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Title: Down The Well
Description: inuyasha's son he dosent know about


secret_miko - June 13, 2006 05:20 AM (GMT)
Ok new fiction my other one..the new one i started i was in a cruddy mood so i'm not gonna do that one anymore xD but this idea popped into my head.


Chapter 1


Inuyasha's POV

6 years...6 years since I'd last seen Kagome, and I still don't understand what happend. It was fine between me and Kagome. She had gone home for two days and said she'd be back afterwards, but she didn't come back, and I couldnt go get her. The well had closed up for some reason and with that, Naraku had also dissappeard. I snapped out of my thoughts as Shippo jumped on my head. "what are you doing here Inuyasha"? "none of your damn buisness squirt"! I hit him on the head. Sure I wanted Kagome to come back but...that wouldnt happen I knew it..and yet I still came to the well.


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Hiedyo's POV

I was sitting on the couch watching TV when my mom came into the house. "Mom!" I said as I jumped to my feet I dashed at her and hugged her. She smiled at me. "You ready to go"? "go"? "Honey it's winter vacation now I'm off work and were going to grandma's house remember I've got our bags in the car" "That fucking sucks..I wanted to stay here this winter, it takes one hour to get to grandma's place" "Hiedyo what did I tell you about the language" I pouted "sorry" I stomped out of our apartment and got into the car.

Kagome's POV

I sighed as I got into our land rover jeep. To tell the truth I didnt want to go to moms place either. It brings back to many memories, but mother had to insist on seeing her quarter demon grandson. I sighed and started the car. Its hard to smile anymore.

Sota's POV

I saw Kagome pull up into the driveway and I waved "Hey sis!" "hi Sota" "UNCLE"! I heard Hiedyo yell. He ran at me and jumped on me accidently injecting his claws within my shoulders. "gah.." I stated. He jumped off. "Oh No I'm sorry uncle it was a accident" Kagome ran over "Oh my god sota are you ok" "ya..im..peachy..tell mom to drive me to the hospital ok" Kagome nodded and ran inside. "we'll be back later Kagome" "ok mom" I heard Kagome say .grandpa me and mom went to the hospital probably for stitches..this happens every time they come over. (lol)

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Kagome's POV

I sat down on the couch and pulled out my laptop. "I thought you said you were off work" I heard Hiedyo say annoyed. "I have to get some papers in for Mr. Tagawa by the end of break" "thats what you always say...I'm going outside" "ok..make sure you put your hat on..and cover up those claws and ears" I called after him.

Hiedyo's POV

I went outside. It was snowing I sat down in a clump of snow and sighed. "I hate that Tagawa guy always keeping mom late and giving her special assignments..Its Christmas break and he's still got her going like mad. I'll make mom stop working and come play with me...its not fair that she's always working" I got up and brushed the snow off my pants. I looked over at the old shed and something caught my eye. "hmm the door to that shed is never open but today there's a crack in the door" I couldnt help but go in there and look around. "wow this place sure is freaking dusty..must be old..hehe maybe as old as grand geezer himself" :blue20: I walked in and went down the stairs. "whats this old well"

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Inuyasha's POV

Shippo and I were walking back to the hut when something caught my nose...and it was at the well.

PinkCottonCandyPrincess - June 13, 2006 10:49 AM (GMT)
hey this is pretty good...update again soon

Sankontesou - June 13, 2006 10:51 AM (GMT)
Ooh...this is good!! stupid kid....why the hell would he want to go down into a well n e ways!...lol...please update again soon

ryoko - June 13, 2006 10:58 AM (GMT)
THIS IS REALLY INTERESTING !!!!!!soooooooo................hiedyo 's 6 then??

Sailor-Kagome - June 13, 2006 01:15 PM (GMT)
UPDATE PLEASE!!! ^ ^

Sankontesou - June 13, 2006 07:22 PM (GMT)
please update

Sesshomaruluv_92 - June 13, 2006 07:39 PM (GMT)
Please update! It sounds really good so far :pinkusagi08:

lil_miss_yasha - June 13, 2006 08:06 PM (GMT)
great start! very interesting! lol Hiedyo's cute, but I agree with Sankontesu, finding wells and jumping into them is not really my idea of fun. :pinkusagi17: update soon! :angelstar22:

princess sunaaa - June 13, 2006 08:27 PM (GMT)
UPDATE WHEN YOU CAN!

Sankontesou - June 13, 2006 10:43 PM (GMT)
please update again soon

secret_miko - June 13, 2006 11:25 PM (GMT)
he didnt jump it lol he was just there looking into it and ya he's 6 years old i'll update now)))


chapter 2

Shippo's POV

I saw Inuyasha stop in his tracks and sniff the air. I sniffed it aswell. "Hey Inuyasha that scent isnt familliar its coming from the old well" Inuyasha sniffed the air more and ran at the well.

Inuyasha's POV

This scent...it smells like Kagome...but...its different. I came to a stop at the well and sniffed around. Shippo ran next to me. "Inuyasha nobody's here" "I know runt"! The scent was there but the person wasnt whats going on.

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Hiedyo's POV

I looked into the well and coverd my nose. "Feh...it smells old too" I pulled off my gloves and gripped onto the well with my claws and peered inside. "GRRR its to dark to see anything" "HIEDYO TIME TO COME IN NOW"! I heard my mom yell. I let go of the well and let myself down on my feet. I turned to go back home when I slipped on something and fell into the well. "GAHH"! A weird light flashed and I felt like I was floating.

Kagome's POV

"HIEDYO"! I went outside and walked around the front lawn "Hiedyo young man come here this instant this isnt a game"! I walked around the front yard and went to the sacred tree as I used to call it I sat down in the bare grass under it for the tree protected it from the snow. I looked around then I noticed the door to the well was opend. "oh..oh no" I mummbled I got up and ran into the well house. "HIEDYO"! I ran to the well and looked around I looked at the ground and saw my sons gloves. "impossible"... I looked in the well and was about to run out for some help when I slipped on Buyo's old cat toy and fell into the well "Ahh".

(well thats all for now)

lil_miss_yasha - June 13, 2006 11:29 PM (GMT)
great update! loved it! :angelstar7: maybe now inuyasha is starting to get y Hiedyos scent smells like kagome. :blue20: wait, its inuyasha nevermind :pinkusagi17: update sooN! :angelstar22:

young_laydee - June 13, 2006 11:32 PM (GMT)
updatee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

shipporox21 - June 13, 2006 11:51 PM (GMT)
I like cheese

shipporox21 - June 13, 2006 11:51 PM (GMT)
Oh ya and update

secret_miko - June 13, 2006 11:51 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (shipporox21 @ Jun 13 2006, 06:51 PM)
I like cheese

:gaara01: nice to no.....

Sankontesou - June 14, 2006 01:20 AM (GMT)
wicked update...update again soon

ryoko - June 14, 2006 01:57 AM (GMT)
AWESOMENESS!!!!! :angelstar7: :angelstar7: :angelstar7:

ryoko - June 14, 2006 02:00 AM (GMT)
QUOTE
user posted image  is this picture not sexy???
YES........IT IS VERY SEXY....

Sailor-Kagome - June 14, 2006 02:06 AM (GMT)
UPDATE PLEASE!!! >^_^<

Sankontesou - June 14, 2006 02:08 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (ryoko @ Jun 13 2006, 09:00 PM)
QUOTE
user posted image  is this picture not sexy???
YES........IT IS VERY SEXY....

I KNOW EH??!! please update again soon....(did u know that u r the only person to actually tell me that they agree with me??..lol...:) :noodles:

ichinichi - June 14, 2006 03:18 AM (GMT)
why don't you tell me anything anymore, miko?! *cries*

on a side note, nice ficcy!!!!!! Update soon ^-^

1/2human_1/2demon_luver - June 14, 2006 04:11 AM (GMT)
good story plz update

winged kagome.....the real one - June 14, 2006 12:44 PM (GMT)
Don't double post noob

UPDATE PEOPLES PERSON!!!

Sankontesou - June 14, 2006 12:52 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (winged kagome.....the real one @ Jun 14 2006, 07:44 AM)
Don't double post noob

UPDATE PEOPLES PERSON!!!

who the frick are u calling a noob??? me or shipporx-sumthing-er-other... thats a bit of a ude way to say it!!! lol ^_^ ... you no...if u would have quoted who u were talking to/about...then i wouldn't be getting such a big confusion look on my face...lol... :) :noodles: ... and if u were talking to me then you are really not nice...lol....if u see my wicked picture of Sesshoumaru TWICE that was because someone "quoted" it to tell me they like it...so it appeared twice...(but if u weren't talking to me then just completely ignore the above ^_^) sorry...im in a bad mood....didn't sleep much last night and i am at school, so that pisses me off too!! update again soon please :) :noodles:

Sesshomaruluv_92 - June 14, 2006 08:35 PM (GMT)
Please update :cactus25:

sess11 - June 15, 2006 01:55 AM (GMT)
this is a nice fic i like it

Sesshomaruluv_92 - June 15, 2006 02:34 AM (GMT)
Please update really soon..... if you do I'll cross you off my death list of a whole day!!!! :bear09:

Sankontesou - June 15, 2006 03:35 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Sesshomaruluv_92 @ Jun 14 2006, 09:34 PM)
Please update really soon..... if you do I'll cross you off my death list of a whole day!!!! :bear09:

see now THAT'S motivation...lol...please update again soon!!! :) :noodles:

secret_miko - June 17, 2006 08:32 PM (GMT)
Chapter 3

Hiedyo's POV

I woke up with a headache at the bottom of the well. I stood up and winced "aw **** it I broke a nail"!! I looked around the bottom of the well and caught my moms scent. I turned around and she was on the ground. "mom!" I ran to her "are you ok wake up"! She moved a little and woke up. "Hie..dyo" she moved around and stood up and looked down at me. "Didnt I tell you not to come into the well house"! I looked away "It was open I couldnt help myself"

Kagome's POV

I sighed. "Lets get back into the house ok" "YA..I'm really hungry..can we have some rammen!" I smiled "Perhaps..If uncle Sota had less then twenty stitches this time. He pouted "Damn it!" We started climbing up the well when I got to the top I sat on the edge and helped my son up. I looked around and gasp. "this..this..this is the feudal era..." I whisperd. "KAGOME"!!!!!!!! I heard a very famillier voice yell. I got up and turned around. :0_0: "SHIPPO"! he ran at me and jumped in my arms. "Oh Kagome is it really you"! I laughed "it sure is shippo"!

Shippo's POV

I clung onto Kagome and hugged her I even felt some tears come into my eye's. "Hey Mom..who's that" I jumped off of Kagome and looked at a strange looking young boy who looked almost identical to Inuyasha. "Say Kagome..why did he just call you Mom" I asked. She blushed "Shippo this is Hiedyo..Hiedyo sweet heart this is shippo...Shippo this is my son" :0_0: "but..but..he..he.looked almost exactly like..INUYASHA"!

Hiedyo's POV

:...: "who the hell is Inuyasha"?..."Kagome is he also Inuyasha's Pup"!?! asked that Shippo guy. "GRRR would you shut up"! I bonked him on the head. "AHH HE IS INUYASHA'S SON"! "GRRRRR WHAT YOU CALL ME YOU PUNY RUNT"! I started chacing him "GET BACK HERE AND FIGHT LIKE A GUY"!!!!!!

Kagome's POV

:...: ...I cant say he isnt.....What am I doing here any way. The well closed up..a really long time ago...Why am I here now. I turned to the sacred tree and I saw a man with a red kimono walk up to me. "Inu..Inuyasha" "Hi Kagome"

Inuyasha's POV

:angelstar7: She's really here'!!!! I starred into her eye's and smiled. She smiled back "I cant believe I'm here" she said "Ya...me too" I heard screaming then Shippo jumped onto my shoulder and something crashed into my leg. "Get him away from me"! Shippo yelled. I looked down and saw a young boy. My eye's grew, he had black ears with black hair streaked with white at the tips he had a pair of claws and violet eye's like mine when I turn human. Kagome smiled "Um..Inuyasha this is Hiedyo..and Hiedyo..this is your father"...I couldnt help it..I put on a small grin. "My son"? I asked Kagome. "um..well..yes."

Hiedyo's POV

I looked at this weirdo. I didnt like how he was looking at my mom. I jumped between them. "Back Off!" I growled "Hiedyo.." I hears my mom say. He squated down to my height. "Feh..you aint gonna make me back off pup" "WHAT YOU CALL ME"! I stuck out my claws. "I may look tiny to you buster but I got damn well good claws"! He started to laugh "Ya well look at yours compaird to mine" He stuck out his claws they were huge and..sharp..and..scary compaired to my puny ones. I backed away and hid behind my mom. "I want to go home mommy I dont like him..his claws are to big" My mom smiled at me. "He wont hurt you Hiedyo just come out and say hi without threatning anyone" "no! I want to leave I want grandma, uncle Sota and even grandgeezer I dont like him or this place lets go"!

Kagome's POV

I sighed. "well its getting a bit dark out...." I wanted to stay with Inuyasha and see the others...but..maybe this want the best thing to do for Hiedyo. Inuyasha rested his hand on my shoulder. "your staying..at least sty for a little while" I nodded my head yes. "ok we'll stay" "NO!" stated Hiedyo. "Honey I've made up my mind we'll leave tomorrow ok" "I'm sleeping by the well then...OUTSIDE IN THE COLD"! Inuyasha let go of my shoulder and started walking back to the village. "Come on Kagome if he wants to sleep out here in the icy cold snow surrounded by bloodthirst demons with no food and little clothing thats fine with me" I knew what he was doing and I smiled and played along with it. "Ok Inuyasha..Hiedyo you be carful and dont get killed ok honey"

Hiedyo's POV
'kill..killed"! "Oh ya" stated Inumasha or whatever his name was "its easy to die out here" I ran to my mom "MOMMY I DONT WANT TO DIE"! "Then stay with me and you'll be fine" I nodded my head with a sigh.

Sailor-Kagome - June 17, 2006 08:38 PM (GMT)
AH HAHAHA!!!! ^ ^ Thats funny. Update when you can please!!! ^ ^

Sexy_Inuyasha - June 17, 2006 09:14 PM (GMT)
Okay..I WAS going to post my fan fic. But now I'm not because yours is better than mine, Sabine. >O

Sankontesou - June 18, 2006 03:02 AM (GMT)
that was soo great!! update again soon!

ryoko - June 18, 2006 04:19 PM (GMT)
awwwwwwwww,kawaii -ness!!!!

Sesshomaruluv_92 - June 18, 2006 06:32 PM (GMT)
Pweeze updwate!!! :lemon14:

shipporox21 - June 18, 2006 10:12 PM (GMT)
You suck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You HAcker !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111

secret_miko - June 18, 2006 11:20 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (shipporox21 @ Jun 18 2006, 05:12 PM)
You suck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You HAcker !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111

lol it wasnt my idea xD :blue20:

lil_miss_yasha - June 19, 2006 12:57 AM (GMT)
great updateS! love them! :angelstar7: I especially like the part when Heidyo called Kagome grandfather "grandgezzer' lol that was pretty funny :blue20: lol and when he was pleading to kagome that he didnt want to die :pinkusagi17: update when you can :angelstar22:

secret_miko - June 19, 2006 04:08 AM (GMT)
thanks for the replies guys ^_^


chapter 4


Kagome's POV

I smiled as I walked into the hut. It looks the same as it used to I thought to myself. I sat down and Sango gave me a hug "Oh my gosh Kagome its really you"! I laughed "yeah it really is Sango where's Miroku?" I looked around the hut when Miroku walked in "is it true has lady Kagome really come back"? I stood up "hi Miroku yes I'm right here. He came and huged me. I felt his hand sink down my back I quickley slapped him "YOU PERVERT! YOU HAVENT CHANGED ONE BIT"!

Later on...

Miroku's POV

We were all gatherd around in a circle in Kead's hut I starred at Hiedyo and laughed "well I've always believed I'd be the one with a child but looks like Kagome was busy" I saw her blush.


Inuyasha's POV

If he dares try anything with Kagome I'll kill him... :gaara01:


Hiedyo's POV

And I thought I was weird.....what a bunch of freaks :gaara01:


Sango's POV

There he goes again.... :gaara01: I looked at Kagome and smiled "so Kagome isnt it hard to keep after Hiedyo if there arent demons in your era"? "Yes...but he has a hat on most of the time and if people ask we tell them he has a wierd illness that cant go away" "oh I see" I looked at Hiedyo..I can tell he's bad temperd, bad mouthed and loud..but shy...he's exactly like his father. He even looks like him too.


Hiedyo's POV

I yawned and sat in my moms lap "Mommy I'm tired" She toyed with my ears and smiled "I'm not surprised go to sleep honey" I yawned again and my eye's seeped closed and I drifted into sleep on my moms lap.

Inuyasha's POV

I leaned up against the wall "Me, Sango and shippo are going to go out for a while we have some buisness in the next village and we can use shippo coming with us so we'll be back soon" "alright Miroku...Sango stay alert" said Kagome as she laughed. "We'll be going now". I saw them all walk out of the hut. I turned my look to Kagome she smiled at me. "Don't you want to come hold your son"? she asked. I blushed "He dosent seem to like me that much and he's asleep..wouldnt want him to wake up" "oh come now" said Kagome frowning "he's just not used to you..he dosent like any guy that comes around me, he's a bit over protective thats all" she paused for a moment and smiled "but once he gets used to you and grows to love you as he loves me he's gonna jump into your arms and it may be a bit painful cause of the claws but..its a nice feeling to know you have someone you have to protect and love vise versa" I glarred at her speachless...I croaked a smile and scooted over to her. She picked up Hiedyo slowly and placed him in my lap.

Kagome's POV

I smirked when I saw Hiedyo move in closer to Inuyasha, I saw Inuyasha smile too. "mmm..thats..warm...." he mumbled. I laughed "see Inuyasha he already likes you" "yeah......" He said grinning.


Hiedyo's POV

It was warm....my mom smelt weird though..I squirmed around and opend my eye's "CRAP!!!!!" I stated when I saw that Inukiysha or whatever!!!!! I jumped off of him and ran to my mom. "whats the Mater Hiedyo you seemed relaxed and comfertable on your fathers lap. "KEH YA RIGHT"!!!

Inuyasha's POV

:gaara01: What was his problem I'm his father and he should be looking up to me instead of fearing me...."Hiedyo go apologize to Inuyasha" "No way am I apologizing to that freak"! "HIEDYO"! :...: Fine..he want to play it like that I dont give a crap lets play I'll show him respect for me if its the last thing I do even if I have to challenge him to get it!!!!

Sankontesou - June 19, 2006 04:28 AM (GMT)
hahaha..that was wicked...update again when u get the chance!!




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