Title: Hate
Momiji the priestess - July 3, 2005 06:24 AM (GMT)
i came home late so i didn't want to wake up my dad, he comes in the room yelling at me, sayig bad words. so yeah i cried and made this poem. He is such a asshole. i hate him, he isn't really my dad, my step dad, but my mom is leaving. *cheers* i have hated him for years(like 6), hope she leaves him. i wrote after he slam the door, i was crying.
Hate
I hold Darkness in my heart
Anger Screams
The good and its power has vanish
Nothing left but tears of sadness
Alone in a corner of my room
Tears start to roll down my cheeks
In my head I scream, "I hate him!", "I hate him!"
I can't control it
I'm screaming
I'm kicking
I'm crying
Stop me!
Before I......
Soko_Monieono1234 - July 3, 2005 08:07 PM (GMT)
...that is so sad... My poem could never be that sad. :bigeyescry:
The only thing I dislike is the fact the last 2 lines don't flow well...but other than that. :cheer:
inuyasha_luver_4ever - July 3, 2005 11:29 PM (GMT)
forever_demonstar - July 4, 2005 12:11 AM (GMT)
Momiji the priestess - July 5, 2005 05:02 AM (GMT)
thank you all for the nice comments. :cheer:
Inuyasha_Blades_Of_Blood - July 5, 2005 10:02 AM (GMT)
So sad...yet so beautiful at the same time... :yesyes:
Naraku Chan - July 5, 2005 05:49 PM (GMT)
I undrstand you...that was grate I love it.
Momiji the priestess - July 6, 2005 04:30 PM (GMT)
thank you all! this makes me feel happy. lol