Hi guys!!! This fanfiction was written by my 11-year-old brother Kelsey. I personally think for someone his age the description is amazing and we would both love to hear what you guys think of it...especially Kelsey... :D


The hooded man was left dying on a rocky path as a dark figure left the site laughing without any concern for the dying young soul. The dying man was left crying, crying the blood of the devil. As Jin, the hooded man started to get up with the last ounce of strength he had left he whispered the word, revenge. Jin started to run like a black warrior, catching up to the laughing man. Suddenly a punch connected and a fight brewed, punch after punch was thrown as the black hood of Jin started to tear. The figure started to plead with the words, “Would you really kill your own brother”. Jin stood still in silence as his brother came at him with an uppercut. Jin’s last ounce of strength had faded, the blood running down his face was the only that could save Jin now as his hatred for his family burnt his love and faith to ashes, Jin’s blood gave him rage and with rage comes strength. A thunderous blow connected in the face of Jin’s brother, the brother was left unconscious with blood running down his face. Suddenly Jin saw his mother’s tombstone. He had realised that he had betrayed the only person in his family that cared for him. As Jin stood silent, black wings of betrayal sprouted from his back. Jin promised that day to become the Black Warrior.

He's only 11? That's really friggin awesome. You're right, the description kicks muy bobba! Which is a good thing if you need a translation for Cramgodese. :D Yes, my way of talking is now an official language!