Alright welcome to my comic, this is an all original comic with all almost original story. Not a bn comic. But still awesome. Its gonna be a comic of the ages!
Now Enjoy!

[And the adventure ends in them laughing away into the sunset.
What will tommorow bring for our adventures? Find out next time on
Elementas: Protectors of the universe!

Yay so what do you think? You Like it?
Oh and I promise the next episode will have much more straight up action.
Alright have a wonderful day! ^.^

Next episode our gang of adventurers meet a strange man in the card shop and he hands them these so called vortex cards and puts them on a secret mission. Just then outside the card shop they get aproached by some guy who says Kyo has been requested a challenge from some guy named master. Just who is this master and what does he want with kyo and the gang? Tune in to find out.


So just who is this master and where is he taking them? Tune in next time on Elementas: The protecters of the universe!



New comic!
Enjoy!
Wow what an epic battle.
So it turns out that they took them to a secret lair behind some office wall. Aparently this master guy is named leon and he invited the gang to his secret tournament where kyo and some guy named tora faced off. Kyo won flawlussy*And hilariously* Now its Evans turn? We he win and how strong will this shousho guy be? Will he be a challenge at all? Will our heros win this tournament? And just who is this leon/master guy? Find out next time on
Elementas: Protectors of the Universe!





Alright here is the new comics updates are going to be here only.
http://www.drunkduck.com/Elementas_Protect...verse/?p=393051
Oh and 55 pages and stil going!

Another card game? Bleh... Putting that to the side, it was okay, but the dialogue would go outside the brackets/speech bubble, and there were some spelling errors and capitilization errors.

Almost original? Sounds like Bakugan.

Yeah Thats where I got my inspiration from. And its not another card game.

Inspiration, yes is that what they call it now? I thought it was called copying.

Yes it is. There's cards. It's a game. It's a CARD game.

No I watched it and thought "Wouldnt be awesome if you put Bakugan and Bn together. And thats when I thought of this. ^.^
And yes its a card game but its not just another card game.

*Giantgantic 14 page update*
Enjoy ^.^

Yes it is another one. Most establish rules before starting.

Bakugan and BN is not FTW. Maybe if you tweaked the sprites more, made them original...

Oh, Bakugan didn't exactly explain things, but normally when '1 monster with 100' and '1 monster with 1200' fight and the latter wins, usually you can figure out why.

This however adds life and makes it more confusing.

and LINKS PLEASE your streaching the page...

I will soon.
Until then what do you think?
Comment and Constructive criticism apperiated.

i'll read them when i have all the base colors done on a pic i;m cging.. just the eyes and gun left..

EDIT: WOOT 2,000th post :D

Oh I see cool.
C'ging....
Eyes and guns?
Nvm. ^.^

just go to the art thread... i put what i got so far in there...

Ah I see. Alright Update again soon...

Now on Drunk duck.
^.^ Go check it out!
http://www.drunkduck.com/Elementas_Protect...verse/?p=393051
Enjoy

Your spelling is atrocious. Estimment? Abilitys? Shiney? Phoniex? Obliderate?

Your grammar is equally terrible. I spent a week in one text box just PRAYING for an apostrophe or period. I was disappointed.

There are about 4 main points to a good comic:

Dialogue
Includes spelling and grammar. Your comic has a lack of this. 0/10

PLOT
Yours is good, except its cookie-cuttered out of Bakugan, the Naruto Card Game, and god knows what else. 0/10

Characters
Well, without being able to READ whatever it is they're SAYING, I guess this is a low point. 0/10

Graphics
If it's not appealing to the eye, it won't even get a second glance. This was the case. The first comics are cluttered and other things I can't say to 5-year-olds. 0/10

That's a whopping 0/40. You fail.

Wow well the grammar and spelling are not that bad. And all those graphics are original. As in produced myself. Two you probably didn't even read all of it and are just judging it off of the first page or the last page which makes no sense. Three your a self absorbed prick with no self esteem so you try to critic others to make your self feel some what worthy of a soul and still you cant find any self satisfaction. Your also quite hypocritical as you couldn't ever do at least half as good of a comic of your own so you shouldn't be judging other comics if you cant even make your own.
And how do you even think that you know about comics. Just how many comics or how many years have you made comics? I'm guessing about 2 months or so.
So don't you give me any crap about knowing anything about comics as you know nothing.

So there my friend it is you who fail.
Served.

Fail. Completely fail. Even I could do better, and I am socially retarded.

Haha no seriously.

No seriously. It is not good. There are many things that could be improved.

XD I nearly pissed myself reading this.


Grammar and spelling not bad? Bullshit. I read through it all, if you can call it reading, as reading implies a sense of understanding.

Graphics may be original, but that doesn't ecuse that they're a little sub-par even for a newb.

Red only the first and last? How would you be aware of that when most of the words I criticized were somewhere IN THE FUCKING MIDDLE.

I'm a self absorbed prick, am I? So self absorbed I go out of my way to read it and give you destructive criticism? Oh yeah, I can see that.

No self esteem? That explains why I haven't killed myself, doesn't it?

Unworthy of a soul? Me? Hah. Like I haven't heard that before.

Hypocritical? Up your ass with broken glass. I've been comicing for nearly 4 years and I know what I'm talking about. I've been on EXEW far longer than you, way back in '05.

Never do half as good? I did. 5 times better on my first tries. Lost Chronicles was good, at least until I couldn't keep up with updating because, oh yeah what was it again...?

I HAVE A LIFE.

Guess incorrect, whore. 4 years. I'm far more experienced than you, and can read a comic or TV show and see if it will do well.

I'm not allowed to give you crap? You, my inferior? Oh my god, you're OLDER than me and you're giving ME shit? Ahah. Ahah!

I'm the one that failed. Yes I see how that works. It is I who got worked up over one post. Right.

Looky here, I'm a VETERAN compared to you. I've seen great comics come and go, like Wshkihs. So YOU are the one that failed. Thank go I refrained from flaming, unlike you.


And no one says served anymore.

Oh yeah, and your post is so riddled with grammar and spelling errors it just added to my humor.

Your right I am getting frustrated about this.
Its quite immature to do so, so I will refrain from continuing.
By the way, just to let you know veteran, I was on EW since august 05.
And by the way, in a matter of fact I remember when you first joined EW and I was nice to you and commented on your first comic.
I was there when you were a noob and I was nice to you.
Also I was there when wshkihs was created.
In-fact I have seen so many great comics come and go that you really don't know what your talking about.
So yeah, I am older then you and a VETERAN so maybe I should not get so worked up and be a bit more mature to set a better example for some of you young ones.

Also UTK don't **** with me I remember when your grammar was horrible and you were a noob.
Trust me. I didn't forget.
So im ending this flame war with a final statement.

Getting worked up over a internet forum is quite in mature.
Also if you saw in cole's comic I apologized tried to apologize to you.
If you didn't notice.
So there.

I was a newb. Not a noob. Big difference.

Yeah, I was a noob, Ketiou. Sad thing is, you still are.

Alright lets just set this aside and relax as this is gone to far and is not worth the effort.

Im sorry for busting out at you, it was just because I was tired of hearing nothing but D+C at my comic. I worked pretty hard on thoses, and I know im not extremly amazing but im getting better and im improving and my grammar isnt so swell some times cause I dont have time to spell check the text.
Anyways I really like this comic and will continue it on drunk duck. No matter what people say.

And UTK I respect that your sticking up for a pal, yet this really had nothing to do with it.
Anyways im sorry for all of that and I hope you can forgive me. I do not like arguing as it is pointless and gets you no where.

Anyways lets continue on with our wonderful self esteem filled lives ok?

Truce

You are forgiven. Thing is, if people think a comic is crap, there is probably problems with it. Instead of talking back, ask what you could do to change. We are here to help.

Time out! This is a comic thread, I think you guys should move this to PMs or something. My few cents are this:

1.Ketiou, you could use a lot of grammar improvement. I agree on that.

2.Endling, I know you're a cool guy. I've RP'd(excuse my spelling) with you a few times, and you're alright. You do come off a bit harsh though, and sometimes people take offense.

3. UTK, there was no need for you to jump in and tag-team Ketiou. Endling can handle it, and it made you seem like his attack dog when you did it.

In short, all three of you were in the wrong. If everyone calms down, this can be forgotten. Ketiou you need to improve, Endling you need to calm down, and UTK you need to back off. I think highly of you, UTK, but it disgusted me to see the way you attack Ketiou for the sake of teaming up with your friend.

*Throws up peace signs and leaves the topic.*

Time out! This is a comic thread, I think you guys should move this to PMs or something. My few cents are this:

1.Ketiou, you could use a lot of grammar improvement. I agree on that.

2.Endling, I know you're a cool guy. I've RP'd(excuse my spelling) with you a few times, and you're alright. You do come off a bit harsh though, and sometimes people take offense.

3. UTK, there was no need for you to jump in and tag-team Ketiou. Endling can handle it, and it made you seem like his attack dog when you did it.

In short, all three of you were in the wrong. If everyone calms down, this can be forgotten. Ketiou you need to improve, Endling you need to calm down, and UTK you need to back off. I think highly of you, UTK, but it disgusted me to see the way you attack Ketiou for the sake of teaming up with your friend.

*Throws up peace signs and leaves the topic.*

Curse my slow computer..................

Peace! Yay.

Yes and I know I need to improve its just I dont like to use spell check. Its mishy!
It takes too much time I only do it when I need to.
And I appericate the acceptance UTK.

@SonicRulez: I am his attack dog.
@Ketiou: No problem, just try better with the grammar. ;)

Seriously? Not even his lowly sidekick? Well, if it's cool between you guys.

Attack dogs are way batter than sidekicks.



On a lighter note.


It is funny. First we are flaming our nuts off, then we are all friends. It's like the Cold War. Only without the bombs. Actually, the bombs, too.

Yeah!
Hah thats irony.
Anyways what do you guys think about the story so far? (If you read all 55 issues)
And I will continue when I feel like it. Which will be soon.
Also who is your favorite character?


Oh goodness me! A bomb haha!

Okay, advice time.

You DO have time to spell check. It doesn't take that long to go over it.

And as for the images. Once you get the images set up in their normal size, increase them ONLY by a complete 100 multiple. Like 200, 300, etc. ONLY, otherwise it looks disgusting.

Another thing...your text boxes need to be smaller, along with the text. That way it doesn't clog up the screen and actually buttscrew your characters. A separate few frames is worth it for good appearance.

OK thanks and yeah that was just alot of text issue most of it is not that much.
And I will check spelling more this time.

Yeah, it looked more like an essay than a comic, lawl.

Have you read like 10 or so pages back UTK?
That way It will make alot more sense and there is much more (Action)

Erm, not to join in in the late but. That was totally homo.

You are his attack dog?

A real man fights his own battle in his own manly way without the need for female likel companions.

UTK, I respected you before, but that sickened me to the point where I think you're either a dirk,fruit basket, or just a b***h.

Sorreh, but it's just due to my inactivity, I got on this a lil late.

Wow, you see attack dog and think of buttsecks? Wow, when people go to the gutter THAT quick, it makes me wonder...

Anyways lets be more on topic please.