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Title: The life of a Writer/Detective
Description: Like the title says...


Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 5, 2006 12:53 AM (GMT)
*Intro*

My name's Makera, Amiro. I'm turning 15 soon. Unfortunately, it's during school. The first day of school isn't that far away, but I still have time to relax. Anyway, my friends and I are all going to different high schools. It's sad to think that I'll be all by myself on the first day of school. New meat on to the territory. The life of a writer isn't as easy as it sounds. Oh, I almost forgot, I am a writer. Along with a detective. This is a life story about me and going through changesand everything. Here's a brief desciption on what I look like...

Name: Makera, Amiro (Last, First)
Age: 14 (turning 15 soon)
Future High School: Tarolani High
Hair: Light Brown, Highlights Faiding
Eyes: Brown/light brown in sunlight
Sex/Genger: Female

Bio: As young girl, I've always loved writting. My elementary school teachers helped me the best they could, but only up to a certain point. They would let me read all of my essays and short stories to the class. Boy, does time flies. I do wear glasses, however. People think of me.....well, let's just not say. Some boys think I'm sute.....some think otherwise. I have to admit, I am indeed a nerd. Being the daughter of two official nerds. Oh and as my experience of being a detective...Ive only justrecently started. But I'm, quite good at it, considering that I almost got myself...uh...nevermind. Anyway, with my rectangular/circular dark blue glasses, I shall begin with my story, starting up next.......


Alright, here's my new fic. Please don't kill me for having so many! ^^;; Um...funny thing about the descrtiption...hair, eye color, ect....^^;; Uh...they're describing me. Funny, huh? ^^;; Yea, I'm a nerd even though I don't think I look much like it. I'm not a complete geek. I look it, but I'm not it. That did make sense, did it? Anyway, hope you like it. ^^

ZukonMirokurmine - July 5, 2006 12:55 AM (GMT)
sounds good ^_^

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 5, 2006 01:04 AM (GMT)
Thanks. ^^ I'll try and update again as soon as I can. ^^

ZukonMirokurmine - July 5, 2006 04:09 AM (GMT)
sure no pressure...me working on my computer

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 6, 2006 04:59 PM (GMT)
**Chapter 1**

**Part A- First day of Summer Vacation**


"Beep...Beep...Beep..." Went off the alarm.

I stirred in my sleep, not wanting to get out of my warm blankets. It continued to go off. I covered my head with the blankets, trying to drown out the noise in silence...like that would ever happen. The noise was getting on my last nerve. I threw the blankets off me, and, very annoyed, got out of my warm blankets and turned off the alarm. No, un-hooked the whole clock from the electrical outlet. Before it turned off, I caught a glimpse of what time it was, 6:30 am. Who the hell wakes up at 6:30 am when it's summer? Not to mention a Saturday. As I went back to bed, my mother came in.

"Good morning, Amiro." She greeted me sweetly.

"Good morning..." I answered, yawining afterwards.

I lay back down and cuddled up in the blankets.

"You're not going back to sleep, you know that, don't you?" My mother asked, still in the doorway.

I opened my eyes and looked up at her.

"Why's that mother?" I asked, yawning again.

"Well, when you wake up, you usually can't get back to sleep. Not unless it's late,, you're extremely tired, or after dinner sometimes." She answered, sitting on the side of my bed.

I yawned.

"Mother, this is one of the times when I'm extremely tired. I was looking forward to sleeping until 10 am today. That is, if you don't mind of course." I replied, then added at the end.

She smiled sweetly again.

"Of course dear. You worked so hard, and now that you're going into high school, you're more respensible. I'll let you sleep. But 10 am the latest. Alright?" She responded, kissing my forehead.

"Alright, thank you mother." I said in return, smiling as I closed my eyes.

The door to my room closed as my mother left. I sighed, then snuggled up into my still warm blankets. Maybe I can dream another idea for one of my stories...


Alright, here's another update. ^^ Hope you like it!

ZukonMirokurmine - July 6, 2006 05:17 PM (GMT)
nice update...reminded me sorta of a dream i had last night XD

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 6, 2006 05:19 PM (GMT)
XD You can go ahead and tell me about it. lol I was wondering if I should update again or not......

ZukonMirokurmine - July 6, 2006 05:22 PM (GMT)
it was weird XD i dunno why ur story reminded me of it XD

the dream:

it was really weird my brother got me a job at this second part of the food place where he works at so he makes pretzels and i work with chocolate. well after helping a few people my brother comes over and he's like "yusukes here, he said he'll stop by here." and i was like "YAY NII-CHAN!" so my brother left and in a few minutes yusuke came over and he was walking towards me so i ran up to him saying "hey yusuke!" and hugged him. he barely hugged me back and got stiff i think embarrassed him. then he said "hey" then turned around and left probally to hide his embarrassment or meet the rest of the gang...to bad the rest of them didnt come i would have hugged keiko,yukina and botan. tryed to hug hiei, and hug kuwa aand kurama. o well it was weird though

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 6, 2006 05:49 PM (GMT)
:blue20: :blue20: Very weird dream. lol Should I update again?

Patriot1776 - July 6, 2006 06:35 PM (GMT)
So far it's okay. What's going to be happening first I wonder.

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 6, 2006 06:53 PM (GMT)
Not telling! But I will update again soon. ^^

ZukonMirokurmine - July 6, 2006 07:11 PM (GMT)
yay update soon

Saku-Tatsuya - July 6, 2006 07:29 PM (GMT)
wow this is a great story. I will read the next update... when it comes.

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 6, 2006 07:48 PM (GMT)
**Chapter 1**

**Part B- The Odd Dream**

**Dreaming**


I was running through an alley way. Someone was chasing me. I didn't know who, and I didn't care either. I just ran. Something told me that if that somebody caught me, they would either kill, rape, or kidnap me. I didn't want any of that to happen! I just continued running, my heart pounding as I ran my fastest to the end of the alley way. I could hear the person slowly catching up. I pushed my legs harder, trying to force myself to go faster. I turned a corner and stopped running. Dead end. Smart of me to be even running in a alley way in the first place. Anybody being chased into an alley way usualy ends up being caught. I heard footsteps behind me.

"Now I've got you. Amiro, you can't escape me now." A man'sn voice came suddenly.

I couldn't see his face. It was too dark. I make out the outline of a man slowly walking my way. but I couldn't see anything else. Something gleamed in the darkness. As the man got closer, I could see that he was holding a knife. With the wall pressed up against my back, I had nowhere to go. Trapped. The word echoed in my mind. No! I won't think like that! Although it is true and all. The man grabbed my throat suddenly, clutching it tightly.

"You...you know my secret...you shalln't tell a soul..." He growled, tightning his grip.

"W...why...should I?" I managed to get out, barely being able to breathe.

He tightened his grip.

"Silence. You've been snooping about. I'm here to make sure that you never show your face here again..." He ordered, then continued in a venemous voice.

He slowly raised the knife. It gleamed in the dim moonlight.

"No! Please! I won't tell!" I begged, trying to get free.

The man's eyes were narrow. He raised the knife above his head, then struck down with all his might. My scream echoed through the alley way and the whole city......

**End Dream**

Alright, here's another update. Hope you like it. The next update's going to be a long one. ^^

ZukonMirokurmine - July 6, 2006 07:48 PM (GMT)
:blue20: see rose now more poeple are reading it ^_^ Update soon

Saku-Tatsuya - July 6, 2006 07:50 PM (GMT)
^_^ yay and update! I can't wait for the next one!

ZukonMirokurmine - July 6, 2006 07:52 PM (GMT)
i cant wait either :lemon14:

Saku-Tatsuya - July 6, 2006 07:55 PM (GMT)
I liked this update! ^^

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 6, 2006 07:55 PM (GMT)
Finally fixed thye stupid thing. lol Glad you liked it. ^^ Oh, in the next chapter, you might find it...disgusting, but she doesn't really mean it. ^^;; You'll see what I mean when you read it. So, should I update again, or, leave it?

ZukonMirokurmine - July 6, 2006 08:01 PM (GMT)
o that "thing" you told me on msn?? XD that was funny not gross....and im glad you used dipshit and crybaby for those "characters"

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 6, 2006 08:02 PM (GMT)
:blue20: :blue20:

Shh!!! They don't know! *shifty eyes* :blue20:

ZukonMirokurmine - July 6, 2006 08:02 PM (GMT)
thats why i didnt say anything that would give it away!

ichinichi - July 6, 2006 08:08 PM (GMT)
me likies ^-^ update soon ^-^

ZukonMirokurmine - July 6, 2006 08:09 PM (GMT)
shes writing an update now :lemon14:

Patriot1776 - July 6, 2006 09:21 PM (GMT)
Oh crap. Prophetic dreams.

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 6, 2006 11:34 PM (GMT)
Sorry people, had to go somewhere. ^^;; I'm back now, so I'll update.

Oh, and Leiko......shh.....I'll tell them after the chapter. :blue20: You guys won't believe it either. XD Update will come soon....

ZukonMirokurmine - July 7, 2006 12:01 AM (GMT)
i aint said nothing (love saying sentances that dont make sense ^_^)

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 7, 2006 12:11 AM (GMT)
Kinda reminds me something of what Yusuke would say. Hm.....anyway... ^^

Oh, Leiko, I need another idea for my YYH Interview thingy. Remember? It was funny? :blue20: :blue20: You and Yokura just love reading it over again. lol I'll update this one soon! About to start updating! ^^

ZukonMirokurmine - July 7, 2006 12:14 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Kamilah_femaledogdemon @ Jul 6 2006, 05:11 PM)
Kinda reminds me something of what Yusuke would say. Hm.....anyway... ^^

Oh, Leiko, I need another idea for my YYH Interview thingy. Remember? It was funny?  :blue20:  :blue20: You and Yokura just love reading it over again. lol I'll update this one soon! About to start updating! ^^

Thats cause Yusuke is my Nii-Chan!!!! as for the ideas....Nii-chan keeps stealing my PSP :cryriver: and kuwas eating all our food! :pinkusagi08:

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 7, 2006 12:16 AM (GMT)
lol I can't put that...wait, I could put that...in a certain way though. XD I have an Idea now. Oh man. I'll try and add it tonight in my computer if possible, alright? lol Anyway, as for the update, Let m,e get to it so I can let my fans read it. lol It's gonna be long though.

ZukonMirokurmine - July 7, 2006 12:17 AM (GMT)
mkay i gotta go save kuwa from hiei anyway... Ja Ne

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 7, 2006 12:18 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (ZukonMirokurmine @ Jul 6 2006, 07:17 PM)
mkay i gotta go save kuwa from hiei anyway... Ja Ne

:blue20: :blue20: Ja Ne!

And now for starting the update!

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 7, 2006 01:46 AM (GMT)
**Chapter 1**

**Part C- Revenge!**

I woke up suddenly, breathing hard. That was a weird dream...it seemed so real...maybe it was just a new idea for a new story. Yea, that might be it! No....it can't be. This happened before...I'd rather not remember that right now. Let's just say that was a close call. I put a hand over my still pounding heart.

"It might happen in the future...but I don't know when." I said to myself.

I looked at the clock. 8:30 am. I sgihed heavily, then got out of bed and took a hot shower. The hot water felt good on my skin. For some reason, hot showers always cool me down...which is supposed to be cold showers. They get me cold and cool, but only for about a few minutes. With hot showers, it lasts about 3 hours or less. After the shower, I got dressed quickly and went out. I sure didn't want my little brother knowing ths ti was taking one or getting dressed. That little rat always comes and bugs me. I walked over to my hamster's cage.

"Narao...come on...where are you? Come out..." I cooed softly.

She poked her little head out of the old sock that I put in there. She loved that sock. It's already ripped to shreds. She uses it as her little hide-out from the world, also for sleeping.

"Hey cutie!" I say alittle more loudly.

She came out further and up to the cage door. She looked up at me with her big, black eyes. She's so cute! There was a soft scratching sound from the door. Hm...so, Mimorishi's actually awake this early on a Saturday morning? And he's finally let Atsuka and Akinawa out. Akinawa's my dog, but Mimosishi's been keeping her in his room. I opened my door and two golden Labrador Retrievers(sp?) bounded in.

"It's nice to see you again Akinawa. Did he treat you well?" I asked, kneeling down next to her and holding out a hand.

We had a code. If yes, she would put her paw in my hand. If no, she would nuzzle me. If unsure, she would lick my hand. I trianed her personally. I'm good with animals. She put her paw in my hand and whined.

"What did he do?" I asked, hugging her.

She just whined. I'm going to murder him some day. But, I can't. For one reason, he's my brother, unfortunately. And, for another reason, he's a member of my detective/mystery solving team. He can be smart, but he can also be very...annoying. I stood back up and got Narao out of her cage. She cuddled in my hand. I left my room, Atsuka and Akinawa fiollowing closely behind me.


Alright, here's a part of the chapter. I still have alot more to write. ^^;; But my mom doesn't want the light on, which I need to see what I'm writting from my notebook. Anyway, the rest will be up tomorrow. ^^ Hope you like it! Oh yea! And Mimorishi is really my cousin, Sergio.

Patriot1776 - July 7, 2006 02:15 AM (GMT)
Nice pets! Wonder what the title of the chapter was referring too?

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 7, 2006 02:17 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Patriot1776 @ Jul 6 2006, 09:15 PM)
Nice pets! Wonder what the title of the chapter was referring too?

MUAHAHAHAAHAHAHA!!!! *evil look on face* Oh nothing. ^^ *evil laugh* lol You'll find out tomorrow if you're on. ^^ Btw, will you be on tomorrow Patriot?

Sankontesou - July 7, 2006 02:29 AM (GMT)
WOW!!!!! this is really great!!!! update again soon!!!!!!!!!!!

:cactus25:

Patriot1776 - July 7, 2006 02:31 AM (GMT)
Depends on if dad tomorrow can borrow a friend's recently purchased Jeep or not. I've ridden in it, drove it, and I'm wanting to go off-road trail riding in it with him, but we didn't get around to it today because he had to go see an eye doctor about one of his eyes irritating him, so I had to settle with watching coverage of the Shuttle mission all day today and pounding my drums, which was OK with me.

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 7, 2006 02:38 AM (GMT)
Oh alright. ^^ Just curious.

ZukonMirokurmine - July 7, 2006 03:17 AM (GMT)
muahahaha nice update and i know whats gunna happen! xD ^^

Kamilah_femaledogdemon - July 7, 2006 05:59 PM (GMT)
I know you know what's going to happen. XD You just want to read it to make it seem funnier.

:blue20: :blue20: I don't care idf that didn't make sense! My cousins managed to get me hyper......XD




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