Title: Goodbye My Love
Description: Kagome dies...How will Inu react?
CrazedMiko - June 18, 2006 03:04 PM (GMT)
Goodbye My Love
(Inuyasha and Kagome Fanfiction)
She's flat on her back on the ground wearing her school uniform. She bleeds from numerous wounds on her body. Her vision becomes blurry. Breathing hurts as she turns her head towards the sound of pounding feet that splash up the rain that fell during the battle.
"Inuyasha..." she whispers hoarsely.
"Kagome! No! Tell me your OK!"
"I... I'm sorry Inuyasha. I failed you."
"No! Kagome don't talk like that. Ok? You'll be fine. I'll take you to Kaede you will be better!"
He falls to his knees and gathers her close to his body. He wraps his fire rat clothing around her small frame and starts to run. The smoke is thick from the last battle, the final battle, and the final fall of Naraku. Inuyasha had finally beaten him but when he turned back he saw a demon of Naraku's deliver a final blow to Kagome. Inuyasha didn't hesitate to brutally kill the demon then go and run to Kagome's side.
"Inuyasha... it is too late. There is nothing... nothing anyone... can do."
"Kagome? Kagome!"
"I... I..."
"Shh... save your strength."
"...love you."
A pause.
"...I love you too Kagome."
"Oh," she sighs with tears in her eyes. "I have waited so long to hear those words. Please tell my family... that I love them. Sango, Miroku... and Kaede... Oh... it hurts Inuyasha."
"Shh shh..."
"Kiss me, one last time..."
He kisses her. It's sweet, yet painful to feel her lips trembling against his. He hears the gurgling sound in her throat and sees the blood being coughed up. She takes one last breath while looking into his golden eyes. She takes his hand and holds it to her heart.
“Find peace... Inuyasha. I... will always be with you...”
Then she is gone. Inuyasha stares in horror as he no longer senses her life source within her body.
"Kagome! Baby wake up!"
has no one told you she's not breathing?
hello I’m your mind giving you someone to talk to
hello
'No. She is ok. She is just, resting,' thought Inuyasha as he ran. Yes, Kaede will help her and all will be well! They will think of this day and rejoice on her being ok. Inuyasha will hold her, kiss her, and look into those eyes again. She was just resting is all.
if I smile and don't believe
soon I know I’ll wake from this dream
Inuyasha arrives at the village and goes to the old woman's hut. She looks over Kagome and shakes her head.
"What are you shaking your head for, you old hag! Help her!"
"Inuyasha. I am afraid that it is too late. Please, let me help you with that cut on your brow."
"No! Help her! See? I think she just moved, please. Please..."
don't try to fix me I’m not broken
hello I’m the lie living for you so you can hide
don't cry
Inuyasha falls upon his knees and looks at the girl that fell into his life. She was so beautiful and he thought of the first time he saw her. Those eyes, lips, and soft skin. When he saw her bathing he lusted but controlled his feelings. The day he found out that he loved her was the day he stopped thinking of her as Kikyou's resurrected self.
suddenly I know I’m not sleeping
"No..." whispers Inuyasha as he brings his hands to his face.
Tears are in his eyes as he rests his arms against the pallet that held Kagome's still body. His body shakes as the silent tears turn into sobs. He grabs her hand and squeezes it to keep the link between them. She was gone.
He didn't know what to do, for there was no one else to avenge her death. He would just kill other demons while finishing the quest for the shards. Did he want the shards after all of this? Was her death worth finding those shards? No... It wasn't.
'Why her, and not me?' he thinks as he continues to look at the love he had lost for the second time in his life.
“I am alone...”
hello I’m still here
all that's left of yesterday
END
:cryriver:
I know this is a very sad one-shot fanfic. Sorry for all you people who think I suck right now.
Sailor-Kagome - June 18, 2006 03:12 PM (GMT)
I LOVE IT!!! >.< :cryriver: :cryriver: :cryriver: :cryriver: :cryriver: :cryriver: :cryriver:
You have to write more!!! >.< What about about Sessoumaru?!?!! >.<
childsnapdragon - June 18, 2006 04:37 PM (GMT)
that was so sad !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:cryriver:
Sankontesou - June 18, 2006 06:17 PM (GMT)
OMG!! That was soo sad!! you've got to write more!! please!! your such a good writer!! please!! write more!!
Inuyasha_Fan - June 18, 2006 06:32 PM (GMT)
Ya know if inu's wish came true about being him not kagome,kagome will start wishing the same thing then inu would it again and kagome will too.Then it will go back and fourth like a death wave!!!! :0_0:
Sesshomaruluv_92 - June 18, 2006 06:50 PM (GMT)
Oh NOOOOOO!!! Not Kagome!! Please update!! :0_0:
Shippo_666 - June 18, 2006 06:57 PM (GMT)
Lyrics in that story.
Song: Hello
Artist: Evanesance
Next time, credit the music so people don't think you stole it.
Playground school bell rings again
Rainclouds come to play again
Has no one told you she's not breathing
Hello
I'm your mind giving you someone to talk to
Hello
If I smile and don't believe
Soon I know I'll wake from this dream
Don't try to fix me, I'm not broken
Hello
I'm the lie living for you so you can hide
Don't cry
Suddenly I know I'm not sleeping
Hello
I'm still here, all that's left of yesterday
Sesshomaruluv_92 - June 18, 2006 07:11 PM (GMT)
Pweeze Updwate k :lemon14:
CrazedMiko - June 18, 2006 07:33 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Shippo_666 @ Jun 18 2006, 01:57 PM) |
Lyrics in that story.
Song: Hello
Artist: Evanesance
Next time, credit the music so people don't think you stole it.
Playground school bell rings again Rainclouds come to play again Has no one told you she's not breathing Hello I'm your mind giving you someone to talk to Hello
If I smile and don't believe Soon I know I'll wake from this dream Don't try to fix me, I'm not broken Hello I'm the lie living for you so you can hide Don't cry
Suddenly I know I'm not sleeping Hello I'm still here, all that's left of yesterday |
thanks 4 pointing that out to me :yellowjelly:
Sesshomaruluv_92 - June 18, 2006 07:56 PM (GMT)
Please update for your #1 fan!!! :angelstar7:
young_laydee - June 27, 2006 12:45 AM (GMT)
OMG how sad!!!!!!!!! KAGOME! Y U LEFT INUYASHA>.<! well ok.... well...... updatee
dark lord - June 27, 2006 12:59 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Inuyasha_Fan @ Jun 18 2006, 11:32 AM) |
| Ya know if inu's wish came true about being him not kagome,kagome will start wishing the same thing then inu would it again and kagome will too.Then it will go back and fourth like a death wave!!!! :0_0: |
na more like a death circle
Inuyasha_Fan - June 27, 2006 01:09 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (dark lord @ Jun 26 2006, 07:59 PM) |
| QUOTE (Inuyasha_Fan @ Jun 18 2006, 11:32 AM) | | Ya know if inu's wish came true about being him not kagome,kagome will start wishing the same thing then inu would it again and kagome will too.Then it will go back and fourth like a death wave!!!! :0_0: |
na more like a death circle
|
Waves go back and fourth,that's what I mean
lil_miss_yasha - June 27, 2006 01:15 AM (GMT)
omg this is great! i loves it! :angelstar7: omg this is so interesting! and yet. :pinkusagi08: OMG this is so sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!! * tear drops* poor INuyasha! awww he must be hurting so much right now! :pinkusagi08: update when you can! :angelstar22:
Flowermaiden411 - June 27, 2006 10:33 AM (GMT)
:angelstar7: Update dammit. o\_/o. I will give you a hug. (>^^)>
childsnapdragon - June 27, 2006 04:19 PM (GMT)
i think it was over you guy's! :...: :...:
Hope_Higurashi - July 6, 2008 10:20 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Sailor-Kagome @ Jun 18 2006, 10:12 AM) |
I LOVE IT!!! >.< :cryriver: :cryriver: :cryriver: :cryriver: :cryriver: :cryriver: :cryriver:
You have to write more!!! >.< What about about Sessoumaru?!?!! >.< |
UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! IZ.......SO......SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD! INUUUUUUUUU! POOR BABY! :cryriver:
ichinichi - July 6, 2008 10:23 PM (GMT)
... Don't bump two-year old topics, mk?
ryoko kagome - July 6, 2008 11:35 PM (GMT)
I was with you until the mind part... This is good, would be nice expanded minus the lyrics... unless you find another way to work them in. I teared up, the dialogue is fantastic.
EDIT:
| QUOTE |
ichinichi Posted on Jul 6 2008, 06:23 PM ... Don't bump two-year old topics, mk? |
oops... didn't see till now...