hey this is my first fiction. hope ya'll like

The dog demons and cat demons never got along.They both hated the other the ones that were in charge were Inutata and, Inutaisho's brother and the cat demon's queen Sakuya. Inutata had a girl named Ces and Sakuya , who was older than Inutata by the way, had a grandchild named Clyde. The dogs demons and cat demons didn't get into many fights for a while but soon started fighting after Inutata died and Inutaisho took over. Both Ces and Clyde were enemies since birth.( they're the same age ) They were a like in many ways but they never knew it cause it was against the laws to become friends with your enemy or even to know things other than their names. They never got to know anything about the other one and they always fought. They even went to different schools but Ces had to change schools to go to eighth grade......

So thats just a summary about the story. Please tell me if it's good or not. Sorry,I know i'm not good with spelling or coming up with names.

Chapter 1:New school

Ces was getting home from her last day of school of her7th grade year of school at Stepthen School it was an juniorhigh school but the grade school was right next to it.

Kiki: so your going to a new school next year,Ces?

Ces: yea i'm going to miss you next year.

Kiki: me to. hope you have fun. so which school are you going to again?

Ces: to Westman juniorhigh. i'll still see you besides school.

kiki: yea i guess your right.

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Next school year

Clyde: hey what ya'll been up to this summer?

Bob: well me and cindy got engaged.*hugs cindy who's next to him*

Clyde: oh.

Sandy: i've been waiting for school so i could see you.

Clyde: for the millionth time i don't like you.

Sandy: yea but i like you.

Clyde:*rolls eyes*

Teacher: settle down class we have a new student.

I'll continue the rest later. please reply.

Good start, Sry I didn't see it earlier...
Hope you update soon.

I'll update maybe not tommorow but the day after.sorry i'm tired right now and tommorow were throwing a surprise b-day party for my mom.

Aww man...
I hope you update sometime soon!

I'll update if four more people reply.

COME ON PEOPLE, YOU HEARD HER! REPLY!

Here's an update even though i said four more ppl reply. somebody please reply.

Clyde: wonder who the new student is?

Teacher: come in

Ces:*walks in as a human girl with light brown hair in a pony tail and has glasses* ~hope they don't relize who i am~ Hi i'm Emily.

Teacher:Emily will you tell tell us a little bit bout yourself.

Ces(Emily): Um....I like DDR and manga and i don't really dislike anything.

Teacher:ok please take a seat.*emily takes seat*

Ces (Emily i'm just going to call her emily for right now):so far so good

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Later on in hall way

*fabulous 5 walk down the hall with Clyde in front then sandy and obbsi then cindy and bob*

*clyde bumps into emily*

Emily:oww*loses her glasses and only to find them broken*

Clyde:heh*walks on with fabulous 5*

???:hey need some help?*offers hand

Emily:yea thanks.*gets up*

Rei:don't mention it.what jerks thinking they can steal the hall.

Emily:uh can you do me a favor and get something out of my locker.It's the third one on the right.*gives code* it's a long thin box.

Rei:sure*opens locker and gets box*here.

Emily:thanks. *opens box and puts clear contacts in.

End of chapter

By the way Ces dosen't want ppl to know who she is because she's secretly a rock star named Cestina.Clyde's also secretly a rock star but i'll get to that later.

Ces's info:

hanyo form:has dark brown hair with neon highlights with blue eyes.

Cestina form:has dark brown hair with neon highlights with dark green eyes

human form:has light brown hair with blue eyes

Ces is a master of disquies(sp?) she makes disquies in her spare time with hollow grams and different costumes.her human form is a diquies but her Cestina form is her with different color contacts, which she has a varity of.

Sorry if all that was hard to follow. Someone please reply.

Yay! Finally an update!
I wonder what the boys will say if they saw Cestina? :blue20:
Update soon!

great fic hope u can update soon P.S. sesshouyasha & inuyashamagic my friends call me Koala and i concider u friends so u can call me that if u want

great fic hope u can update soon P.S. sesshouyasha & inuyashamagic my friends call me Koala and i concider u friends so u can call me that if u want

ok i'll call you Koala.I'll update tommorow if i get a chance.

cool story........ but i'm confused, so there's demon dogs warring against demon cats....... and the main characters are the grandchildren of the warring demons??? but also rock stars???? ok. still confused, but awsome story! ^^

Inutata and Sakura were different ages.Sakura already had a child when she ruled.So that child had a son named Clyde and Inutata ,who was the the same age as Sakura's child, had a daughter named Ces. Both are secertly rock stars Ces is the only one who knows she is a rock star and Clyde is the only one who knows he is a rock star.And yes they are warring against each other.

Hope that clears it up a bit. I know it's confusing. when i came up with it i was a bit confused at first.

This is confusingly interesting. I like it! It's really cool!
Please update soon!! :angelstar7: :pinkusagi08: :angelstar7: :pinkusagi08:

oh ok now i get it ^^ thank you. i really like it so far! update soon please!

Let's see i'll post not tommorow but the day after cause tommorow my lil bro's got a baseball game and i'm tired right now.For some i'm busy a lot lately.

thats ok, just please dont' forget to update some time

I get a chance to update today.i was going to earlier but something was wrong with the computer.


Chapter 2-secret revealed(to rei at least)

Rei:those guys were jerks.oh wait your new here right?

Ces(emily):yea. so who was that guy.

Rei: that was Clyde his grandmother is the cat demon queen. he goes off bragging because he's a prince. he's also the most popular guy in school.

Ces:oh. damn...now i have to fix my glasses.*puts glasses in locker*

Rei:why do you wear glasses if you have contacts?

Ces:~thinks to self: i can't tell her who i am~uhh.....i just do.

Rei:ok.*looks at her clothes*after class i'll go to your house and then we'll get you a new wardrobe

Ces:~thinks:busted~

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Later on that evening

Rei:so show me your wardrobe first.

Ces:*opens closest that show geeky kind of clothes*here

Rei:* goes to back of closet*what's this*knocks on steel door*

Ces:~thinks:guess there's no chocie but to explain~ come in *opens steel door to show cestina's closet*

Rei:wow a replica of cestina's closet

Ces: :mint29: uhh it isn't a replica*pulls off pony tail to show dark brown hair and neon stripes*

Rei*turns around just in time to see Ces* your Cestina?!

Ces:yeah, but please don't tell anyone

Rei: i won't as long as you keep this promise.never be friends with clyde,ever.

Ces:ok.~thinks:i already can't because of the law~

Rei:i think we should get revenge on clyde for earlier. :crazybunny10:

Ces:ok*Rei whispers plan to her*

end of chapter
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Clyde's info:

hanyo form:has short orange hair with golden eye's.

his popstar form:has orange hair up to his butt with golden eyes.

human apperance:black shaggy hair with green eyes
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hope you enjoyed the update. i'll update not tommorow again but the next day.

Awesome!
Update!
Hm, I didn't thing they would find out so soon....

sweet hope u can update soon :angelstar7: :crazybunny10: :angelstar7: :crazybunny10: :blue20: :crazybunny10: :angelstar7: :blue20: :angelstar7: :blue20:

update soon please!!!

I'll update later if i can.

Yay! i can't wait! well........ we i can wait, but you know what i mean.

Here you go.

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Chapter3- at the mall

Ces(as emily):why are we at the mall. i have cool clothes like you saw.

Rei:yea i know were just here to have some fun and i was bored .Why are you still wearing those geeky clothes.

Ces:1. if i was cestina we'd get run over by fans 2. what if someone at school spots us.

Rei:good points :mint29:

Ces:*rolls eyes*

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with the fabulous five

Sandy:which store shall we go to?

Clyde:~thinks:man she gets on my nerves~

Bob:*reads Clyde's mind**whispers* If you don't want to be with ditch her.

Clyde:easy for you to say, her parents work for my grandma.if she found out i'd be grounded.

Bob: oh yeah forgot.

Clyde:heh. whatever.

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at american eagle

*Rei and Ces talk about trap*

*Clyde walks in*

Clyde:look it's Rei and that weird girl,bob

Bob: yeah so.

Clyde:wonder what their talking about? *drags Bob behind table easedroppng on the girls conversation.*

Ces: sounds cool.

Rei: yeah Clyde will be blown out of his mind.It's the perfect trap.

Clyde(still behind table): so trying to trick me are they. Well we'll have a little surprise for them.

end of chapter
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Bob's info:

human form:skinny with blonde hair and brown eyes

hanyo form: buff with blonde hair and green eyes
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sorry it's short. i got writer's block right now and a head ache.

Uhoh, more trouble....
Update!

oh that can't be good......... unless the girls know that they are being watched....... the suspence is killing me! please update soon! ^^

sorry i'm having writers block right now. i'll update sometime this week

Cool Story, I like it.
Hope you can update soon!

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Ja Ne!! (^_^)

Yay! Another person!
Udpate when you kill the writer's block!

sorry guys i'm gonna update tommorow ok. i got finals this week.

stupid writers block. its a menace to society! lol

here's the next chapter

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at school

teacher: today we will be doing a project. we will be making a habitat with the boxes you broght in.

Clyde:*whispers to bob* they thought the could trick me but they have another thing coming. see i'll pretend i'm going throw something away and then when i pass by i'll accedently put glue on emily's head when i pass the next time i'll drop this box on her head.*shows*

Bob: uh ok but if you get in trouble i didn't have anything to do with.

Clyde: *pass by emily and drops glue on her head*~thinks:perfect she didn't notice~ pass by second time pretend to trip and drops box of confetti on her hed*

Ces(Emily): uck.

teacher:what happend? oh emily go clean up.clyde say your sorry

Clyde:sorry(very sarcastic voice)

Ces(emily):*runs to bathroom*

Rei:*follows her*

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In bathroom

Ces(emily): *takes off wig as Rei comes in*

Rei: damn him.

Ces(emily):damn it took me an hour to make this and i can't go back in there like this

Rei: i'll ask the teacher if you can go home for the rest of the day because the confetti got really stuck in your hair.Ok?

Ces(emily):ok

Rei:*leaves*

end of chapter
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sorry i got really bad writters block right now and A Lot of stuff going on his week.

S'okay, You can update whenever you want.

yup i agree with SesshouYasha
WOW Clyde did something that only kindergardeners will do. how low can he get?

I know. He should BE in kindergarten.......

Me: Stupid writers block.......... I'M GONNA KILL YOU!

Writer's block: Eeeep! *runs*

Well his character's supposed to be like that Clyde also gets very bad grades in everything except for math. I'm surprised the didn't hold him back.

Writers block:nah nah nah

Me: I'M GONNA KILLL YOU*runs after writers block.*

I might update saturday i would tommorow but i got a party to go to.

Aww man..... It's okay. It's worth the wait.

yup ^^ so what grade are they in??? i was thinking that they were in highschool....

They are in highschool. i was just saying he acts very childish sometimes.

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In bathroom

Ces(with dog ears showing):*sighs* damn i wish rei would hurry up.

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In hall way

Bob:*passing out papers to teachers*Clyde you know what, i thought you could come up with something better than putting confetti in the girl's hair.

Clyde:*passing out papers with bob*you know i'm not good with coming up with plans.

Bob: i know. i just thought you could come up with somthing better.

Clyde: heh. whatever.*looks at paper* so a play huh?cool i'm gonna be the lead star in it

Bob: your the star every year. lets spilt up so we can finnish passing out these papers.

Clyde:ok*gos opposite way*

Bob:*hears a sigh*huh?*follows where sighs coming from*the girl's bathroom?must just be emily i saw Rei pass by earlier*peaks in and sees dog ears from behind the sink*so she's a dog demon huh.

end of chapter
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i know it's short i'll post the rest tommorow.