I only have 1 original character and thats lightning spirit,so no stealing!

Ok one night while titus was asleep at the thunder plains lodge.
He sees a lightning spirit in his dream.

Lightning spirit:Zermmmmgaflsh

Titus has no clue what its saying.

Titus:Come again?

Lightning spirit:Hsofm 200 udkr bolts jfjbj treasure

Titus understood some of it now but when he was gonna ask for it to speak more clearly a huge bolt of lightning wakes him up.

Titus tells everyone about the dream.Lulu tells him about a treasure in the thunder plains that makes mages stronger but no one knows how to make it appear.

Titus:Well the Spirit did say something about lightning.

And the next night Titus has another dream.

Lightning spirit:dontge tst ruk buy lightning 200x orel se str ongfi ends wil lkilly uo

Titus couldnt make it all out but he got "Get struck by lightning 200x."

So Titus does just that.

And on the 200th time he gets struck his party has to fight the lightning God.

Boy was that a hard battle 4 him he had to restart 3x.

The moral of the story dont do things you think spirits are telling you in your sleep!


The End

P.S. be gentle that was my 1st fan fiction ever. Any1 whose played FFX will know how hard it is to dodge 200 lightning bolts in a row. lol Well until next time we meet FAREWELL!

ok can some 1 please say somthing about this fanfic even if its a bad review i dont care tell me if i should keep writing fanfics anything!!! :narutoang:

Hmm...it was intersting. I'd say you should work on your format it is not great. However it is more orignal the most of what passes through this place.

wow a mod answered my fan fic 1st im happy :narutoclap:

:hehe: Don't be so shocked I love to read. Hopefully you get more comments then just me however. ^-^

It was okay, but you have grammar errors. But the dialogue was nice, I guess