Okay... It took forever to write my first chapter and make it sound better than my first disaterous attempt. So here you go! ENJOY!! And now, The Life of A Teenage School Girl. ~Invader~Zim
Chapter1.
I sat in the back seat with my boyfriend, Dakedo Nakigao, as my mother drove to the closest amusement park. My little sister, Kiana sat up front with my mother. Oh, I never introduced myself! Haha how silly of me! My name is Ayumi Dokoi Kioku! I live with my mother and sister in Tokyo, Japan. My mother has been raising my sister and I beings she's a single mother. When my sister, Kiana Mawari Kioku was born, our fater left (damn that bastard!!) But we're doing just fine! Anyways, back to the back seat on our way to the amusement park!!
Mama parked in a space close to the entrance gate. I climbed out after Dakedo. The gate guy scanned our season passes and we got in! 'YES!!' I thought to myself. 'AN ENTIRE DAY WITH DAKEDO!! YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!' I took Dakedo's hand and ran to the closest shop. "What time do we have to meet back up with your mom?" asked Dakedo, checking his watch. I took a sip of my cappuchino (sp?) "1:30. Why?" I asked, staring at him with big anime eyes. "Because...." began Dakedo, sticking his hand in my back jean short pocket. "I want me some Ayumi time." he added, kissing me on the lips. I smiled and kissed him back. We broke apart and walked on, both of us smiling. A teddy bear display caught my eyes. I ran over, dragging Dakedo with me. I quickly found the biggest teddy, picked it up and gave it a big bear squeeze hug saying, "SQUEE!!"
Dakedo took ahold of the teddy bear and attempted to pull it away, but I squeezed it somemore. This was my way of saying, "I love this! I want this SOO much! Please buy it for me!" Dakedo gave me a look that clearly said, "NO!!" I gave him my big puppy-dog anime eyes, I knew he couldn't say no to. "Oh alright!" he finally gave in. He paid for my teddy, and I gave him a hug and a kiss which he returned. Dakedo seemed a little grumpy, so I bought him a Tokyo ballcap. It was black with silver stitching and red characters that said "Tokyo" on it.







I have to go... please read, review and ENJOY! I'll be back for more! Ja Ne Minna!
Invader~Zim

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Chapter 1 *cont*
After that, we headed for the cafe to meet Okaasan and Kiana. Dakedo's hand was in my back pocket. I saw Okaasan and Kiana. "Ayumi! Dakedo! Over here!" called Okaasan, motioning for us to come over. Dakaedo and I walked over, I noticed Kiana was wearing Mickey Mouse ears, and she was eyeing Jonathan (my teddy), with big, round, anime eyes. I sat down and put Jonathan between Dakedo and my chair. Kiana got a kid's cheeseburger with fries and a rootbeer. I ordered a chicken sandwich with chicken nuggets (yay chicken!!) and a Jammocha(sp?).
Okaasan got a ceasar salad and orange juice. Dakedo got a roast beef sandwich, which he let me take a bite of, and a Pepsi.
We left the cafe at 1:55 to go to the parade. I sat in Dakedo's lap and let Kiana squish and squeeze Jonathan, once again, MY TEDDY! :) I love teddy bears. :) When the parade started, Kiana was sitting up in the front close to the road, while Jonathan lay abandoned on the ground. I hopped down, bonked Kiana on the head and brushed of Jonathan.Mickey Mouse's float went by and Minnie was with him. The rest of the parade was pretty boring, not unless you can count when Dakedo threw a pinecone and hit Donald Duck in the head, causing him to topple over and all the little kids to scream. Dakedo and I were in silent fits of giggles all the way back to the car and home.


That's all I can fit into this session. Hope you all that read and ACTUALLY REPLY enjoy. Take your time with those cookies. ^^ -Invader~Zim