Armies of God too ;P

x__x Boy on boy action!! w000t!!! :pigkiss: Lol. :cheer:

oooh, i like it!!

You must update!!!

you gotta!

lol...I like it...too bad that you wont be able to work on it untill you get back on.

Mwah! Thanks for all the comments. <333

Well, the second chapter will be up shortly- today for sure. My brother is just on the computer with my story on it, so yeah. So, hold tight, and hope you guys like this one. <333

-Aika

Trevor sat awake, staring at the ceiling still. Oh man... He thought. He hates me now. I... I shouldn't have done that. He's not like me, what was I thinking!? A sudden surge of pain rushed through his heart, and he groaned softly. He didn't want it. He's all into girls. I'm such an idiot. Damnit... He sighed, and layed back down. He stared at the wall before him, then shook his head. I made the biggest mistake of a lifetime. I think I may have lost the greatest friend I've ever had.. Trevor sighed again, remembering the first day he met Dennis.
It was the first day of Highschool for Dennis, he was a freshmen. Trevor was a Sophmore. Dennis had just moved to town, and was new, having no friends. Trevor was a loner, no one liked him much, all just because of his life choices. He was a fairly handsome younge man; broad yet childlike features with that long bowl cut. Girls went giddy around him, until they found out. Dennis happened to be across the street from Trevor, so they walked to school together, talked, became close, and hung with each other a lot.
It wasn't till later that Dennis found out about his older friend's sexuallity, but he never really cared, honestly. He told Trevor that it would take a lot for him to not be friends anymore. Trevor's heart skipped a beat at the thought of that. He had told Dennis that they would be friends forever.
But now, it seemed that forever was just a saying. A word. A simple saying to make one think many things.
Trevor stopped thinking about the past, and turned towards his younger friend. Dennis was turned towards him now, eyes open, chewing on his lower lip. Trevor studied his features.
His hair was short, like most boys wore their hair. It was a beautiful dark amber color, kind of girlyish, but it looked fine on him. His dark hazel eyes were a nice touch to the copper skin that surrounded them. That skin. Trevor always envied that skin. His was so pale and delicate. He sighed, still staring at Dennis, while Dennis stared back. He wanted to apologize, but how? He would just push him away again. He probably wished for morning to come faster than anything in the world so Trevor would just leave. He shook his head. Trevor was a junior now, while Dennis was a sophmore. Should he really be wasting his time on a younger one anyways? He didn't have any other friends, and Dennis seemed to be sent to this earth just for him. It was as if they were meant to be...
"Trevor." Dennis's voice errupted his thoughts, and he blinked. "Wha?" He said, looking downwards. Dennis sighed, sitting up on his bed. "Come here..." He whispered, his eyes settled on his friend. The older boy couldn't believe his ears. "What?" He said. "Come here." He said again. Trevor got up slowly, and stood before his younger friend. Dennis looked up at him, he was taller than he, but then again, most boys were. "Sit." He commanded, and Trevor sat next to him. Dennis put his arm around his friend's shoulder, pulling him in closer.
"Listen, Trevor..." Trevor looked over, seeing that Dennis was blushing furiously. He couldn't help but laugh. "Oh, Dennis, you're so cute when you blush!" He squealed, which caused him to glow even more. Dennis cleared his throat. "Trevor, listen, I.. This is really hard to say for me..." He then blinked. His sentence came out wrong! "I mean, this is really hard for me to say..." He mentally beat himself up. Baka! He thought continuosly. Trevor waited patiently, giving his friend time. He was prepared for whatever Dennis said, good or bad. Dennis sighed, and shook his head. "Oh, what I'm trying to say is that I think I-" Just then, someone walked past his bedroom door, and Trevor hopped off the bed and onto the floor, faking sleep. Dennis shifted his eyes, and the door opened, light pouring in. "Ow, mom, that's bright light you know." He said, covering his eyes with an arm and squinting. His mom stepped in the room, gently closing the door behind her. She walked over to the bed, staring at her son. She swallowed hard, then turned on the lamp besides his bed. "Dennis," She sighed, sitting next to him. "Yes?" He knew it was going to be about Trevor. He just knew it. Or something along those lines. "What exactly... Were you two doing?" Her voice broke his thoughts. His head immediatley jerked towards Trevor, gazing down at him. He wasn't sure if he was asleep or not. If he wasn't, he earned an award. He faked it perfectly, it seemed...

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