Title: THE STORY OF FHANA!
Description: A PRINCESS TURNED WARRIOR!
Kohakuzgurl - December 1, 2004 01:28 AM (GMT)
JAPAN, 1423.......................
ONE DAY IN THE GRAND LAND OF TUKA, THERE WAS A EMPORER & HIS WIFE. MANY TIMES THEY THOUGHT TO PRODUCE AN HEIR TO THEIR KINGDOM. IN THE YEAR 1407 THEIR WISH WAS GRANTED, THEY WERE NOW THE PROUD PARENTS OF A LITTLE GIRL. THEY HAD NOT THOUGHT ABOUT HOW SO WOULD COME TO LIVE IN HER FUTURE.
TO BE CONTINUED.........
SO DO YOU LIKE IT? IF YOU DO I WILL WRITE MORE. :D
Kohakuzgurl - December 1, 2004 02:00 AM (GMT)
.......... SHE HAD GROWN UP A HAPPY LIFE, OR SO SHE PRETENED. SHE HAD A BIT OF A DEPESSING FEELING SINCE SHE WAS 6. THIS WAS WHEN HER FATHER DIED, TO WHOM SHE WAS VERY ATTACHED. SHE WAS LEFT WITH HER MOTHER, WHO NEVER WANTED A GIRL IN THE FIRST PLACE. HER MOTHER HAD WANTED A BOY SO SHE HAD TO DO NOTHING WITH HIS BRINGING UP. THERE FOR SHE HAD MADE HER ONLY DAUGHTER, WORK LIKE A SLAVE. FOR THE NEXT 10 YEARS, SHE HAD LOOKED FORWARD TO BEING 16, THE AGE AT WHICH YOU GET MARRIED.
TO BE CONTINUED ...............................................
Kohakuzgurl - December 1, 2004 02:20 AM (GMT)
she had been as patient as some one could be to get away from the one person you despise the most. so she waited & waited untill the morning of her 16th birthday. hows that? im i doing something wrong ? plz tell me!
Sango Evers - December 2, 2004 12:54 AM (GMT)
It's ok but it's a bit short and you need more action. Other then that it's fine. :bff:
Kohakuzgurl - December 3, 2004 12:35 AM (GMT)
thanx ! i will post the good version 2morrow! :bff: :D
Kougagurl - December 3, 2004 01:10 AM (GMT)
Good, more action though. ANdplease don't make the whole thing upper case. It is hard to read.
Kohakuzgurl - December 4, 2004 02:56 AM (GMT)