Our five heroes have just defeated their arch enemy Naraku (or so they think) and are at a campfire deciding what to do next (Naraku had most of the jewels, so with him gone, they have no idea where to start looking). Sango and Miroku went off to get some firewood, if for no other reason than to avoid the conflict Miroku had predicted.

“So, now that Naraku’s dead, what the hell are we gonna do now?” asked our resident badass.

“Well, we’ll find the jewel shards naturally…” said Kagome “And we’ll use them to make you a full human Inuyasha!”

“What the!” Inuyasha was so surprised at this comment that he fell out of the tree he was in and fell into the fire. He quickly extinguished himself, and then resumed his ranting “Why the ---- would I want to be a pathetic human!”

“Have you already forgotten?” asked Kagome “It’s because you want to live in my world!”

“And why would I want to live in your world!”

“Inuyasha you jacka$$! You know why! It’s because you love me!” There was a long pause, and then Inuyasha started laughing.

“What’s so funny!” yelled the increasingly annoyed Kagome.

“You just said that I love you. Kagome, I don’t even like you!” laughed Inuyasha.

“But… you’ve stayed with me even when you could have left!” said a devastated Kagome “And… and you kissed me for god’s sake!”

“She’s got a point Inuyasha” said a certain little fox

“I only stayed with you because I want the Shikon Jewel.” Said Inuyasha “And as I remember, YOU started that kiss, and it was the worst moment in my life!”

Kagome felt as if her world had shattered “DAMN YOU INUYASHA! SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT BOY, SIT!”

And then she stormed off toward the forest, but was stopped by a woman about a year older than her in a black cloak.

“Oh Inuyasha!” The girl cried out “Allow me to introduce myself, I’m Despair. I was sent here to kidnap Kagome as bait but you don’t care what happens to her, so I guess you won’t mind if I do… oh I don’t know…THIS?” with that she pulled out a hooked knife and stabbed Kagome in the heart.

“Kagome!” Inuyasha, despite all previous comments, really seemed to care about Kagome now.

"Inu...yasha..." and Kagome fell to the ground.

“Having a change of heart are we?” asked Despair “Well don’t worry, she’s still alive so to speak. Look.” No sooner had Despair said this than Kagome’s body disappeared. In it’s place was a small, golden orb… Kagome’s heart. Despair picked it up and began to speak to Inuyasha “This is Kagome’s heart, here, take it (she tossed it to him) it won’t do you any good until Master Axel decides to set her free. Lost? Well here’s how it works, Kagome isn’t dead, you can bring her back, you just need to find and fight master Axel. Bring Kaggy’s brother and Shippo, train them Get it? Got it? Good. There’s a Gummi ship in Kaggy’s back yard by the well. Toodles!” And the she disappeared.

Inuyasha followed the instructions, and left his planet with Kagome’s brother, Shippo, Sango, and Miroku to find Axel.








Sorry if it sucked, I was in a rush toward the end... if you like it, you should like the story on fanfiction.net, which is called "Of Darkness, Light, and Anything in Between"

I like it...UPDATE PLEASE :angelstar7:

Really!?!?! That's awesome, because I have the story (Which is now up to 23 or 24 chapters) on Fanfiction.net! If you really like it, you will review it.

Pretty good.

OOOO

This has the potential of being a very good story...I can smell it like ramen!

Just keep up the good work and this story will be one of the best!

Listen to the bear!

:bear09: ----->WoOt!

Question: Did you read the chapters on fanfiction.net? Is this question getting annoying?

I haven't...you should put your story here...Update please :angelstar7:

Okay... we have a slight problem here in my empty head. that wasn't chapter one. It was just the first chapter that had Inu in it. Should I just give Inu chapters, or should I start over and give you the whole story?

You should start over
:cactus25:

Okay. If you haven't played Kingdom hearts: Chain of Memories, this may not make sense. Also, K is my sister.

Axel is waiting in twilight castle happily contemplating the look DiZ will give him when he finds him in one of the castles many rooms. DiZ barges in mouth foaming eyes red…. “ Axel you do know how much I hate you right about now, right?”

Axel looking completely oblivious says “ Why, what ever did I do old chum?”

DiZ takes the file on castle oblivion and puts in on the table. “ Old chum…?” he croaked grimacing “read this.”

“Alright lets see Vexen time of Death 8:57 p.m. Wednesday 31 of December. Killer… Axel. Marluxia time of death 9:27 p.m. Wednesday 31 of December. Killer Sora provoked by Axel. Why that’s me who would’ve framed me like that?”

Now Diz’s mouth might have been mistaken for K’s mouth after she brushes her teeth. “ Just read on.” He said stiffly.

“Lexus, time of death, 10:00 p.m. killer, Riku. Zexion: time of death… aw who cares… killer Riku Replica provoked by Axel.” Our future antagonist said.

“Now as I recall the only traitor was Marluxia” mentioned DiZ.

“NOT TRUE!” piped up Axel “ LARXENE WAS A TRAITOR TOO!”

“Axel, I thought you knew that there were more double agents in the worlds than you” said a familiar voice.

“Larxene… congrats, you were stronger than I expected” said the organization’s leader (DiZ) “Anyway, to business, I called you 2 here to receive a mission of the greatest importance. Sora and Riku have proved a threat. Kill them. Axel, you are promoted to #2 in the organization, and Larxene, you are #3

“But… We … They… It… Kill… OH COME ON I CAN’T EXPLAIN IT!” Yelled Larxene

“ ACTUALLY EVERYTHING’S FINE DIZ, WE’LL GET RIGHT TO WORK, HAVE A GOOD DAY, I HATE YOU, COME ON LARXENE!” Axel said in one breath

“Bye Dizzy, I love you!” Larxene said, and upon doing so DiZ threw a book at her. She decided to get out after that.

“Larxene,” said Axel, “could you remind me who we’re plotting against?”

“Luke Perry?” joked Larxene. Axel was not amused.

“In order for our takeover to work, DiZ will need to trust us, telling him our plan won’t make him.”

“But we can’t let him kill Sora and Riku! They’re key parts of... you know.”

“Yes, I know, but we’ll need DiZ to think we’re (in DiZ’s voice) incompetent fools. Then he’ll let his guard down when we attack. In the meantime, send Death to attack Sora” said Axel

“K, bye Axel, luv ya!” yelled Larxene, leaving Axel to plot.




So waddaya think?

Yay! That was aaawwwsssoooommmeeeee!!!

:blue20: Larxene got hit with a book! :blue20:

WOOT! I love it!

:bear09: ------AwEsOmE

I like it update soon :angelstar7:

Okay, here's chappy 2!

We join the story’s protagonists on the gummi ship, where Donald and Goofy realize that today is an unusual day after all. “Gawrsh, I can’t believe we forgot, it’s Sora’s 15th birthday today!” exclaimed the over excited dog.

“Shush, or he’ll hear you” whispered Donald “Wait, he’s 15, he probably will kill us if we throw him a party”

“Alright, then just gifts it is!” shouted Goofy

“But what to get him…” ponder Donald

“How ‘bout that book on women ya have?” asked the dawg (had to write that, it’s who I am)

“NO!”

At that moment, a familiar face appeared on the communication thing that you always find in space ships. “Sora? Are you there?” asked Riku.

“RIKU!” shouted Donald and Goofy, amazed that he was alive.

“Riku… yeah, let’s go with that, now, tell Sora to get his butt down to that red planet on the monitor” said Riku

“Gawrsh, guess we’ll have to tell Sora aboot that huh?

“Wait!” yelled Donald “What if we… aboot? What if we didn’t tell him and save money on his gift by claiming Riku was our gift to him?” (Not like that ya crazy fan girls)

Once on the new planet, Sora and co. found Riku immediately.

As usually, the first thing Sora said upon finding Riku was: “Riku!”

“Yep, he’s our…” began Donald, but then Riku got up, and appeared much taller.

“Actually, I’m not Riku. My name is Death, I’m here to kill you” said Death. With that, he pulled out a sword, and Sora and co. armed themselves.

“Take this!” yelled Sora, who went in for an attack from the air, swinging his keyblade at speed like never before.

Somehow, Death dodged, “You’ll have to be faster than that!” he said before conking Sora on the head with the hilt of his sword. He then teleported behind Donald and Goofy and rotated their heads 180 degrees, which would’ve killed them if they had been any weaker. Instead, it simply knocked them unconscious.

“Too easy… I wonder why Master Axel even considers them a threat…” wondered Death.

“I don’t, but DiZ does, and we need to gain his trust if we’re going to overthrow him” said Axel, who had recently appeared behind Death, “By the way, your work here is done, and DiZ wants someone to clean the toilets.” And Axel handed Death a toilet scrubber thing-a-ma-jiggy.

:victory:

That's realllll cheap of Donald to skimp out on Sora's gift.......jerk...

Good update!

Poor death.....Axel put him to toilet duty... :blue20:

Hmmm......what would be a good gift for Sora?

:bear09: ------X-b0x 360!

'thinking'

(Takes place in a desert world)

“Dammit Mickey, I TOLD YOU WE SHOULD HAVE BROUGHT THE GUMMI SHIP, BUT NO, YOU WANTED TO WALK 5000 MILES IN A DESERT!” yelled a silver haired lad known to the general public as Riku.

“I don’t know, good for the legs, this walking… besides, look ahead, there’s a pub.” Said the King/Mouse

“If it’s another mirage, I will kill you, understood?”

“When did I get any mirages?”

(Flashback)

“See Riku? In the Gummy ship we’d never see this land rover!”

“Ummm… your highness, that’s a…”

“I know it’s a land rover! I can’t believe it’s so tricked out! COME ON!” yelled Mickey, running to the land rover…

“WAIT! YOU’RE MAJESTY THAT’S A PIT OF COBRAS!” shouted Riku

Thus, Riku got nearly bitten to death, and went into a terrible mood for the rest of the walk.

(End flashback)

This time however, it wasn’t a pit of snakes; it was indeed, a pub. Riku was thirsty after the long hike through the desert, so he and Mickey stopped for a drink. Eventually, they were forced over to a table by a talking cactus and what appeared to be a frog with a cloak.

“So glad you wanted to do some dice gambling!” yelled the dimwitted Cactus.

“Just let us make a few preparations, and we’ll be right with you…” said the frog. Upon saying this, they went under the table, “You weighted the dice right Cactaur?” (weighted dice always come out on the same number)

“Sure did Tonberry” whispered Cactaur (the cactus) and they went back to the table

“Alright sonny boy, how about we make the bet 5 million Gil?” asked Tonberry.

“Alright” said Riku ‘I don’t really have that much, but I’m feeling lucky’

“Okeedoke, how about we call it? Bet you it lands on 1” said Tonberry

“But Tonberry I…” began Cactaur, but Tonberry had already rolled.

“4! CACTAUR YOU SAID YOU WEAGHTED THE DICE!”

“I did but… I thought you said 4…”

“HOW’D YOU GET 4 FROM 1!”

“Well, ignoring the fact that you tried to cheat, I won, so pay up” said Riku.

“Funny story about that actually… we’re broke.” Said Tonberry

“But we’re willing to work off the debt with you!” yelled Cactaur when Riku unsheathed soul eater.

“I guess we could go with that, come on Riku!” said Mickey, and after some introductions, they left. Actually, they were forced out for brandishing a weapon in public.

When they left the pub, Riku’s crew saw two figures in black cloaks. One had spiky red hair and blue tattoos on his face, and the other had green hair, green eyes, and looked about Riku’s age. “Hello Riku… oh where are my manners, my name is Axel, and this is Neon” said the one with the red hair, “I believe you met his master, Lexus”

“Of course I did, I killed him, why?” asked Riku

“Well, he was an important, and now deeply missed member of The Organization.” said Axel.

“Cut the small talk Axel, I’m only here to dismember this murderer once and for all…” said Neon.

“Alright, I leave you to you’re work then” said Axel.

“Well Riku, let’s begin” muttered Neon, taking out 2 javelins. In an instant, Riku and company jumped at Neon, weapons at the ready and…

(End)



Nice li'l cliffy huh?

But in all honesty, does this story scream of noobishness?

:blue20: DESERT MADNESS!!!!

Poor Riku....I hope he isn't poisoned.....DAMN COBRAS!

YAY! :victory: Update please!

-I don't think the story seems noobish....it's fine to me!

:bear09: ------ClIfFhAnGeRs!

(Damn this has a lot of chapters... must post... often!)

‘Thinking’

Chapter 3: Riku vs. Neon

“Oh no, not again!” yelled the bartender. He dialed up the planet’s police, who sent five officers over. You see, Riku, Mickey, Tonberry, and Neon (Cactaur has no weapon) were breaking the law by brandishing weapons.

“Hmph…. I don’t need an audience, thanks.” said Neon “I’ll take care of them… Boulder! (Rock magic)”

The boulder that erupted from the ground killed three of the policemen, named Ned and Ted. “Omg!” yelled one of the remaining ones “this guy must be from the orgin… uhh” Neon had taken advantage of Fred’s carelessness and impaled him with his javelin. He then focused on Red and Ed, the remaining police. They pulled out their swords and jumped at him. Neon dodged, and Ed slipped in his landing and fell. Neon quickly killed him and move on to Red. He lifted Red off the ground and impaled him.

‘This guy’s tough… I’ll just have to use the darkness within me…” thought Riku, surprised by how quickly Neon had won.

“Now, where were we?” asked Neon.

“In the name of truth, justice, and all that is pre-shrunk and cottony!” yelled Cactaur, jumping at Neon and… being hit away.

“Pathetic… you’re not even worth killing” said Neon

“Dark Aura!” yelled Riku, and he began to circle Neon, covered in dark power. Neon, unimpressed, shouted “Bouldaga! (Most powerful boulder magic) From the ground erupted 4 walls of rocks, harder even than diamonds. Riku unfortunately, chose to attack right when the walls appeared, and crashed into a wall.

Mickey leaped at Neon and attacked with his keyblade many times Neon avoided each attack and struck Mickey with the hilt of javelins. Meanwhile, Tonberry was sneaking up on Neon and… DOINK! Neon lost almost all of his energy. Riku took advantage of this and struck… only to have Neon teleport away at the last second.

“Who was that guy?” asked Tonberry

“He was Neon of course!” yelled our very stupid protagonist, Cactaur

“Excuse me? Who are you?” asked a girl about Riku’s age

Here Riku explained who he and his friend were and why they were there.

“Ohhhhh… wait, this Soranii-san you mentioned? Does he have REALLY big shoes and two goofy partners?” asked the girl

“Yes! Why what happened?” asked Riku

“I found Soranii-san and his friends in the desert. They were unconscious so I took them home with me. I’ll take you to them! I’m Aria, nice to meet you Rikunii-san” said Aria.

“Sure… one question though, why do you always add nii-san to the end of everyone’s name?” asked Riku.

“I don’t know… I just always add it to my friends’ names!” said Aria, running off into the desert.

‘Even after hearing about all the darkness within me she still wants to be my friend? I guess not everyone fears the darkness after all’ thought Riku, happy to have a human really trust him again.

Meanwhile, back at Twighlight Town…

“Whew! Faking that battle really took it out of me!” Neon said to Axel

“Faking? Please, I saw the fight, you just plain lost the battle.” said Axel “by the way, the takeover is working fine… you did leave the third android on the planet right?”

“The one with no memories? Yeah.”

“Good, DiZ has a mission for us… us being you, me, and Larxene; we need to recruit new members for The Organization.” said Axel.

“Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
eeeeeee! I love road trips!” yelled a very eccentric Larxene “I finally get to test out the new Airship!”

“I call driving” said Axel

“You evil little bastard.” grumbled Larxene.

“You get to be gunneress.” Said Axel

“Huzzah! I love you Axel! Huggles for you.” Yelled Larxene, huggling Axel.



sorry if 'huggle' is nooby.

Wow.....that was cool!

R.I.P Poor cops......oh well! Forget them!!!

That Neon sounds like a bad cookie! I bet he did lost that fight!!!

---Huggles for everyone!

Update more Naraku means hellnii-san!!!

:bear09: --------LaRxEnE iS cRaZy!

This was another chapter that was very rushed. It will more than likely suck.

If you read last chapter (and we hope you have), you’ll know that Axel, Larxene, and our own original character, Neon, were sent by DiZ to recruit new members for the organization. To do that they must travel across the galaxy looking for power hungry dopes, and guess where that quest took them! (Everyone guesses “up your butt and around a corner”, but that’s not right) Feudal Japan! Home to a near endless supply of those power hungry dopes. But, Axel (being the picky type) settled for 2, Sesshomaru, and Naraku. If you can’t guess what world this is (Inuyasha), you need mental help… and to stay up later, it’s on cartoon network every day cept Sunday. Back to business.
“who the heck are you?” Sessh, if you don’t know im, he’s got white hair, and we call him fluffy”
“Names Axel, pleased to meet you… and that Moran (Naraku) who looks high” you already know who said that “I’ve come to offer you a job”
“Why would lord Sesshomaru need a job?” asked a weird little green demon with a staff with two heads on it (aptly named the staff of two heads)
“Because if he accepts, we’ll give him power beyond his wildest dreams…” murmured Neon.
“Power enough to beat Inuyasha!” piped up Larxene
“I see… what do I have to do in return?” asked Fluffy
“Wear a black cloak, obey us, and let larxene call you fluffy” said axel “all of this goes for you two Naraku… except the Fluffy part”
“Deal!” shouted Naraku and Fluffy at the same time.
“Then welcome to the organization!” yelled Larxene
After this, they did the same thing for the villains of other worlds (not FF7’s though, Sephiroth already joined), but, Axel did something off schedule, he called them together to talk (it gets better)
Axel proceeded to address the new members by name “Seymour(FFX)Scar, Lust(both from Fullmetal alchemist), Brolly (DBZ-GT), Vader(StarWars), Yami(Yugioh), Sesshomaru, Naraku, etc, I do not lead this orginazation. It is led by a fool called DiZ.” He paused and made sure no one was looking “Because of that, I plan to overthrow the orginazation and take my rightful place as it’s leader. If you agree to help me I assure you, you will be graciously rewarded. Decline and I will condemn you to a fate worse than death…”
All of the new recruits agreed to follow Axel’s orders without question, as well as Larxene’s and occasionally Neon’s. Whereupon Axel took them to DiZ and acquainted him to “his” new servants.

AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! SEYMOUR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*hides behind table*

It's the leauge of extrodinary villians!!!.......Hey wait! Yami's not a villan!!!!

O.o....he went to the darkside?!?No wonder vader was here!

Update please and I'll give you a muffin!

-Lucky Larxene.....I wanna call Sesshoumaru fluffy......

:bear09: -----NaRaKu Is HiGh!!!

Okay, the next chapter would be the one I posted first, so we'll skip ahead to the one after that

Despair had recently gotten back from her mission, and was reporting to Axel about it.
“Okay Axel, I gave Inu his instructions, took Kaggy’s heart, and did the hula for Neon. Anything else?” asked Despair.
“Well you could- you did the hula for Neon? Weird. Anyway, there’s so much to do so here’s the plan: You’re going to meet Sora and Riku. Make the fight convincing, but DO NOT KILL THEM!!!!!!” yelled Axel.
“Sheesh, you’d think I was a murderous machine”
“That’s because you are, I programmed you that way.” Said Vexen.
“Oh, Vexen… good to see you’re alive. Is the takeover running smoothly?” asked Axel.
“Axel, I’m a scientist. I have no place in the takeover except for my seven androids”
“And your daughter” reminded Axel “anyway, Despair you go find Death and tell him what I told you. Vexen, get Larxene. I would send Neon, but I think she’ll want to know her father is alive.”
“What do you need her for?” asked Vexen
“She wants to come to get one more recruit” said Axel
Over to Sora. Sora’s just waking up, he’s more asleep than unconscious. Donald and Goofy got up and are discussing something with King Mickey. Riku was getting to know Aria, and Cactaur and Tonberry were trying to wake Sora up.
“My turn! Lemme think… I know!” Cactaur put on a mask that resembled Kairi and spoke. “Come on Sora you lazy bum, wake up” Sora continued to snore. “well I tried. Your turn tonberry.”
Tonberry walked over to Sora and started to stare down at him. Sora opened an eye, saw Tonberry staring at him and woke up screaming.
“I win. Gimme a gil” Tonberry said to Cactaur.
“COULD SOMEONE PLEASE EXPLAIN WHAT’S GOING ON!?!?!?!” yelled Sora. Everyone exchanged stories.
“Sora, we’ve got bad news” said Donald.
“We’ve gotta go back to our home world to defend against the heartless, but you have to stay and defeat an Organization.” Explained Goofy.
“Then… I guess this is goodbye.” Murmured Sora.
“Yup” said Goofy.
“Riku, you can keep the gummy ship” said Mickey.
“Thanks your majesty!” said Riku
“No need to call me that Riku”
“Alright, goodbye… mickey”
“Well… goodbye” everyone said
“Until we meet again” shouted Goofy from the gummy ship.
“(sniff sniff) I always cry at goodbyes” mocked Despair and Death
“Riku! That was the guy who beat me!” yelled sora.
“Then it’s time for revenge”
Death and Despair immediately immobilize Cactaur and tonberry. Despair then, using only her dagger, began to duke it out with Riku. Sora and Death parried each other’s blows. Aria used a bow & arrows for support. Suddenly, Despair got Riku in the stomach (Despair’s dagger is hooked remember), twisted, and pulled it out. Riku cried out in agony, and Aria, hearing Riku, fired an arrow at Despair. The arrow hit despair in the head and she fell. Then she started laughing and pulled the arrow out. Everyone could see the broken wires.
“It seems they cut off my stamina supply. Death, make it quick so we can get this repaired.” Despair said
Death made his sword extend until it was high in the sky. He then whipped a nearby gummi ship… Donald, Goofy, and Mickey’s gummi ship. They crashed to the ground and disintegrated instantly. Death and Despair were off.
Meanwhile, on an island planet, Axel was talking to a young girl, convincing her to join the organization.
“If you join us, we’ll give you this” Axel held up a white sword called ‘Peacemaker’ “and we’ll help you find who you are searching for. Do we have a deal?”
“What’s in it for you?” asked the girl
“Simple, you serve us and help us attack many evil people, and you help me in my takeover… and you must wear a black cloak. Do we have a deal now?”
“Deal.”
“Then welcome to the organization…Kairi.”

WTF?!?!?!

KAIRI!!!!! WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?

Bitch.....never trusted her to begin with.......

ooooooooo What a chaotic fight scene!!! I love it!!!

*eats ramen* hurry and update please before I finish the ramen!

-Doing the hula for Neon???

:bear09: -------ThIs Is A cRaZy StOrY!

A crazy good story.

Axel was waiting for Larxene, Neon, and his apprentice Crimson in an ordinary (but rowdy) bar. Yes, a bar. Why a bar? Because no member of anything that could harm the organization would think they would plot in a bar. After 3 hours waiting, they finally arrived.

“What do you want me to do this time Axel? Whack a guy, off a guy, whack off a guy? Cause I’m married.” Spoke Neon.

“Master Axel, I apologize for my brother’s idiotic behavior, and what is your wish my master?” asked Crimson, a boy about a year older than Neon with long (hence the name) crimson hair.

“There’s no need to call me master… although I could get used to it…” said Axel “you’re here for a mission even Neon can handle… Larxene, you’re just here because you’ll be my second in command when we overthrow DiZ”

“Nice, so what’s the runts’ simple mission?” asked Larxene

“As you all know, I’ve convinced Kairi to join the organization, what you don’t know is I’ve created a new kind of heartless named for they’re abilities. They’re called Namines. Like our little witch, they can replace memories, they’re simply faster, more efficient, and can actually fight back when attacked.” Said Axel.

“And how does this affect us?” interrupted Neon rather smugly.

“They don’t need to change a whole memory. They can add people, delete people, and… replace people.” Explained Axel

Larxene and Crimson smirked, getting the idea. Neon, still in the dark said “You still haven’t explained how that affects us.”

Axel was furious; a member of the organization should’ve figured it out by now. “YOU IDIOT!” he shouted, lifting Neon off the ground, causing many bar goers to stare.

“Umm…. Just another fight, nothing to see here” said Larxene nervously “axel put him down”

Axel put Neon down. “Neon, according to Kairi, you are Sora, and Crimson is Riku, and they, well they’re just imposters.” Smirked Axel “Avoid Kairi at all costs, I don’t want to explain why you’re in the organization while she’s looking for you”

“Wait… even with the weapon she has, she’s still weaker than them together… hell, she’s not even as strong as Sora!” pointed out Crimson.

“Don’t you pay attention? Sora’s stronger.” Said Neon

“Then why, little brother was I made Riku?” asked Crimson

“Cause you’re weaker you dolt!” Neon shouted

“No, it’s because Neon’s about Sora’s height and body weight…” began Axel

“So Sora’s fat?” asked Crimson. He was struck for that.

“And Crimson has about Riku’s proportions.” Finished Axel

“So Riku has a small…” began Neon, he never finished, he too was struck.

“Get out of my sight both of you, you make sick!” shouted Axel “Larxene you stay.”

“Aha! You are attracted to me!” said Larxene sarcastically

“You always knew that.” Joked Axel.

“Yeah… but from what I heard, you’d become cold and ruthless.” Pointed out Larxene

“It’s the same reason I’m conquering the organization Larxene. I need… ‘It’.” Said Axel

“Gone kookoo have we?” asked Larxene

“Some more than others… besides, you know as well as I do that ‘It’ exists.”

“True… HEY! I’M NOT CRAZY!” yelled Larxene “I’m just eccentric.”

“Larxene, I just wanted you to know that nothing’s changed in me those last seven years.”

“Not really seven yet… oh nothing’s changed?” as she said this she leaned toward Axel

Axel grinned “Nope. Nuthin. I think I still owe you a beer…”

Larxene laughed “Yes you do.”

Okay, I want this story back on the map so...


Kairi walked through the desert, looking for the people who claimed that they were Sora and Riku. After walking for hours, she finally came across a little broken down shack, outside were five figures, one on his knees. When she came within hearing range she heard the one on his knees say “I can’t believe they’re really gone.” As she got closer, she put on her hood so as not to be seen.
When she got to them she asked “excuse me, I’m looking for the heroes known as Sora and Riku. Do you know them?”
At this, the one on his knees (Sora) got back up and said “Well, I’m Sora” at this he pointed to a boy with silver hair (Riku, and from now on, all characters here will referred to by name) “and that’s Riku, how can we help you?”
“To start you can… DIE!!!!!!!!!!!” Kairi jumped at them, pulling out peacemaker in the process.
“Tonberry, Cactaur, run!!!!!!!!!!!!” yelled Riku, knowing they’d only get in the way.
“How dare you claim to be Sora!!!!” Kairi shouted while continuing to fight him “I’ve lived with him on Destiny Islands and I know that you look nothing like him!!!!!”
“But I am Sora!!!!” yelled Sora “and for that matter, who are you”
Kairi took off her hood and said “I am Kairi”
Sora jumped back, surprised “Kairi, how could you not recognize us?” he asked
“Because you don’t look like them, Sora has spiky green hair and green eyes and Riku has long red hair and red eyes”
‘What?!?!? Neon had green hair and eyes… maybe he and Axel changed Kairi’s memories to have her fight us!!!” Riku thought.
Kairi leaped at Sora again, and slashed his side. Sora winced slightly, but continued to block her attacks, though he never once attacked her.
“What’s the matter ‘Sora?’ Shouldn’t a keyblade master be able to hit a girl who’s NEVER FOUGHT IN HER LIFE!!!! Kairi shouted
On the sidelines, Cactaur spoke up “Riku, she’s got a point, didn’t you tell us he was strong?”
“Cactaur…” began Riku, getting up and grabbing him “HE’S HOLDING BACK STUPID!!!!!!!!!!”
Kairi backed Sora into a wall of rocks and knocked him down with a kick.
“Well ‘Sora’ looks like I win” she started to stab down at him and then suddenly, she had a flashback.
(Flashback)
Kairi is running along an island with Riku and Sora (who, remember, look like Crimson and Neon) suddenly Sora turns around and his face changes to the Sora we know, but quickly fades back.
(End Flashback)
Suddenly, a great pain in her stomach snapped Kairi back to reality, she looked down and saw soul eater’s blade through her stomach, coated with blood.
“Kairi… I’m sorry” Riku said, removing soul eater
“Don’t be ‘Riku,’ I can fix it…” to the amazement of Sora and co, she stabbed herself into where soul eater had been. When she took peacemaker out, the wound had disappeared without a trace.
“Shocked? Confused? Amazed?” asked Kairi “Peacemaker, while being a deadly weapon, can also heal it’s master, in short, you can’t beat me imposters!!!”
“That will do Kairi, DiZ wishes to speak to you” said Axel appearing behind her.
“Fine… master Axel” Kairi muttered
“Kairi, wait!!!” yelled Sora
“I’ve had enough out of you… just DIE!!!” Kairi let energy out of her hand to push Sora back. She then walked off, and disappeared with Axel.
Everyone left behind was silent for a moment, then Sora spoke up “Riku, what’s your problem?!? You almost killed Kairi back there!!!”
“Yeah? And if I hadn’t tried to, she would’ve killed you!” yelled Riku
“Boys, boys, boys,” began Larxene who had just appeared “you can’t fight among yourselves, you have a mission!”
“And who, in the name of god are you?” asked Sora
“Sora, I’m heartbroken, how could you forget me?” asked Larxene pretending to cry “name’s Larxene, DiZ’s third in command, Axel’s first, and daughter of the brilliant, yet thought to be dead, Vexen. Still don’t ring a bell? Well maybe this will jog your memory!” Larxene held her hand out at Sora, and a bright light came at him and instantly restored his memories of castle oblivion. “Remember me now?” asked Larxene.
Sora grinned “yep. And if I remember correctly, you’re weak. I beat you both times I fought you!”
“.01 percent.” Larxene said.
“What?”
“.01 percent, that’s how much power I used last time. If you’re wondering, Axel used .001 percent. Anyway, you have a mission, you gotta beat our boss, DiZ. Remember him Riku?” Larxene said
“Yeah… but he helped me!!!” Riku shouted
“Well, now he wants you and Sora dead. Axel and I have been told to kill both of you.” said larxene.
“What about Kairi?” asked Sora
“We screwed around with her memories. Now, I suggest you get in your gummi ship and get off this planet, it’s starting to bore our servants.”
With that, Larxene disappeared and Sora and co left the planet to continue their journey.
Meanwhile, in twilight castle,
DiZ was annoyed with Axel. Again.
“Axel, if you want to keep your position, I suggest that you at least prove these android’s worth.” DiZ said flatly
“I’ll be done by tomorrow.” Axel said

great storie!! I hope you will give me tyhe link to it on fanfiction.net so I can review once I join!!

You know, I'd love to do that, but two things,

Numero Uno: I'm rewriting the story to fit KH2 more, so this story's kinda dead

Numero Dos: I'm a stupid idiot, I don't know how to post links.



HEY WAIT A MINUTE, I'M HERE! My computer has been blocking me from posting for months, damn privacy service.