Episode 1: The Creation of Team Darkness!


???: Hello? Wake up now! Hello??? ANYONE HOME???? *KICKS ???2 IN THE FACE*
???2: OW!!
???3: *slaps ???* Don't be mean to the poor Pikachu!
???2: Pikachu? Im a human..
???: Yah right. Look in the water.
???2: *looks* I AM A PIKACHU! HELP HELP HELP HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Intro plays*
???2: So what are your names? Im Cole the Human/Pikachu (boy).
???3: Im Emily the Chikorita (girl).
???: Just call me Darkrai (boy).
Butterfree: *runs to the team* HELP! SAVE MY BABY!!!
Darkrai: Well....fine.
Emily: ^_^
Cole: Lets go guys!
Director: Meanwhile in Darkwood Forest...
Emily: Im scared.. :sweat:
Darkrai: Don't be a baby.
Cole: *sees a pidgey and it pecks him in the eye* OH NOES YOU DIDN'T!!! *thundershocks the pidgey making it faint* How do you like me now n00b!
Darkrai: Woah..
Director: With Caterpie...
Caterpie: MOMMY WHERE ARE YOU? *sniffle*
Cole: We are here! Lets go!
Caterpie: Ok!
Director: Meanwhile..with...butterfree....*faints*

DUE TO THE DIRECTOR (ME) FAINTING WE WILL WAIT... OK NOW WE ARE READY

Butterfree: Thanks for saving my baby! We have to go but heres some berrys.
Cole: Wow a Pecha,Oran and Chesto berry!
Butterfree: Bye!
Director: Meanwhile at the base...
Darkrai and Emily: SURPRISE!
Cole: WOAH! I LOVE IT!!
Emily: We should form a exploration/rescue team!
Darkrai: Im in!
Cole: Me too!
Emily: Ok who wants to be..
Cole: I WANNA BE LEADER!
Darkrai: DARNIT!!! :gwah:
Emily: Cheer up Darkrai. You can pick the name for our team!
Darkrai: Then its Darkness because we have black.
Emily: Well not much on me or cole but ok!

Episode 2: A Screech Of Ice!

Cole: *sleeping* i like macaroni and cheese....
Emily: *sleeping* i wish darkrai will be dead....
Darkrai: *sleeping* i wish emily would shut up....
*SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEECH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*
Cole: WHAT THE <CENSORED> WAS THAT???
Darkrai: Probaly the screech of the Ice God Articuno.
Cole: Oh.
Pelliper: WAKE UP YOU LAZY PIGS!! MAIL IS NOT GONNA READ ITSELF!!!
Cole: I hate birds....
Emily: *yawns* Me too...
Darkrai: *reads news* HOLY <CENSORED> ARTICUNO IS MAD!!!
Cole: Lets Go!
Director: Meanwhile in Ice Mountain...
Cole: BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
Emily: BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
Darkrai: BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
Cole: *thundershocks a snowy tree*
Darkrai: Secret Doorway!
Glaile: NOT SO FAST!
Glaile2: Not going anywhere traitor!
Glaile3: AHHHHHHHHHHH
Darkrai: *puts Glaile (who turns out to be named Icy) on our team*
Everyone: *gos to the stairs and meets Articuno*
Articuno: MY BABY!!! I WANT HIM NOW!! ICY!!!!
Icy: Mommy?
Articuno: YOUR NOT MY BABY!! DIE YOU PESKY PEOPLE!!!
Cole: I AM NOT PESKY!!!!!!!!!!!! :gwah: :gwah: :gwah: :gwah: :gwah: :gwah:
Director: After lots of owning....
Articuno: Ok sorry..
Icy: Mommy!
Articuno: My Baby! I will tell you what,we will join your team!
Cole: Yay!

Team Members:

Cole the Human/Pikachu (leader)
Emily the Chikorita
Darkrai
Icy the Glaile
Articuno

Script format for Fanfiction is looked down upon, just to tell you. You should consider actually writing it in prose format. If you do that, I'm sure more people will read it and post feedback.

Ok. But I just wished people would post more because I worked hard on this thing and made it funny... :(

Don't use all caps, ok?
Most of the members here won't find hyper immature humor funny. I actually think some of it was funny, the whole pidgey thing, and the noob thing too.
It's nice to see a new member being active in things other than trying to hide from the admins.

Since tommorow Im going to New Jersey I might as well make another episode.
Neon Prower gets to be in my fanfic since hes like my best friend. ^_^

Episode 3: Take to the Cosmos of Time and Space!
Cole: Im bored.
Emily: Me too. *yawns*
Darkrai: We got a new misson guys!
Articuno: Can I read it?
Cole: No. I will read it as leader.
*Cole reads the letter*
Hello whoever got this message. I am Neoprawo. The time is broken. Palkia has been torturing me since I became a Dialga. Please help me.
Cole: NEOPRAWO???? HES MY BEST FRIEND!! WE HAVE TO SAVE HIM!
Icy: I think Time Mountain is the place.
Cole: Lets go.
Director: Meanwhile on the top of Time Mountain... (im lazy)
Neoprawo: Leave me alone Palkia!
Palkia: NEVA!!
Cole: Neoprawo!
Neoprawo: COLE???
Cole: Yes its me! Use your Roar Of Time!
Neoprawo: Ok!
*ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!*
Palkia: ****!
*Palkia Faints*
Neoprawo: I will join your team.
Icy: Yay!
Emily: *throws Palkia over the ledge with vine whip* Huh?
Congratulations! Emily has evolved to a Bayleef!
Emily: Yay!

Team Members:

Cole the Pikachu/Human (leader)
Emily the Bayleef
Darkrai
Icy the Glalie
Articuno
Neoprawo the Dialga (Neon Prower)

yeah... not funny and grammer sucks... write it like an actual story its much more appealing...

It died because everyone's a legendary.
And it died because Palkia died.
Grrrr. *cries* HE KILLED THE PINK WEASEL DRAGON!

;-;

I can't create a funny fanfic. I suck..

Seriously, you should consider writing in story format. OR you can make the narrations long and make things more descriptive and detailed.

Yeah. Like Shakespeare.

This is trash. Don't read this. This comic sucks.

1. its not a comic
2. settle down
3. they are giving Constructive Criticism which you USE to make it better, not give up and go emo and bash yourself...

I agree with that. I already said that you don't need to change formats, as long as you keep it interesting to read. If you have a good plot, it wouldn't be much of a problem, right?

yeah but most people prefer prose and so will your teachers >.>

Unless it's Shakespeare.