Title: WHERE AM I
Description: inuyasha and kingdomhearts mix
yashademon13 - September 11, 2006 01:37 AM (GMT)
Demon_Eyes - September 11, 2006 02:15 AM (GMT)
yes!!! ya finally got it in the right place!!!!! me so happy
Sesshomaru_Sama_Fan_ - September 11, 2006 02:21 AM (GMT)
sounds interesting,update soon^^
yashademon13 - September 11, 2006 05:33 AM (GMT)
My sister deleted some of it but, I'll have it posted by tomarrow :pinkusagi17:
yashademon13 - September 13, 2006 12:29 AM (GMT)
yashademon13 - September 13, 2006 12:58 AM (GMT)
WHERE AM I
Chapter 1:Where am I
Sora, Riku, Kairi. Moaned Cindy as she opened her eyes. Suddenly
she had a flashback. ''Do not forget, you're not alone as long as you
got us as your friends.'' said Sora. Yeah we'll take of yuh,'' said Kairi, with a smile.
We won't let the heartless get you,'' added Riku. ''Thank you... thank you a
lot it really means so much to me.'' ''It does?'' asked the other three in astonishment. ''No, but you guys know you can't do anything without the
last keyblade master,'' replied Cindy laughing, soon everyone was laughing.
End of flashback. ''What, I feel the wind rushing through my hair,'' said Cindy
as she opened her eyes fully. This is not possible I'm falling from the sky!
Tell me what u think. :bye: :bye:
yashademon13 - September 13, 2006 01:18 AM (GMT)
OMG :0_0: I guess it wasn't that good seeing since nobody replied
miroku-_-lover - September 13, 2006 02:30 AM (GMT)
yashademon13 - September 13, 2006 03:06 AM (GMT)
yashademon13 - September 13, 2006 03:08 AM (GMT)
:...: I was wondering, how come ur the first one to reply in my other ones that i srewed up in
yashademon13 - September 13, 2006 04:26 AM (GMT)
Anybody else like it besides mirkou-lover :yellowjelly:
miroku-_-lover - September 13, 2006 02:31 PM (GMT)
i like it. they probably do too, but they just don't reply. and even if they don't, update anyway because i do like it.
yashademon13 - September 13, 2006 10:12 PM (GMT)
will do mirku-lover :pinkusagi17:
Sesshomaru_Sama_Fan_ - September 14, 2006 12:06 AM (GMT)
sounds good,update soon!^^
IHATEKIKYOU12 - September 14, 2006 01:19 AM (GMT)
:...: ...normally I would correct spelling and gramatical errors because i'm A) an author myself and B) just a picky person in general, however I'm too happy right now to learn that kikyophobia is okay! so, just go on ahead with the next chapter or part or whatever and maybe I'll be in the mood to correct you
yashademon13 - September 15, 2006 12:05 AM (GMT)
I'll update as soon as am done with the 4 chapter :lemon14:
yashademon13 - September 15, 2006 11:09 PM (GMT)
I'm finally gonna update ya : :gaara01:
yashademon13 - September 17, 2006 06:11 AM (GMT)
Chapter:2 Meeting New Friends
''Come on Inuyasha can't we at least take a small break and eat?,'' asked Kagome. ''Feh fine,'' replied Inuyasha. ''Thanks,'' replied Kagome with a cheerful look on her. ''All right you guys time to eat,'' replied Kagome as she took a picnic blanket out of her bag and spread it on the grass. ''Here you go you guys I made the lunches today,'' said Kagome as she handed each of them a lunch box thing. ''Here you go Inuyasha,'' said Kagome. ''Feh no thanks,'' replied Inuyasha. ''Why not?,'' asked Kagome. ''I'm not hungry,'' replied Inuyasha with a smirk on his face. ''Oh no, you're gonna eat it even if I have to shove it down your throat!'' threatened Kagome. ''I doubt it,'' murmured Inuyasha. ''You know Inuyasha maybe you shou.....,'' Miroku was cut off short by Kagome. ''Come on please, Inuyasha its not like I get to hang out with my friends from my era and invite them to my cooking,'' pleaded Kagome. ''Yeah well tough lu..... hey your not even paying attention,'' yelled Inuyasha. What is it Kagome? asked sango. ''I'm not sure, but it lookes like there's something falling from the sky. ''It looks like a..... like a what,'' asked Shippo ''like a human,'' replied Kagome. ''Kagome are you felling all right you know humans can't fall down from the sky,'' said Inuyasha. ''Yeah I know that but look, it lookes like a human and its coming down into the forest,'' voiced Kagome. ''Then perhaps we should go check it out,'' offered Miroku. Handing Kagome the food and the picnic blanket to put away in her bag. ''Ya I agree come on then,'' said Kagome as she was putting the stuff away. ''Just remember what you're getting yourself in..... Hey the least you can do is wait up,'' yelled Inuyasha. Seeing his friends leave without him. ''Hurry up Inuyasha,'' yelled Kagome. ''Well so much for a short break, thought Inuyasha as he hurried towards the others.
so what do yuh think
yashademon13 - September 17, 2006 06:13 AM (GMT)
anybody at least one response :bear09:
yashademon13 - September 17, 2006 04:36 PM (GMT)
ANYBODY OUT THERE that wants to read anybody? :gaara01:
yashademon13 - September 17, 2006 11:14 PM (GMT)
seriousely was it that bad that nobody liked? :gaara01:
yashademon13 - September 18, 2006 02:05 AM (GMT)
last call anybody want to read :pinkusagi08:
(tumble weed rolls by)
ANYBODY?
yashademon13 - September 18, 2006 10:53 PM (GMT)
anybody man I can't it anymore someone reply or I'LL KILL this thing :blink:
Neko - September 18, 2006 11:20 PM (GMT)
Sorry I haven't replied! LOVE IT! AWSOME! COOL! WOOT! YAY! *throws roses*
*applaudes* Yay yashademon!
yashademon13 - September 18, 2006 11:37 PM (GMT)
thak you thank you
(takes a bow)
so should i update? :...:
Neko - September 19, 2006 09:31 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (yashademon13 @ Sep 18 2006, 06:37 PM) |
thak you thank you
(takes a bow)
so should i update? :...: |
definately!
ichinichi - September 19, 2006 11:22 PM (GMT)
Dear Author of WHERE AM I? :
STOP POSTING IN A ROW! It becomes a bit annoying (it also states how newbie you are - no offense - Double posting is alright, triple is fine too on some topics, but quadruple? Five times? C'mon now). If people don't read your story, forget about their replies and post up another chapter of the story.
-ichinichi-
(PS: I am not a perfectionist, I don't do that. But what I must say is this: I am a fan-fiction author. Try reading one of my stories such as Void or ASTMT [A Slave To My Tears]. If you want, you can PM me for some help.)
Neko - September 20, 2006 11:28 PM (GMT)
hey Ichinichi! I read ur story Void! I think it's awsome! I'll go read more now!
yashademon13 - September 22, 2006 12:21 AM (GMT)
Ya i have read some of your story. But i'm weird so ya but thanks :cactus25:
childsnapdragon - September 23, 2006 02:46 AM (GMT)
this is getting better update soon! :cactus25:
Sesshomaru_Sama_Fan_ - September 24, 2006 09:43 PM (GMT)
update soon,please!! :angelstar7: Loving it!!! :angelstar7:
Akiko is just like You - September 24, 2006 11:10 PM (GMT)
Somany posts, and only two chapters. As Ichi said, stop posting in a row. I likey, just because I like KH! lol teeeeheeeeeeeee
yashademon13 - September 25, 2006 01:37 AM (GMT)
I'll post soon as soon as i find my labtop but don't worry I'll have it posted by tomarrow :crazybunny10:
Dice - September 28, 2006 08:34 PM (GMT)
...I like it.
And btw, it's been 4 days scince tommarrow. >_>
yashademon13 - September 30, 2006 03:07 AM (GMT)
Ok I know but I have gotten so much hw I haven't had time to finsh writtening it but i'm working on it :lemon14:
Haiyato Berzerker - November 26, 2006 02:24 AM (GMT)
please don't let this story die its so interesting and i want more of it
dayame - December 10, 2006 04:34 AM (GMT)
I love Kingdom Hearts, and i like Inuyasha. So, naturally, I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Just one question, is this before or after the Kingdom Hearts 2? :angelstar7: :angelstar7: :angelstar7: :angelstar7: :angelstar7:
yashademon13 - December 13, 2006 05:31 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (dayame @ Dec 9 2006, 11:34 PM) |
| I love Kingdom Hearts, and i like Inuyasha. So, naturally, I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Just one question, is this before or after the Kingdom Hearts 2? :angelstar7: :angelstar7: :angelstar7: :angelstar7: :angelstar7: |
it is before kingdom hearts2 and I'm glad u loved it I will update by this friday of maybe thursday. ^_^
Hashima - February 3, 2007 09:05 PM (GMT)
This story is wierd, which is why I like it. :angelstar7: You HAVE to post soon
Hashima - February 3, 2007 09:19 PM (GMT)
how do u change your signature? I can't figure out how to add pix to it :mint29: