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Title: The Devil's Pencil
Description: Original story.


Insaniholic - July 9, 2007 08:07 AM (GMT)
For those who go on the XG Powered Heroes thread, here is the origin of Jereko Raynos.

I'm also sure I am incorrect about the Devil and god thing. Look, I'm atheist. Also, many parts of this story was made up bull *bleep*.
Chapter 1:Writing History

(I had a picture here, but this story was written in a notebook.)

Ages ago, eons, at the beginning of time, there were supernatural beings with incredible power, but the two most distinct were God and Satan. Satan was also known as the Devil, the Prince of Darkness, and Lucifer.

On the day when man was born, he had made a deal with the Devil. Man siad that he wanted to have the most power, but in trade, man lost his immortality, leaving all humans the ability of death. Man soon learned how to make weapons and hunt. The human race also began to grow. Man feared that he would lose his power and rule to the children when they grew up, so he killed hem while they were young. God was dissapointed in man's act and punished him. Man lost his power and grew weak as time passed by.

Satan laughed at this matter and decided to add a new twist. He sealed part of his energy into a writing utensil; the earliest was the chisel. He gave it to a random person and soon that person was corrupted; Argon Frotis was that unlucky person. From the some tablets he carved into came living beasts. He chipped away peieces of rock, creating an outline of a creature. The picture soon grew into a massive stone behemoth that would destroy earliest man.

A new form of man was born. After the chisel was the scribe, a carving too; that would leave marks in clay. The name of people who used it were also called scribes. That scribe was Ahkmen Vorhria. He was corrupted by the power and engraved into the clay an incantation that unleashed a black hole which destroyed the civilization of Mesopotamia. During the Qin Dynasty, Emperor Qin had written his laws in he cursed ink with the Devil's brush, and anyone who disobeyed the laws was consumed by the ink. Unfortunately, the laws became permanent. One day, Emperor Qin brokea law himself and he too was devoured by the ink.

Now, today, Hell's power is the Devil's Pencil.

creaselesscadet - July 24, 2007 09:29 PM (GMT)
freaky...
A pencil...

Kayne Argand - July 25, 2007 09:54 AM (GMT)
HEY! I"M THE PRINCE OF DARKNESS!

Good chapter.

Insaniholic - July 30, 2007 06:21 AM (GMT)
It doth not end here! Here comes Chapter 2!

Chapter 2:The Inheritance

It was a regular day in the city. A teenager called Jereko Raynos was walking through downtown, searching for his friend Vincent Feran, so that they could go to the movies. Jereko took out his cellphone and dialed Vincent's number.
"Hey, Vince, where are you?" Jereko said into the phone.
"Sorry dude, I'm at the bakery." Vincent answered. "My mom told me to get some fresh bread."
"Okay, when am I going to see you then?"
Probably 1:00 or 1:15."
"Gotcha."
"Seeya."
They each hung up and continued with their indiviual tasks. Jereko had nothing to do for a while, so he went to the mall. He decided to take the alley shortcut. When he walked through the alley, he felt a prescence pass by, but when he looked back, he had a pencil in his hand. He examined it and found that it had 666 written on it instead of 2. Jereko should have taken that as an omen.




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