*This is about a curious cat(tora) who finds herself as a human, with being a human she finds her true love, which is 13 riyuichi hadaka, her owner*

Chapter one

*the transformation*


"Here you go Tora".

He layed down my favorite food.
Yum! I nibbled it down in what seemed as five minates.
so I started my normal day
I waited at the door until my owner let me me out.
Then Run down the street as if I were chaseing a fellow cat
"Hey Yasha!"
"Hey Tora".
That was my only dog friend.
(Yes I know...a cat and a dog....)

I started to feel dizzie right in the middle of the street
and had fallen passing out.
A car was headed my way.
Yasha had broke through the fence and saved
me from the passing car. Well,this is all what he said anyway.
" Tora wake up".
"huh".
"Don't scare me like that.You should go home and get some rest."
"No, I'll be fine."
"go walk home and get some rest!!"
"fine I will"
So I walk home.
As I cam closer to the door something happened.
I felt dizzie again.
I feel down the steps,totally blacking out.
I woke up again.
"wow, that one hurt."
"Huh?"
I felt differant.
My fur was gone.
I had a patch of hair on my head.
And two long legs and two shorter legs.
My paws were differant and I didnt have claws.
I had relized that I looked just like a....um...
what do you call them.... is it an alien...no....
A HUMAN...yeah thats right....
Since I didnt have fur I was... erm.... NAKED
.....thats what you call it.
I have to find some clothes...
So I went up to the door step on mt habds and knees.
I nudged at the door.
My owner, I think his name is ...um...Riyu...yeah
thats what his mom always calls him.. well anyway
He opened the door to see me.
He just stared as I came in(still on my hands and knees of coarse i cant walk like a human yeat) I drank from my dish.
"Who are you"? He asked.
I scrambled to say something.
"To....ra...."
"Thats wierd, thats my cats name."
I tried to get up and walk as he was still glaring at me.
oh yeah I need to get clothes ...
I stumbled up the stairs as he fallowed me.
I went into his room and managed to find some
.......um.....clothes....yeah...I need to remember that word.
I put them on.
"Ok, so how do you know where everything his in this household"he had asked me.
I had to find something to say again
"......My....na...me..is tora"
Thats all I knew how to say in there language anyway.
"Are you ok?"
I nodded.
"where do you live?"
"...I.....do...n..t....know"
"Ok, well we need to find out where you do live."


next chapter "The misterious girl"
Thank You for reading


GIVE ME THE HEADS UP ON MY STARY AND HELP ME GET NEW IDEAS PLEASE

Ch2 The Blossoming of love ( I desided to change the ch name sry)

"Do you even have a last name?"

"uhm..."

"Im guessing thats a no.

Your just a misterious girl arent you."

I nodded
remember I dont speak human that well.

"Yeah,I need a det....What Tora"

"I shook my head."
I didnt want to have this be a big deal.
I did know what a detective was.
"OK never mind then Im sorry to annouy you but Ive changed my mind."
"why dont you want a detective Tora?"
"No ...big deal."I told him.
"Oh ok ...I'll help you find your home myself then."
He is so sweet to me even if Im not a cat.

*staring sparkley at him*

"uh....what?"
I didnt even noticed he had said something to me.

"Oh huh?"

"Oh nevermind."
He stared back at me and grinned.
"well I guess you can stay here at our house,you could sleep on the bed in my room,Ill sleep on the floor."

"o..k.., thank you."I had said it to him so softly.
"Well in the meantime we have to find you some proper clothing?"
(I was still wearing his shorts and t-shirt)

So we went to the....mall...yeah thats right the mall.
I had picked out some clothes(I remember the word very well now).
He bought them for me.
There was 5 outfits, a dress, and two pairs of shoes.

"How you pay?"
Im getting better at the speaking part but its still isnt quit correct.
"Oh I work for my dad and I get alouence,its my emergency money,for these kind of cases."

"Oh."
" Do you want to have some fun?"
I nodded again.
"What do you want to eat first of all."
"frisk...sushi"
I also had to remember that Im not a cat.
"Ok lets go then."
We had went to get food then he asked if
I wanted to go to the movies.
"What is that?" I asked.
"You dont know what that is!?"He said in anstonishment.
"Well Ill take you then."
"Ok, thank you again all for this."
I tried say a full sentance but it got all mixed up.
"Your welcome."
Somehow he understood me.
Theres something about him I like.
I dont know what though.
We went to the movies.
We saw a...um...scarey movie I believe.. You know the animated
things that role on the screen.
after that we went to an...um....arcade I think is what he called it.
He taught me how to play the games there.
"Have you ever been to any of these places?"
"No" I said.
"I like this, thank you much."
"No problem,you needed it."
We walked back home,
but on the way someone stopped us.
He grabbed me by the arm.
"You want to have a little fun with me?"
"Get your hand off of her!"
"What will you do about it?"
He pulled out a gun and pointed it at riyu still haveing a hold of me.
"I said get your hands off of her Damn it!"
He ran towards me and tried getting me out of his arms.
He didnt even care a gun was pointed at him.
"Let her go!!"
"Ri..yu.."
Remember He didnt even tell me his name.
"huh?"
"howd you know my name?"
"let go, I'll fine"
He still didnt let go.
"I dont want you hurt, let go."
"LET GO RIYU PLEASE!!"
He finaly let go.
The guy ,still holding me ran off.
" I'LL COME BACK FOR YOU TORA!!"
The guy took me back to his place.
I had no clue where I was.
He took me into a room with a bed.
"Ok beautifle ,lets see what your made off."
He pinned me on the bed.
I layed there still.
He grabbed a hold of my waist and then started kissing me.
He was going further and further down with his kisses.
Still laying there still he took my top off.
Right as he got that far the door swang open.
"GET OFF OF HER!!"



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I delted your double post and don't worry about your writing. I belive your allowed to double post that.

interesting. i think your story is interesting, please keep updating i think you should keep the story going. are you going to explain later on how Tora becomes human? also Riyu took it really calmy when a naked girl walked into his house! lol

Yeah lolol
He kind of did
I dunno how he just did
I am going to re write the story on paper and it will problably be differant..
I dont know how she becomes human its one of those mistery things..lol
and thank you I try to make it interesting
lol
mabye you could help me with tips and stuff
because like nobodys leaving me replys

i wanna help!!!! that would be so cool!!!!! n_n ^_^

yeah ok but im still going to write the overall things i just need more ideas
i have to update sometime else i dont have enough time sorry

thats ok, you can't write a good story in a few minutes..........well maybe some people can, but most can't............ oh well

lolol
yeah
True True

Did you notice we are basicly the only ones leaveing replys

EVERYONE HATES ME!!!!!
*Monintor falls**

SEE!!!!!

no, i think you should check your monitor stand though LOL

i have a bad history with TV's! here is what happened:
in gr. 1 i was turning off the TV because i had to catch the bus, I turned it off, and turned to walk away, then the TV fell on me! ok i was a short first grader! so it pretty much was on all of my body expt my head. i start screaming, my sister looks at me, starts screaming, my mom comes and starts screaming for my dad. my dad was in the bathroom so it took him a while to come, and it took my dad and my mom to get the TV off of me. so when I finally got to school the teacher made me tell my story and everyone laughed at me!!!!

then there was this small TV on my dresser, and I was mad, so i slammed the dresser dror(sp?) and the TV fell on my head!

then another TV fell on my foot froma shelf! THE END eek! TV's are out to get me!!!

Yeah How old are you??
IM listening to the song wind from naruto
I know the lyrics
dont ask how
lololol
Cause I dont know
lolol
well yeah

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I said

brrr
its cold in here
I said
there must be some gators in the attmosphere
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its a cheer thingy for my school
lol
its like the one in bring it on

hehe ^^ i'm 15
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I LOVE THE MOVIE BRING IT ON! that movie is so good!!!!!

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umm.......... i gotta think..... what's my school's cheer???
(* *) caller (^ ^)audience
i think it goes like :

clap clap clap clap
*WHO'S THE BEST SCHOOL IN THE AREA?*
^C. P . H. S.!!!^
*WHO'S THE BEST TEAM???*
^THE BEARS! THE BEARS!^
clap clap clap clap
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i think that's how it goes ^^, the goes on for a while it has a few verses ^^

He Held a gun in his face
"GET OFF OF HER!" Riyu had said.

"I SWEAR I WILL PULL THE TRIGGER!"

The other guy grabbed a gun that was under the blanket of the bed.

"Try me"he said.

He had Shot a gun shot at his arm.
Riyu tried to dodge it but it didnt work.
"RIYU!"Tora screamed.
She ran next to him.
"are you ok?"
The guy had pointed the gun at Tora and was about to shoot her.
Watch out Tora.
He got in front of her and took the shot.
"RIYU DONT!!"
He got shot in the other arm.
She tore her skirt tree times.
She quickly tied both arms.
And then wiped the sweet from his forehead.
She leaned in and kissed him.
"Ill take the next shot for you."She said
"After all cats do have nine lives."
He looked confused.
"A..."He started to say
Then the guy had aimed the gun at him.
"IM NOT GOING TO LET YOU..."She got cut off.
He had shot itat her this time.
It hit her in the stomach.
She was about to fall onto the ground when Riyu caught her.
"Your not going to die...Im not going to let you.."
"aww...sweet romance..."
Right after the guy had said that Riyu Had aimed his gun at the other guys heart.
He shot the gun.
He fell to the ground and died.
He had carried her to a near by hospital and got all fixed up.
"Is she going to be ok?"
"Shell be fine..go ahead and take her home...watch over her closly."
He nodded.
They went back home and he made the bed for her.
"Lay here"he said.
She nodded.
"Hey, what you said about the nine lives earlier."
"Yeah?"
"Uhm...my cat...shes gone missing..."
"Oh ....you mean.....me?"
He looked shocked.
"What!?"
"Yes..I meant to tell you yesterday but..."
"Your not really my cat are you?"
"Ask me a question and Ill awenser it"
"Where did I get you?"
"The animal shelter in tokyo."
"Ok...whats your birthday?"
"Well you always told me it was October 19"
"How old are you in cat years?"
"3"
"Wow...you are my cat...that must be why...Ive always been atached to you"
Tora had a questioned look on her face..
"Truelly...I...I..." she groaned in pain as she tried to get up.
"You what?"
"I..."
She fell on the floor with blood splurting everywhere

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TO BE CONTINUID.....

what??? but she went to the hospital1 why's she still bleeding? did the stitches reopen or something?

good update^^

He caught her.
She had became unconcous.
"tora..."
I have to tell her but I... I...Dont have the guts to...
what did she want to say to me anyway....
hm....
He put her back in the bed again..
"I guess she was just doing to much at a time and her bandages came off."
Well I better clean this up.
So went and got carpet cleaner and cleaned the stuff off of the floor.
He had done so much he wanted to go to sleep but...for some reason..
he didnt want to sleep anywhere but next to her...in the bed..
so he went under the covers and put his arm around her..
"I know your not awake but.. I have been wanted to tell you that I really love you".
But she was awake.
And she opened her Eyes slowly as he began to get drowsy.
"I...I....I...."
and as she went to sleep again she had said it
"love you...too"
She leaned up agaimst him and feel asleep.
They both felt somfterable in each others arms.
The next day We both woke up at the same time.
Both of them relizing what they said to each other and how they were sleeping.

Tora slipped a light kiss on his cheek as he blushed.

"He jumped out of the bed."
Tora groaned.
"OH SORRY ARE YOU OK?!"
"Ill...be fine."
"Just rest ok.. I dont want you get hurt anymore."

He went down stairs and made her a breakfast and brought it upstairs once again.
She ate it slowly but with a beat...like a drum...
"Hey....uhm......tora.."
"yes"

"uhm....."
"what riyu?"



"did you hear me last night?"
He blushed and so did she.
"Yes...I..did...you heared my reply didnt you..."
"Yeah..."
He leaned over and gave her a kiss.
But this time it was longer.

"Its true."
"I know... you dont have to prove it."
He picked her up like he was holding a baby.

"I have to show you something."
He brought her outside and there....the sunrise...it was so beautifle.
She smiled.

"its so pretty."

Somebody drove by...

"Awww look its our honey...WELL COME BACK FOR HER NOW THAT WE KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE!!"

They both looked frightened.

"tora"
"yes?"

"dont worry...I wont lwt thwm hurt you...even if I die for it..."

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To be continuid......



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RRREPPPPPLLLLYYY PLEASE

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you meant the guy who jumped Tora, is now coming back for her?!?!?! WHAT A FREAK AND A STALKER TOO!!!!! Riyu and Tora are so cute together! ^^

oh!!!!! whats going to happen next?!?!?!?! awsome update!
may i comment though.... when writing your story, please try to remember the 5 W's (who, what , where, when, why) that way the story is easier to follow and understand ^^

Yep, stalker.....
Update soon!

The next day they both woke up at the same time again.

Tora jumped out of bed looking paranoid and hypnotic.
"What Tora?"

She ran down the stairs.

"Tora your going to hurt yourself!"

She opened the door.
There was a car parked in there driveway
Riyu looked out

FLASHBACK

"that was there car..the ones that almost killed us."

Riyu ran to the kitchen and he was standing there talking to his mother
which had just got back from new york

"Why...is he he here mom?"

"Oh, im sorry let me introduce you to someone...this is ryan...he came from the city..he needed a place to stay for a month or two..hes on a buisness trip."

"DONT LISTEN TO HIM MOM! HES LIEING!."

"YOUNG MAN..HE IS NOT LEING AND YOU NEED TO CUT THAT ADDITUDE!"

He walked out of the kitchen and went to tora...whered...she go?

"TORA?!"

He searched for her.
When he went upstairs another guy had ahold of here, "This time your not getting away" He said.

(Note= She was getting dressed when he walked in)

Riyu grabbed her..

"GET AWAY FROM HER NOW, SHE ALREADY GOT HURT ONCE!"

Someone began to walk up the stairs.

He trew her into the bedroom along with riyu

They ened up on top of each other on the bed.

It as his mom that was walking up there.

"Wheres Riyu?"

"Oh your son..well...lets just say..here...looked.."
He opened the door..
His mom got the wrong Idea..
"Oh..Ill leave you two alone then.."

Many times like these began to happen more frequently

Then one moring he caught her in the shower and got in with her when
Riyu was asleep..

She didnt say anything though
But Ryan had got his wish

"Lets do this agian sweetie"

As she was getting dressed so was he..

Riyu had woke up and opened the bathroom door..

He puched him in the face...

"I SAID STAY AWAY FROM HER DAMN IT!"

Riyu pulled out a pocket nife.
"Get away Tora"

She didnt move

And somehow She started turning back into a cat.

Bot riyu and ryan looked confused....

This time she was actually a Tiger
"TORA!"ryan said

She growled

"NO SERIOUSLY TORA!!!"Ryan said again

She kept on growling and wouldnt stop

She was ready to pounce too

Riyu wasnt freaked out though
He got down on the ground and sat beside her

Somehow he knew she was saying stay away

Ryan ran to get his things

"I suddenly have something to do..I wont be staying with you..."
He ran to his car and was gone.

Tora layed down
And within minates she had turned back to normal

"Tora? Are you ok? Tora? Wake up."

He picked her up and sat her on her bed.


TO BE CONTINUID....





REPLY PLEASE

That was a good update. UPDATE again!!!! Please

Ok...im so sorry but I have writers block...
I have NO clue what else to put on here..
please help me..


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uumm...... what if Riyu and Tora got sucked into atime rift, found themselves on another planet with an evil lord who is enslaving all the people of the planet. But they get seperated in the process.............. (you asked me for help, this is me without caffine and me trying not to fall asleep while typing! LOL)

sorry i'm not much help am i? :mint29:

*summons Riyuichi to the keyboard* YOU WILL UPDATE NOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!