INTRO:

The Prophecy: A girl of 2 melinnia, but looks of 18, with pure white hair, and pure ruby read eyes will, and fair skin, carry the worst, and heaviest burden(sp?) anyone couldl ever carry....a spare life and emortal life. She will carry tese lives until she feels she loves someone so dearly that she would give her life for them, and when that person dies, she will relieve her burden(sp?), and give that person her spare lives. She will be of elf origin. And when tha person if revived, he/she will attain the appearance of an elf, and be an elf. Have the physical properties, the blood, the strength, and the heart, of an elf. This perosn will not be origanally a magic weilder. But, when revived, will be a magic weilder.



And so our story begins......

Problem with how this is worded. This is how I would word that introduction:

"A girl with an age of 2 millennia, but who looks 18 with pure white hair, ruby red eyes, and fair skin, will carry the worst and heaviest burden anyone will ever carry: a spare life and immortality. She will be of elf origin.

She will carry her spare life and immortality until she feels love for someone so strongly that she would be willing to sacrifice herself for their sake. When that person finally dies, her burden will be relieved and that person will recieve her spare life. When the person is revived, they will be revived as an elf, having the same physical properties, blood, strength, and heart of one, including the ability to use magic.

And so, our story begins...

Look closely at the differences between your version and mine. Firstly I split it into two paragraphs. You messed up by putting She will be of elf origin in the second paragraph, and I fixed that. Big thing I need to point out too is that you noticed I bolded the word "the". I highly advise you use that spelling instead of 'tha' for readability reasons.

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Chapter One
A New Job




The light was shinning in my face and it was pissing me off. Why did my mother have to wake me up so early?! "MOM! Shut the damn curtains!", I hollard. No answer. 'Dammit. I hate her sometimes.' I got up and and put on my work dress, and went into the kitchen to fine the royal messenger, or one of them.

"Meylania, this messenger tells me that the maids in the castle are looking for a young girl to take another's place. I told this man to tell them yes, but i wanted to check with personally before i sent hi back.", my mother said. "I....guess", i said slowly, looking at the messenger up and down, and all around. He wore at plain royal blue tunic, with and abnomally large cap that was gold and royal blue.

"Ok then, go get the possesions that you wish to take, and hurry back, he can't be much longer.", she said, before ushering Meylania to go get her things.

I returned with a large basket, it had my finest clothes, which werent very fine, my locket, that was golden and empty, and my cloth, string, and needles so that i could work on my embroidery if i ever got the chance.

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When the messenger lead me through the castle doors, I caught a glimpse of the King through an open door. He saw me looking at him, and he smiled at me! I looked away quickly. 'He's quite young for, to be a King.', i thought to my self.

As we walked on, i also noticed that there were many-many, doors and rooms. We arrived at what the messenger called, "The head maid's office", but i wouldn't really call it an office.

"Hello, Meylania. I'm Mrs. Baxstoon. I am the head maid. Now, your job around here is to make sur ethe King's attire stays clean, as well as himself, meaning that his towels are clean, he has fresh washcloths every morning, his boots are polished, his clothes are laid out and NO WRINKLES in them, and his bed is made every morning after he leaves his room. AND! make sure his room stays dusted, we don't need a sick king. Any questions?", she asked me, after giving me a long list of things to do everyday.

"Accually yes...What do I do if i get done with those tasks?", i asked curiously. "You ask the King that. He's your boss, starting tommorrow.", she siad smiling and ushering me out the door,"You can explore the castle for now, if you wish."

Why do I get the feeling she may not like it or something? Oh, the second paragraph left me a little confused at first because of left out words ('you' was missing in between 'with' and 'personally'), and misspellings (left the m out of 'him').

Otherwise, please continue, double checking for missing words and dropped letters from words before you post updates. I have a problem of dropping words sometimes too.

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Chapter 2
The King (Part 1)

I decided to explore the castle. I ran into five other maids, one buttler, the same messenger, two of the King's councilers, and one cook.

As i turned a corner, i bumped into someone, and fell down on my buttocks. A hand came down to help me up, i hesitated at first, then i grasped it, and it pulled me up to where i was stnading again.

I looked up to see who help me up, so i could properly thank him. When i looked into his face, my face went pale, while blushing at the same time. "S-sire. My dearest apolo-", i was cut off, "I'm sorry Miss.", he looked at me closer, "Aren't you the young lady i saw this morning?", he asked me.

"Yes s-sir.", i stammered while just noticing there was a large stand of hair in my face. I went to move it, but he pushed my hair behind my ear before I could, "I am having a maskquerade party in a month, and if you would like to come wiht me on that night? I know we don't know each other very well, so maybe tonight, and on other days that we get the chance, we can get to know each other better."

"Ummm......I-I guess. WAIT!, I can't now i really think about it. I have nothing to wear, i have my nightly chores, and make sure that your room is read fo rhte morning. Sorry.", I started to turn around, but he grabbed my arm, "My room's fine, and i can arrange for someone to show you some gown choices, you can choose from.






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Chapter 2
The King (Part 2)

"Wha-?", i was shocked, I barely knew him, and he has already asked me to a ball! And, he's the King to boot! "Please....?", he looked at me quizically, "What is your name?"

"My name is Meylania. What's your?", i asked firmly, confidently. He smiled at me warmly, "Do you not know your own King's name?", he asked, lightly grasping my hands again. I shook my head;"no".

"Hmm. I see, my name is Brianton. Weird name, yes i know.", he said when I looked at him with a 'What the HELL?' look, "You may call me Brian though, if oyu wish.

Chapter 3
The Maskquerade (Part 1)

I had chosen a dark-emerald gown, with golden-celtic-edging. The gown had the mesh-like stuff under the skirt part, so my gown 'poofed' out some-what. It trailed behind me very slightly. I chose a pair of black boots, instead of those GHASTLY heels. The boots were sleek, knee height, had a very slight heel, but they were mostly flat for the most part. I also wore a cloak that was sleeveless, black, and tailed behind me, a little shorter than my gown.

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I met Brian in a doorway, to the left of the Grand Staircase. An 'announcer dude', sa i called him, presented us. When I walke dinto the room/hall, all the young women who were hoping to be Brian's date looked at me with utter shock, hatred, and annoyed looks.


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Chapter 3
The Maskquerade (Part 2)



One of the girls came from the crowd came up to Brian, and started arguing with him, and me, but mostly me, "You said you were going to bring me to this ball, and yet you bring this....this....", she stammard.

I looked at her, "What am I? Am I any different from any other woman in this room, except my appearance, personality, the fact that I'm a magic weilder, and that Brian has lost intrest in you, and has mor eintrest in me now. You're just going to have to accept that Sarah.", i sneered at her, she looked fearful, but in her eyes, "You're just a selfish, 'I can do what I want to anyone, anything', self-centered, crybabym little b***** princess.", I snapped.


Apparently, no one else really liked Sarah either, because they started ranting at her, and she stormed out of the castle like a five year on tantrum-day.

I chuckled, and Brian led me into the Grand Ball room. I was in utter amazment.The room had rich, purple and red curtains, the same shade of red on the chair coushins, cherry wood tables, with the same rich purple tablecloths upon them.

Brian and I sat down at the 'High Table', along with two dutchesses, and four dukes.

A resonably sized orchestra started playing some peaceful dinner music while people held conversations all through out the 'courses' of the 'meals'.

"Brian..........Why did you really ask me to this ball?", I asked him.


No answer.


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I was having the time of my life! Me and Brian, and many others, were doing an up-beat, version of the waltz. He spun me around, and my gown and cloak flowered out.


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After a few more up-beat songs, the orchestra played a slower song. Hence, Brian led me into the gardens. Earlier thatmonth, I remember me and Brian talking, and finding out that I played with him as a kid. He told me he always liked to sneak out, so he could play, instead of studying, or doing something like that.


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Chapter 2
The Makerquade(Part 3)

"Meylania.....I know it seems like we've known each other for a short time,but..........I'm getting coronated to be prince again, and this is my chance to be wed by loving the woman I am to marry, instead of being forced. And I have to say, I love you Meylania, and hope you will rule by my side. I ask you hand in marrige.", he said, finally finishing, what he had been so nervous about asking.

Meylania glanced at the ring he had placed on her finger, then plopped down on the bench that was next to her and Brian. She stared, dazed, into the distance, staring at nothing in particular.Then she snapped back to reality, "I-I.....", she shook her head in a 'NO', fashion, but still shaking her head 'NO', "I love you too. I accept your offer for your hand in marrige.", Brian at first looked like a five year old given some gold, "Under one condition though Brian, if a man named Zach, or Zachory comes round', and demands Princess Meylania, let me handle it ok?", she said seriously.

"WAIT! What?! Your.....Princess Meylania, that one that had went missing from Birogough Kingdom?!", he shouted, then sat down next to Meylania.(Biroggough Kingdom is pronounced Borogugoh Kingdom. ^ ^) "Yes I am. But you can't tell anyone", she said laughing.

"He can't, I can, and will.", Meylania's head whipped around, then her eyes widened in anger, "ZACH! You bastard! What are you doing here?!", she yelled, standing up, and the wnd started to whistle around them. Zach smirked, Temper, temper. You might want to calm down before you blow us all away.", he said rudely.

Something of a ver, very miniature comet shaped fire thinng, hit Zach full in the stomach. When this happened, it created a cloud of smoke, and a bright light. Zach went flying back and hit a stone wall..........HARD, then fell to the ground wiht a lound, thump.

"You're a fool for comming here Zachory. You should have stayed home and tryed to marry some other woman off.", Meylania yelled furiously, "Heh heh.....", Zach said, standing up and wipeing(sp?) blood from the corner of his mouth. ".....I WILL tell everyone of your returning, including your parents, and you WILL marry me, even if I have to force you.", he said with a scowl. Zach walked off, and that's the last time Meylania and Brian saw Zach for a long while after that night.

Chapter 4
The Wedding(Part 1)

It's been four months since the proposal Brian made to Mela(Meylania). It is now two days before the wedding and Mela was stressing out. On top of having her servant's duties, which Brian told her she sdidn't have to do, she has to wedding arrangments to finish, and her and Brian still have to pick the dinning set for the reception.

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Mela walked into now, her AND Brian's bedroom, and quietly shut the door. She went into the dressing room and changed into her nightgown, then plopped down on the bed. Suddenly, she jumped up, when she landed on something quite hard. But, as she went to ge up, two warm, soft, large hands grabbed her waist, and pulle dher back down, "It's just me, Mela. Don't act so surprised.", Brian said in a whisper. She let him oull her back down, then she fell asleep.

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She awoke early the next morning, at least and hour or so before the sun rose. She got up, got dressed in her plainest of gowns, and then went to the kitchens for a light, early breakfast.

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After eating her light breakfast, Mela went to her seamstress's quarters to get fitted for her wedding the following day. The seamstress took all of her measurments, then started to make the dress. She finished the dress in about three hours, or so. It looked gorgeous(sp?)! It was a dark emerald color, with a gold edging, and a soft ivy green veil.



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Chapter 5
What?!

As the Seamstress was finishing her dress, the was a loud scream, and then footsteps coming down the hall outside the room. Then the doors burst open and in comes a guard.

"Prince Brian wishes that all the servants and The Lady are to go to a safe place." he announced. Mela stood up and went into her dressign room. The guard looked in the dressing room's direction with a odd look, then he left.

After he left, Mela came back out in leather armor and her sword at her hip. She smiled at the servants, and then walked out.

She walked through the many ahlls whichj were crowded with the guards rounding all the servants up. She fin ally made it downstairs. When she got there, she looked out the main doors to see what was goign on. There were flaming arrows, boulders, men, and many other things lying around. When she turned back around to take a secret door to the battlements, she came face to face with Brian.

"Mela? What are you doing down here? I thogught I sent a guard up to mak esure, you and your seamstresses go tto a safe place." he said quickly.

"You did. But I am the future quen of this Kingdom, so I have the right to defend it." she said seriously. He made a grab for her, but she moved, and ran. He ran after her, but she soon lost him.

She stood panting behind a wall, when she was sur ehe was gone, she cam from behind the wall. As she walked at a very fast pace, jogging occasioanally, sh efinally came to the main doors again. She went out the doors to lok around, and when she saw that part of the wall was going to collaps soon, she started running ideas of how to keep it from falling, so the enemie wouldn't come through.

When she heard footsteps behind her, she turned around, Brian had found her. But he looked serious, "He is on the other side. And he is about to attack the castle soon." he said.

She whirled around when she felt a rat amount of magic heading towards the battlement walls. As she whirled around though, she force the same mount of magice, which held the wall in place. Then she put a barrier around it to protect it, so it wouldn't fall.

But it was soon dissapated by him. Then he attacked the wall. She yelled out commands to the soldiers up there, so as to help them somewhat, so they wouldn't get hurt, and the walls would not be breached. "Try to fall with the stones, and not try to run or jump! You will have a much better chance at sourviving than if you act all panicy!" she ordered.

The did as she told them and they ended up winning. Zach stormed off with his remaining forces back to hsi kingdom. Mela smirked.

Brian turned her around and took her into a tight embrace, "Don't you ever do something liek this agian.", he said squeezing her, "You hear me? You stay with the servants."

"Are you going to make me? You're not king yet." she said stepping out of the embrace with a mischiveous smile on her face. "I alread take trainin, so its not worth telling me not to join in" she stated.

All of a sudden they hear a craking and groaning sound, then the drawbridge goes down. And someone unexpected comes over to Mela. "Hello Mela dear. Its been a long time" the voice said. Mela turned aorund.....

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Chapter 6
Long time, no see

Mela turned around at the voice, the person had already dismounted from his horse. Her eyes widened at the sight of him. From all of her memories of the long long past, the ones she'd try to forget, this was one perosn she couldn't forget. Her brother, Asmer. "Asmer!" she sqealed, running into his arms. "How did you find me!? Its been, hundreds of years. I though you had died in th ewar."

"Whoa, ho ho. Hold on, who is this Mela?" Brian aske dsuspicously. She turned to him. "Thsi is my brother Asmer. Asmer-Brian, Brian-Asmer." she said full of joy. "And what do you mena 'HUNDREDS' of 'YEARS'?!" he yelled confused.

Mela sighed. "I'm an elf to start out with. I am the one to fullfil th eprophecy. The oen where the elven princess and her true love that isn't a magic user wil save all the lands, and MAY end up dying?" she said despratly. Brian shook his head as he stepped back.

"BRIAN! WAIT! Let me explain!" she yelled to him, she went out of Asmer's grasp. Asmer understood, and let her, his sister truly ,oved this man, but not because of the prophecy. Mela ran after Brian. "NO, MELA! Its over! You were using me!" he yelled. "No I wasn't! I wouldn't have told you until the end, if I was using you!"

"You lie! I hate you! I hate you, MELA!" he yelled at her. She stopped dead in her tracks, and went to her right, crying. Brian stopped runnign through the gardens, and relized what he had said.
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Mela kept running through the mazes of the garden, going further from the castle. Zach followed her, but quietly. She finally stopped, for she couldn't run anymore. This was his time to take her, and marry her, so the prophecywouldn't be fufilled.

"Mela. What is wrong.?" he asked soothingly, walking towards her. Mela looked up. All she saw was a man. That's all she really needed to know. She wanted to be held. She ran into the man's arms, and he embraced her. She looked up at him, and her eyes widened. "Zach? W-what are you doing here?" she asked, rying ever so slightly to get out of his grasp. "Shh. My love, I will take you to my castle and marry you to me. You don't deserve Brian, and he doesn't deserve you. You deserve better."

Mela pushed him away. She knew Brian really didn't mean what he said to her. Or did he? "Get away from me, Zach! I'm engaged! LEAVE ME ALONE!" she yelled, running back towards the castle. "Brian! I'm in the garden. HELP! ITS ZACH! He- HEY LET GO OF ME! HELP!" she said slapping him and kept on running, she used an illusion to make him think she went one way, so he'd leave her alone.

As she saw the exit out, and Brian up ahead, Zach foufn her, and leaped out her. "AHHH!" she sqeamed, and fell. Befor esh eblacked out, she saw someone come over, and start to be up on someone. She couldn't tell who though, because she blacked out.

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Asmer walked at a quick pace down the halls that evening towards the infirmary. He had been given the permission by Brian to put Zach in the dungeons. So he did. Briand was already in the infirmary. He walked in and saw Mela sitting up, but she as talking to Brian, so he stayed away for the time being. But he couldn't help over hear.

"Are you sur eyou want to continue on with the wedding tommorrow, Mela?" Brian asked worried. "Yes, yes. I am quite sure. The seamstress didn't spend all that time making my fress for it to go to waste." she laughed. She looked up from Brian and saw Asmer. "Asmer. How are you? Since I obviously didn't get to ask earlier." she smiled. "I've been great sister. Adn from your question earlier. No I didn't die. I was captured, and when the enemy army was traveling, I was able to escape. How have you been?"

"Oh I've been great, being a little kid about oh, 50 times since last we met." laughed. Then looked at Brian. "You still aren't mad at me are you? And you still don't HATE me do you?" she asked. Brian kissed her forehead, "No, Mela. I don't."
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Chapter 7
Catching Up

Asmer stayed wiht Mela in her room, while Brian lef tout for a short time to check on things. "So, what's been up with you Asmer? Please tell me you've gotten married." she said teasingly.

Asmer laughed, "No Mela, I havent. I havent been able to find anyone who would live as long as me." he smiled. 'Gosh how I missed that smile' he though to himself. "So....Is he the one you will be married to Mela?" I asked, playing aorund with her.

She got up and went into her dressing room. "NO, Asmer, he isn't!" she laughed sar castically. Then she stuck her head aroudn the corner, "He's the one I love, and IS THE ONE, I'm goign to marry" she said, snaking her head back around the door.

She stepped out in a midnight blue dress, with black boots that went barely up past her ancles. The dress though, was an everyday dress, quite simple and plain. Somehting you usually wouldn't find in royalty. She smiled at Asmer and walked over to him, they hugged. "I've missed you Mela." he whispered. "I've missed you too, Asmer." they seperated.

"You are free to do what you wish, EXCEPT wreck havoc, and mis-behave. I have to go hunt down Brian, so we can discuss the matters at hand more thoughoughly." she said seriously.

"Aww..come on Mela! You knwo I LOVE wrecking HAVOC and MIS-BEHAVING." he joked. She smiled, "Well, too bad."

They both exited the room, and went their separte ways. She quickly paced down the many halls of the castle and went to a secret door, and opened it. This door, which led to a secret passage way up to the battlement, only a selct few knew about.

When she got to the top, she found Brian already looking stressed. A guard turned around, and spotted Mela. "What are you doing up here. First off, Servants are not alloud up here, secondly, WOMEN are not alloud up here." he stated thickly.

"Well, CAPTAIN, if you want to keep your job, you better kkep you loud mouth shut, or it might get you an 'accidental' push over the edge." she said very coldly. Brian had by now looked up when the guard had said something, and looked amused. The guard turned around and asked him, "Can servant have that kind of power?" he asked turning around, comign face-to-face with Mela.

Brian laughed, "Accually, YOU just insulted my fiancee, adn your soon-to-be, new queen." he laughed harder.

Mela shot both eyebrows up, then went around him, and looked at the paper they had layed out on the table. "So, you guys plan on ambushing Zach's men from all sides?", she inquired, "Wont work" she said simpley.

"And how do you know that?" asked the castle's wizard Henza.

"Because, I know Zach well enough ot know that he'll be expecting somehting like this." she said flatly. "But.....if we somehow beat him to his castle, we can ambush him from there. That's where Henza and I would come in. Considering, we both use magic." she said pointing on the map wehre Zach's castle was.

"But what could you two possible be able to use to get all our forces need, over there?" the same guard Mela threatened asked. "Well.....ever hear of seven league wings?" she asked. They all, except Henza stared blankly at her, she sighed. "They have the same effect as seven league boots, but in the air, and si easier. Now, I have about 50 pairs. Do not ask how abtained them I have them though. We can transport 48 men on my wings, and hwoever many Henza has together, at the same time."

"What about the other two pairs, Mi'Lady?" a young soldier asked. "Those will be for me and the King's wings." she said looking up.
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From just inside the doors to the fencing area, you could clearly hear the clanking of swords, clashing together. "Come on Mela, you can do better than this!" Asmer said while blocking an attack from Mela, while everyoe else in the field watched them in amazment at how skilled, and fast they moved.

Mela attacked at Asmer again and he blacked. He attacked at her, and she jumped up and her head was facing the ground(like in anime). And she landed on the other side of him, her didn't see to where she moved, so she moved swiftly and quietly up behind him, and put her cold sword blade to his neck, he turned around. "Dead." she simply stated.


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Chapter 8
The Ball


Tonight there was to be a ball to celebrate mine and Brian's marrying tomorrow. I was so excited! My dress looked so pretty.

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I walked down the corridors, just walking around aimlessly when Asmer comes up behind me and starts tickling my sides, "BOO!" he shouted when he first came up behind me.

"AH!!! HA HA HA! Stop it Asmer! PLEAS STOP! HAHAHA!" I shouted as he tickled me.

"NO! This is payback for beating me in sparring" he laughed jokingly.


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Chapter 9
The Ball (Part Two)
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It was almost time fo rme to enter with Brian. I was to go in from the right doorway/entryway, and he from the left. We would join in the center of the Grand Staircase at the top, and then decended.

When the reached to bottom, the crowd seperated and let them through.

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The dinner was wonderful. It consisted of pork, rice and broccili.(sp?)

After the dinner, people had they're own private conversations.

Then some music started to play.

'Dancing..........great' thought Mela to herself.

Everyone cleared a big space for everyone to be able to dance. Mela was not paying attention to whom she was standing across from. Since everyone in the kingdom had to come. That meant Zach had an invetation too, even thoug he wasn't part of this kingdom, his sister was, and he became her escort. So...

Mela looked up, sh esaw Zach accross from her. She stared at him intensly. Then a song started to play, that was to music to 'The Forbbin Dance'. No one knows why its called that though.

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Everyone took a step forward.

Everyone joined together and were rapidly dancing. Zach brought Mela closer to him. They were dancing a dance similar to a waltz. But wasn't a walts. (Like in Anastasia.)

The room suddenly goes somewhat darker, adn there is only one beam of light on Zach and Mela. He spund her around and she burst into light. He brought her back in.

He pulled her in closer again, this time she did not resist. He bent his head down to her ear. "You know this dance. Let's do this agian for old time's sake." he whispered.

He stepped back from her.

She was in the middle of the floor by herself. A purple glow was aroudn her, then strips burt out form around her. Her arms were in a crossed fashion, her head turned to the side. Then a marking under her formed. A magic sign. ((Like so in FMA or Howl's Moving Castle.)) The sighn VERY VERY VERY slowly started to fade. Mela's eyes shot open, they were a Emerald/Ivy Green. She uncrossed her arms.

The sighn started to spin. As it got faster, she started to glow, the same green as her eyes, but in a light tone. The sign, while still spinning, started to rise aorund her. When the sighn was about an inch abouve her head, it dissapeared in a small flash of light. The strips from before were gone, but returned, only to be purple and white this time, and not just white. Her purple glow had gone. Her eyes stayed the same, and so did the green glow. And formed black angel wings. She shot into the air.

As she went up, she spund around once, then paused, just before the roof, then turned downwards, and went towards the floor at imence speed. She collided with the floor, or so it seemed. She was nowhere to be found, and there was no damage done. then in a small swirl of light and a small burst of light, she reappeared, floating about half-way up to the roof.

Then landed gracfully.

Zach took her hand agian.

They started to dance again. They were wizzing through the room, she leaned her head on Zach's chest. 'NO! NO! He has me in a trance! NO!' Mela shouted to herself. But it was not use.

There was a part in the dance, where eveyone switche dpartners. She ended up with Brian. But then jsut as quick, before her could say something, everyone wswitched partners. She ws with Zach again.

Mela still had the wings on her. But then, they became strips of light, and they flew around, like they were in a rapid wind. But they didn't hit anyone once. By now, Zach and Mela were the only couple still dancing.

The strips became beams, then were strips again. They engulfed her. She was in a small sphere of light. Beams or strips would occasionally come bursting out. Then went back in. Finally the sphere dissapeared.
Mela was now in a dress That was still black, but had a buckle around her waist. ((Click here for what the dress looks like. Its #3102))

Her hair, was for the monet being, a soft midnight blue, with purple and white highlights. They started to dance again. Brian was glaring at the two with a death glare. He was not happy. He would have to have a serious talk with Mela. Then he saw he kiss him. Something didn't seem quite right. Yet, she still may have been slightly mad at him for not believing her.

((Do the same for this song, as you did for the last one. But wait until there is singing to start reading!!! THANKIES!! ^ ^))

Mela put her arms aroudn Zach's neck. He slowly dipped her, where he back was bet. He let go of her, and she stayed in that pistion(sp?) wiht no effort.

She came up. And everyone started to dance agian.

Brian went to look for Mela, but couldn't find her. So he went to the gardens.

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Mela walked wiht Zach. She looked at the sky then him. He loked at her.

'Brian still doesn't believe me about the whole prophecy situation.' she thought sorrowfully.

Zach stopped her.

She felt liek she didn't trust Brian anymore.

Zach kissed her. She repsonded ot the kiss. "Mela! What are you doing, kissing him?!" Brian yelled. This brok her out of the trance temporairly. Zach was prepared for this, but her let her fight. She came at him. She stabbed her sword at him. He dodged it. But was surprised. She brought her legs around, and kicked him. The tip of her sword carefully balenced on the cbblestoned ground. But as her fell, he grabbed her cloak. She came down, crashing. She stood up much quick than him. When she looked at her cloak, mst of it was ripped off.

"MY VERY FIRST MOTHER AVE THAT TO ME YOU FOOL! YOU WILL PAY!" she yelled and ran at him again. Bu her stopped her before she could bring up her sword completely. She was in the trance agian. He kisse dher agian, and she responded. Brian yelled at her again, "Mela! Why are you kissing him?!"

She separated from Zach. "You don't believe me about the prophecy. So it will not be fullfilled wiht you. So I feel like I can't trust you." she said, like she was in a trance. Zach picked her up Bridal style, and flew off towards his castle.

ENJOY! I think this is my longest update! ENJOY! ^ ^

ME LIKE IT ^-^

STUPID CAPS...SIGH...I REALLY AM TOO LAZY TO PRESS BUTTON...MAYBE I'LL HIT IT ACCIDENTALLY...LOL

ANYWAY IF YOU WANT, USE MICROSOFT WORD OR SOME WORD PROCESSOR TO CORRECT SPELLING AND WHAT NOT ^-^

yay I accidentally hit the button! Anway, me likes the story...please continue ^-^

Did you listen to the music with the story? ^ ^

this is pretty good Sailor, i love it :angelstar7: Meylania is going to a ball with someone she barley knows :blue20: update when you can! :angelstar22:

wait! isn't Brian or Asmer going to go after them?! grrrrrrrr evil Zach! great story ^^

Neither Asmer nor Brian can fly. and the castle magician doesn't know yet. And he would need reinforcments, ad that would take too long to get..so...yeah...lol

I might update soon! ^ ^

ok that makes more sense now. ya, i guess they couldn't fly after them :mint29:

i can't wait for the next update ^^

Chapter 10
Flying

Mela had been out of the trance for a while, but still acted like she was in it. She didn't like being controlled. Zach looked down at her and smiled, then she smiled back. She tunred her head away from him and rolled her eyes.

At the moment they were over a large body of water. It was Lake Tome, the largest lake in the lands. Or so everyone thought. Then they came over tree cover. Mela started to devise a plan to get away from Zach. Once they were far into the tree covered area, she would squirm out of his arms and fall into the trees.

After she fell, she would hide so he couldn't fine her. Hopefully. If he did, then she would go from there.

She waited about another five minutes. Then she, just out of no where, starts to squirm, she succesfully falls. He stops in shock, then goes after her. OR at least where he thinks she fell.

.: WITH MELA :.

Mela fell in a higher branch, but managed to get to the bottom branch. Then she fell from the bottom branch. She fell..HARD. She heard something crack and when sh etried to move, she had difficulty. She knew what had cracked.....her leg. She didn't have time to just sit there. She slowly got up, and limped behind a tree. She covered her self in a spell, so it would be MUCH harder for Zach to find her.

She saw him land, and she went farther behind the tree. She waited for about ten minutes, then looked back around. He wasn't there, she uncovered ehrself. Then she used her powers to find his precence, he was about a quarter way back to his castle from where he just was. She sighed. Then saw a nice pile of leaves. She would have to sleep there for the night. Then in the morning she would have to figure out how to get home, then how to take care of her leg.

There.....here's yall's chapter!

great update! loved it! :angelstar7: whoa she broke her leg? all that trouble just to get away from one guyy :blue20: update when you can! :angelstar22: