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Title: CLOSET MAN!!!


Jakotsu_Luver_4ever - July 9, 2006 02:30 AM (GMT)
Closet Man Part 1


Once upon a time, there was a boy named Chris. He lived in Canada, he had lots of friends, and a secret identity. He was the all great Closet Man. Some people said he was the Closet Superman of Canada, others just ignored people like that and kept going on with their day. His outfit was a brown cat suit with hat that had gray dreadlocks; thus where Closet Man came from. His weapons were a broom that could extend to humongous lengths to use for combat with metal pipes and etc. He had a set of Lysol bottles and Windex bottles that could bend to the shape of boomerangs. His last weapon was a mop bucket with wheels which he could pull apart and use as shaiken. He had better than awesome hearing and seeing, along with AMAZING agility and karate skills.
One day, Chris was sitting in Math class, when he heard a scream for help. He ran to the teacher's desk.
“Mr. Bigglesworth. I don't feel so good, can I go to the nurse?” Chris said, sounding very convincing
“Chris, you seem to be going to the nurse a lot this week, are you sure you're okay?” Mr. Bigglesworth asked.
“I won't be if I don't get to the nurse's.” He said, faking barfs. He ran out of the classroom and to the outside of the building.
He pulled off his clothes to reveal his Closet Man suit. He jumped on top of the building and flew downtown.
It was his arch enemy, the Janitor. What Chris didn't know was that it was his best friend, Gatlin. (I don't know if their friends, Gatlin just had to be the bad guy)
“CLOSET MAN!! I SEE YOU HAVE COME TO PROTECT THE CITY! TOO BAD YOU WON'T PREVAIL!” The Janitor screamed from the town square.
“Not Today Janitor!”Chris yelled back.
*insert battle scene here* just kidding.
Chris threw his Lysol Boomerang and aimed his bucket pieces at The Janitor. He deflected them and threw his ring of keys at him. Chris flew back 30 feet with the keys stuck in his cat suit. But his suit was extra stretchy, thus it deflected his keys, and sent them flying back. 2 went in his eye, causing him to give up.
Chris flew back to school but something was wrong. He realized that his clothes were missing. Not even his parents knew he was Closet man, so he couldn't fly home until 1, but the teacher would ask where he had been. He sat outside until lunch, then he flew home and grabbed some clothes and flew back to school. He had an excuse now. He would say he had been at the nurse's and he got better during lunch so he went to lunch.

The next day he went to school and he saw a note in his locker. The note was made of letters from magazine cut outs and etc.

Come to the town square at dusk tonight if you want something precious back. ~ The Janitor.

Chris couldn't figure out what he had taken. He called his parents, both of them were at home. Everything was normal. It wasn't until his last class he realized what it was. Brianna was missing!


PART 2 COMING SOON!!!

Saku-Tatsuya - July 9, 2006 03:00 AM (GMT)
LOL XD you're always making me laugh

Jakotsu_Luver_4ever - July 9, 2006 02:39 PM (GMT)
CHRIS IS CLOSET MAN THOUGH!! his icon on MSN looked like a closet at first

Saku-Tatsuya - July 9, 2006 02:48 PM (GMT)
I hope you update soon XD this kind of reminds me of superman (yes I'm a superman fan) I'm liking this story!

Jakotsu_Luver_4ever - July 9, 2006 04:14 PM (GMT)
he is the Superman of Canada

btw if you want the quote to work in your sig it has to be [ QUOTE ] quote here [ /QUOTE ] without the spaces of course

Saku-Tatsuya - July 10, 2006 02:10 AM (GMT)
UPDATE SOON!!!! please? :pinkusagi08:

Shippo_666 - July 10, 2006 02:13 AM (GMT)
I find it... < Ahem. > Interesting.

Jakotsu_Luver_4ever - July 10, 2006 12:18 PM (GMT)
i wonder what Chris thinks of it




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