OK!!! This is my VERY first fanfiction so you HAVE to tell me if it's good or not. NO LYING!!!! ok... Oh and Mukuro5 do you mind if I use Muie in another fanficcy? PLEASE I NEED HER!!!! well anyway I MIGHT make a few IJ people here so if you want to be included tell me.....

~~~~~ AT some house in the middle of nowhere~~~~

*The Yuyu group and the Yasha are staying there for a couple of weeks*

Kagome: Alright, we got all of our problems and rules solved?

All: YUP!!!

Jakotsu: *staring at Kurama,Hiei,Inu.....basicly all guys* Ok....but are you sure no one wants to share rooms w/ me?

all guys: YES!!! WE'RE SURE!!!

I'll update tomorrow cause I can't think.....and don't worry it'll get alot funnier

-______- Don't put it here if your not going to put up a chapter or anything like that..

I AM!!!! DON'T YOU READ!!!! I'M UPDATING TOMORROW!!!!

I CAN READ FINE!!! IT'S YOU WHO CAN'T READ!! ONLY POST IT IF YOU HAVE A CHAPTER TO GO WITH THE OPENING POST!!!

LEARN TO COMPREHEND!!

WELL SORRY I DON'T READ DIRECTIONS!!! I'LL FIX IT HAPPY!?

Symphony....you're a pain sometimes you know that?

No I didn't.

I don't really care what you have to say, you know that?

Likewise......but sometimes you just need to shut up... it's true she should have written the whole chapter first but you don't need to *insert cuss word here* about it....

:cactus25: I like it but it's very short.

It's off to an interesting start even though it's short.I like the idea of puting them all in a house :pinkusagi17:
Update asap.

I agree with Flowermaiden411 and monk_girl it's starting off well, It's a good idea to put them all in one house, especially Jakotsu, and it is a little short, but if you can't think then you can't think, writers block is a nusense (sp) and it will probly get longer, right? so really if it starts short then you can add on when you can think. Good work so far

Thank you people! I'll update NOW!! and it will get longer

~~~~~Day 1~~~~~

~~~~in Kurama's room~~~

Kurama:*counting plants* hmmm...where did my snapdragons go? I'll ask Inuyasha
*goes into Inu's room* Hey Inuy...OMG!! I DIDN'T MEAN TO INTERUPT!!

Kagome: oh *covers up*

Inuyasha: HEY, HAVE YOU EVER HEARD OF KNOCKING!!?

Kurama: SORRY!! *leaves* I didn't need to see that. I wonder if Miroku knows where my snapdragons went? *goes into Miroku's room* Hey Miro....WTF!!!

Sango:*covers up* GO AWAY!!!

Miroku: Can't you see we're busy here!?

Kurama: I'M SORRY!!! *leaves* What is wrong with these people?! I'll ask Hiei. *goes into Hiei's room with eyes covered* uh....Hiei is anyone with you?

Hiei: .....no.......why?

Kurama: Oh, it's just because.....nevermind. Have you seen my snapdragons anywhere?

Hiei: no,what's been going on?

Kurama: you don't wanna know. well thanks anyway *leaves room* Where could they be? *Goes into kitchen and sees Hiei digging in fridge* Uh.....Hiei?

Hiei: *turns around* what?

Kurama: are....are you stealing icecream?

Hiei: no....

Kurama: then what's that *points to icecream*

Hiei: sweetsnow.....what is this "icecream" you speak of?

Kurama: nothing......and how'd you get here so fast?

Hiei: I can do that

*then a terrified scream was heard*

Both: *in living room* what's going on?

*you now see a naked Jakotsu cornering a scared Yusuke*

Both: 0.0

Bankotsu: NO!! BAD DEAD GAY GUY!! STOP HARASING YUSUKE!!!

Jakotsu: awwww *goes in room*

Yusuke: *hides in room*

Kurama: okaay......*goes looking for plants*

Hiei: 0.0 *stays like that for a few hours then looks for sweetsnow*

Sooooooo how was it?

I liked it.

thank you *bows* I'll update tomorrow
and mukuro5 read me!!!!

It's so funny. ^_^

Sure. You can borrow Muie. :cactus25: Thank you for asking.

THANK YOU!!! because I really couldn't think of a name :hehe:

I luv it...this is so funneh..
UPDATE ASAP :angelstar7:

:angelstar7: Please update. :angelstar7:

OK!! I WILL UPDATE!!!

~~~Day 2~~~~

Kurama and Yusuke: HIEI!!! HIEI!!!

Kagome: Who's Hiei again?

Kuwabara: The little midget that's always insulting you

Kagome: oh.....HEY I REMEMBER HIM!! HE CALLED ME STUPID YESTERDAY!!!

Kurama: well have you seen him?

Kagome: no....and I really don't care

Boys:....-_-.......bitch.......

Shippo: maybe Happy Bunny took him

Inuyasha: stupid.....a rabbit's not gonna kidnap Hiei

Shippo: HEY! I'M NOT STUPID!! AND IT'S DEMON-NAPPED! NOT KID-NAPPED!!!

Inuyasha: I CAN SAY WHATEVER I WANT!!! *hits Shippo*

Shippo: OWW!! Kagome he hit me!!

Kagome: INUYASHA!!!

Inuyasha: :0_0: y...yes?

Kagome: SIT BOY!!! SIT SIT SIT BOY!!!

Inuyasha: *hits ground REALLY hard* owwwww

Everyone else: :sweatdrop:

I'll update later IF you answer but thanks for answering anyway :pinkusagi17:

:angelstar7: It was great. :angelstar7:

It's good. A bunny demon napping Hiei. lol

Glad you like it. ^_^

~~~~Day 2 continued~~~~

Jakotsu: SO, What are we waiting for?

Bankotsu: what are YOU so worried about?

Jakotsu: WHAT? that guy's cute!!!

All: *slowly backing away*

Big Booming Voice(BBV): If you ever want to see your friend again, you'll answer our request....

Miroku: who's there?

BBV: look around

Miroku: *looks aroud* I still don't see anyone

BBV: DOWN HERE YOU IDIOT!!!

Miroku: *looks down* OMG!! IT....IT'S

who is it? is this the demon-napper? I'm just doing this to kill people w/ suspence

I'm hoping it's not Myoga (the flea dude.)

It's good update soon.

That was good.

I love it.Update please
I hope you update soon.I wanna see who it is :blue20:

lol. flea dude

Miroku: *looks down* OMG!!! IT....IT'S

All: HAPPY BUNNY!!!!

Happy Bunny(HB): Yes Idiots, it's me Happy Bunny

Kurama: where's Hiei?

HB: why should I tell you girly-boy

Kurama: girly boy?

Inuyasha: *hits HB* tell us NOW!!!

HB: OK!! OK!!! he's in the middle of nowhere being forced to watch Barney cartoons.

All except Kurama: *gasp*

Kurama: .......girly boy?

Yusuke: *hits HB* why'd you do it?!

HB: I was paid!!

Bankotsu: by who?

HB: NO!! no one ever speaks his name!!

Yusuke: well that would suck, how would he pay your check?

HB: we all just call him B.T.B....*runs away*

Kuwabara: who's B.T.B. ?

Kurama: uh...Kuwabara?

Kuwabara: huh?

Kurama: do I.....do I really look like a girl?

Kuwabara: uuuuhhh

Jakotsu: NO WAY!!! you look much hotter!!!

Kurama: 0.0 uh.....thanks....

Jakotsu: no problem! ^_^

Who B.T.B.? please guess I have to go so I won't be updating again today

BARBEQUE!!!!

*laughs* girly boy *laughs*

Update soon. Please.

*laughs* Barney *laughs*

lol. BARBEQUE!! how did that pop out!? :blue20:

It started with a B....doesn't it?

yeah....but what about the other parts? and you post quick.....0.0

It's barbeque. That's my story and I'm sticking to it.

ok.......but where go you think the T comes in? I mean for all you know it could be "Barbeque the Bum"

:angelstar7: I love it!! :angelstar7:

I really have no idea where the heck this is going. This isn't comedy, it's stupidity. Almost everyone is Out of Character and not in a good way.

Okay fine.

Barbeque the Bunny

LMAO that was funny.Update please.
I think it's Barney The Bear
Did i guess??? :blue20:

well of course it's stupid.....i think stupid's funny....it's not like it has a real purpose......:hehe: I'll update tommorrow...my teachers are killing me with all this homework..... :pinkusagi08: In case some want to know I was talking to -HuroKami-.......and none of you are right but thanks for trying

Ok!!!! I'll update!!! oh and I don't care if they don't act like themselves -_-

~~~somewhere in the woods~~

Sango: hmmmmm who do you think it could be?

Miroku: I have no idea

~~I'm gonna use your guesses ok~~

Kuwabara: I KNOW!!! BARBEQUE THE BUNNY!!!

All: what!? 0.o

Yusuke: -_- baka....whoa....that's what Hiei would say...

Kuwabara: I know!!! I'm actually starting to miss the shri...*runs into tree* OWW!!! WHERE'D THAT COME FROM?!

Bankotsu: we're in the woods....don't you read the blue letters up there? *points up*

Kuwabara: hmm....I didn't notice that

All: ^_^;

Inuyasha: and Kagome said I was dumb.....

Kurama: what's that? *points to building coming up behind the trees*

Sango: this must be the place....

Jakotsu: well what are we waiting for? we gotta save that sexy guy.

All: -_-;

Shippo: that place looks scary

Kurama: well if you want to go back you can...

Shippo: *hears howls coming from woods* Nevermind!!! *jumps on Kurama's shoulder* us foxes got to stick together.

Kurama: alright then

*mysteriously the doors open*

BTB: welcome to my lair

Yusuke: alright where's Hiei and how'd you kidnapped him?

Shippo: demon-napped

BTB: isn't it obvious *pushes button*

*big screen that shows Hiei in room filled with sweetsnow*

Kurama: why didn't we guess that earlier?

BTB: you see I didn't kidnap Hiei, I lured him here

Jakotsu: ha, lured

Shippo: DEMON-NAPPED!!!

Kurama: who are you!?

BTB: my name is BOB THE BUILDER!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAA

All: *gasp*

yes it's stupid but deal with it

:mad: :mad: :mad: :punch:

Bob the Builder is my dad...

It's good. Update.

you know who I mean!!! and my dad's a builder too.....but his name is Eric :hehe: