Okay, this is my first fanfic, and I don't like it when people criticize me, so PLEASE be nice!

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Rock, Roll, and Blues serve the famous Dr. T. Light as household cleaning robots. Dr. Light also made other robots to serve the earth. Of course, Dr. Wily was his apprentice, but then he turned disloyal, and attempted to haywire the robots into his control. However, Rock was unaffected. Then, Rock volunteered to become a superpowered android, and therefore donned the name "Megaman". Over all these years, Dr. Wily was thwarted by Megaman, and Megaman was known as a hero.

...that is, of course, unless...

Megaman: Bass, stop! Why do you insist on fighting me? I always have to explain to you that I'm your ally!
Bass: Shut up! I wouldn't care if you were Treble, I want to prove that I'm stronger than you!
Megaman: Bass, you are strong. You defeated Wily many times before, right? That should prove your strength!
Bass: You don't actually think he was THAT strong, do you? *blasts at him*
Megaman: *dodges* Bass?!
Rush: Ruff! Bark bark!
Megaman: Rush, what's up?
Bass: Gotcha! *shoots at Megaman*
Megaman: Wha! *gets hit* UGH!
Rush: BARK! *tackles Bass*
Bass: Guh! *kicks Rush* Stupid dog! Treble, get him!
Treble: Haaaaarrrooooooohhhhh!!! *attacks Rush*
Megaman: Guh... Hm! *charges up Mega Buster, fires*
Bass: DAHH! *gets hit, he's badly damaged* Shoot! Treble, we must retreat.
Treble: Grrr... Bark! *Bass and Treble retreat*
Megaman: Rush, are you okay?
Rush: Arf...
Megaman: No! Rush, hang in there!

Meanwhile...

?: So, this is the Megaman I've heard so much about... Heh heh heh... Well, I shall find him and confront him! Then, I'll be the new hero! Me! ME!!! *laughter* ...wait... No, no, it's too soon... I should stick to researching this character until the promised time... *window pops up on screen* What the-- It's him? ...heh heh heh heh... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

(To be continued)

Please, no play format.
Make it into story format, like:
"Hi!" Aya said, looking to her friend.
^ In that kind of format.
Play format can get annoying.

Okay... *slaps himself* D****T!

Curse you, Aya. I was going to say that.

Everyone knows story format is way more entertaining than play format.

*Puts up a story to help Neon Prower*

*Bass and Treble appear*
Bass: We are back! *fires buster a lot at megaman*
Treble: ROAR!!! *charges at rush*
Rush and Megaman: AHHHH!!
Meanwhile from a cliff...
???: Should we help them?
???2: Fine.
Suddently there was a flash of lightning zapping Bass following up with a saber up Treble's butt*
Bass: OW! Grrrr... We will get you!
*Bass and Treble disappear*
Megaman: Wow you are AWESOME! Who are you two?
???: Im PikaMan.
???2: And im SilhouetteMan.
Megaman: Wait... *holds up the comic The Pikouette Brothers* YOU GUYS ARE THE STARS OF THIS COMIC??
*Rush barks loudly and excitedly*
Pikaman: Of course!
Silhouetteman: Are you fans?
Megaman: Yes! Well lets get back to Dr.Lights base.
Pikaman: Ok.

Meanwhile...
???: Pikaman and Silhouetteman eh? This should be easy. Fireman! Take good care of them!
Fireman: Yes Dr..
???: DON'T GIVE THEM MY NAME NOW GO!
Fireman: Ok...

...why keep insisting on play format?

Because its a lot more easier then story format. I DON'T EVEN KNOW OW TO DO THAT! IM ONLY A KID!

What are you, nine? Back in my days, as a nine year old, story format was common. Even for recreational writing, it was story format.

He is.... nine.

I know. This is the problem with typing. You can't interpret whether a phrase is being used literally or not. I'm using it literally. As in, "You are nine."

I started making fics and such in story format when I was 8. I only did play format when I was around 6 or so, but meh...I guess it's not really much of an issue, is it?

Well, he's not you. So stop trolling him about it.

Exactly why I said it's not much of an issue. Anyways, I'll...see your fics for now (since I'm really bored). But it'd really help if you make things more descriptive, even if you keep using play format. Just, make it more entertaining somehow.

i feel like correcting you people and confusing them more... it should be in prose and not in script...

The point is... people here are more comfortable with reading stories in story format. I believe majority would agree to that opinion [i do hope].

I understand your enthusiasm to write in play format, but let me tell you something about writing stories. Consider your audience, that is, if you plan on them reading your story. If you give them something that discomforts them, then you shouldn't let them read it.

PLease do consider this advice in the near future.

Lol.

I might start a fanfic with me and Pikaman X where we're fighting Mavericks. Also, lol, Pikaman X! "Saber up Treble's butt", nice job!