A new evil is spreading across the land. Most of the villages have decided to team together. It still isn't enough, and with Naruto's Gang gone missing you need to step up. D.N.A or Death Negative Affect have a Hidden Village. They're noted by the symbol for DNA being on their headbands. Another notable trait is that they're eyes have no pupils. They've been deployed out to every village to try to destroy the world from the inside out. Can you save your Village from destruction from their own D.N.A.?


I'll have to approve you.

Name-Denlex
Age-13
Description-[image]
Background(Optional)-Denlex has lived in the Hidden Leaf Village alone. His parents died a while back and with no family he kept to himself. When he learned of D.N.A he stepped up and began training. He works hard and needs a friend. Little does he know that he is a Hyuuga, with amnesia from his earlier years. The kanji on his head is an advanced Hyuuga Brand Curse Seal.
Element Affinity(Optional)-Fire
Hidden Village-Village Hidden in the Leaves
Jutsus(Minimum of 3 max of 10, you can add more. No need to put obvious ones like Substitution Jutsu.):

Fire Style-Phoenix Release Jutsu (or the latter for short)-A stream of fire from the mouth or hands. A basic jutsu for all situations.

Silent Phoenix Release Jutsu-An adaption on the Phoenix Release Jutsu that makes it quieter. Used for stealth missions.

Flaming Kunai Kick Jutsu-A simple kunai that as been kicked with incredible force while on fire.

Phoenix Style-100 Strikes-Denlex puts his hands out and strikes 98 times with open palms. Then finally he puts two fire balls in his hands for the final two strikes.

Phoenix Rage-Thousand Kunai Attack-This attack requires Denlex to remove his headband. It will reveal the kanji for fire on his head. It will glow and he'll spin around rapidly like Neji's Heavenly Spin. All the while Thousands of kunai knives will fly. Finally Denlex will stop spinning and fire a Phoenix Release in the shape of a Phoenix. After this move is used Denlex will most likely pass out.

Secret Jutsu: Electric Leaf Wave - The leaves he carries in his pockets are thrown into the air and supercharged, forcing themselves at the nearest target in a flurry of electric slashes.

Windmill Summoning- Denlex summons two Demon Wind Shuriken to his hands.

Windmill Blaze- Denlex uses his Phoenix Release Jutsu to set his Windmill Shuriken on fire.

Demonic Illusion: Descending Hell Technique; Magen: Jigoku Kôka no Jutsu)

Special Abilities-
Koron Kanji-A bloodline trait that allows use of the Phoenix Rage-Thousand Kunai Attack without dying.

Explosion Copy-This will produce a Shadow Clone that will self-destruct when hit. Not really special, just homemade.

Quick Reflexes-An ability that allows Denlex to copy an opponents Jutsu as long as Denlex can preform it. So he can't copy the Lotus or Gentle Fist. It will put a fire affinity with it. Such as with the Uzumaki Naruto Rendan the final axel drop kick will be a flaming kick.


This is for the LITERATE people who know proper GRAMMER. They don't god-mod or use all lowercase out of laziness.


Just moving it over to NEXEW.

Name-Eugene Dendou
Age-18
Background(Optional)- Eugene grew up with the belief that death is but a mere play thing. As he grew up, he created jutsus that would bring the target to the verge of death and insanity, using fear as his main weapon. He learned to find out the fears of his foes, and to use it against them, and at the same time use the fear of his friends to give them something to strive towards. When he became a Jounin, he promised to make his students Konoha's strongest.
Element Affinity(Optional)- Thunder
Hidden Village-Village Hidden in the Leaves
Jutsus(Minimum of 3 max of 10, you can add more. No need to put obvious ones like Substitution Jutsu.):

Secret Jutsu: Electric Leaf Wave - The leaves he carries in his pockets are thrown into the air and supercharged, forcing themselves at the nearest target in a flurry of electric slashes.

Dendou Kashou no Jutsu - Unleashes a wave of electric fire from his mouth.

Ikazuchisummako no Mai - Moving at an incredible speed, he unleashes large sounds from around his opponent, used mainly to drive the foe insane.

Ikazuchi Konbo Raishuu - A combination of Ikazuchisummako no Mai and Electric Leaf Wave.

Gyouko Dageki-Gekido - Moves swiftly while striking of the foe with freezing punches of electricity.

Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Creates several solid clones made of nothingness.

Formed Within: Electric Clones: Charges the Shadow Clones with electricity, forcing them to zap the nearest physical thing when destroyed.

Kokuangyō no Jutsu: A Genjutsu which brings the target into a world of darkness and emptiness.

Name-shadow
Age-14
Description-Basic ninja suit
Background:Son of Rock Lee, he just can use jutsu.He skilled water andsome Ninjutsu.

Jutsu:

Water clone jutsu:creates clone out of water

Rain Summoning jutsu: make heavy rain fall use a water clone

Water Dragon Jutsu:makes a dragon out of water

Eugene re approved and just post where we left off. Shadow, your skills still need work.

Name: Koji Hyuga
Description: A Genin trying to follow in Neji Hyuga's foot steps slowly learning some of the same techniques Neji has mastered he's a meber of the main branch but doesn't like the way his clan uses the cadet branch.
Age:14
Element:Grass
Village:Village hidden in leafs
Jutsu:
Byakugan: Lets Koji see and strike the Tenketsu

Minor Rotation:Basicly the same as the rotation but it only shields attacks it doesn't throw the opponent in the other direction like Neji's rotation.

4 Trigrams 32 Palms: The unmastered form of the 8 trigrams 64 Palms.

Razor leafs: Can use leafs as shuriken.

Grasping roots: Roots come up from the ground and hold the opponent in place Koji's 4 trigrams 32 palms shortly follows after.

1st stage fox summon: Summons a fox to help in battle Koji usually uses his fox to track his opponent with the foxes scent.

2nd stage fox summon: Summons the mother of the young first fox better suited for battle Koji uses this one to fight more than the first.

3rd stage fox summon: Koji's last resort he'll summon this monsterous fox that is the father of the first. The size of a bear it usually rips it's opponents to pieces.


Were starting from where we left off right?

Right, and approved.

(Sweet ^_^ )
Koji looked down at the ninja," Did you just say you were going to kill us?"

Eugene sighed and walked towards the ramen shop boredly, thinking about the conversation he had with his student.

"Well, what can I do? I guess I should just move on to Taijutsu."thought Denlex remembering his new Genjutsu before leaving the room.

(am i aprroved)

No, you still need capitalization, better grammar, and better spelling. Pretend you're writing a paper from school. I know you capitalize when it's for a grade.)

"Well this is the Hyuuga Clan's part of Konoha. I hope I can do this without getting beat up."thought Denlex looking around for a Hyuuga.

how now

(Okay, I'm a bit iffy on this, but for now you're approved.)

"OK i going to do it right this time Water Dragon jutsu"said Shadow as a deformed water dragon rose up exploded.

(You didn't use periods, or capitalization. Also, it's spelled exploded.)

(Dude, there's no way you can be related to Rock Lee if you can use Jutsu. Rock Lee and his parents and there-on naturally can't use jutsu because their chakra isn't made for that kind of stress.)

Eugene, deciding to make a progress report, walked towards the Hokage's domain.

(Shadow pick up ninjutsu from mom and taijutsu frocm his dad.I want to give jutsu because it would suck not having any jutsu so,if i messed up sorry.)

"Ok one more time(did saome hand signs)water dragon jutsu"said Shadow a water rose up and exploded,"Owch"said Shadow as he flew back into a tree

(Still not literate Shadow. You have one more strike! Also, Eugene since it hasn't been proved that Lee's whole family line is chakra deficient then he can kinda use it.)

"Excuse me, my name is Denlex. Now I know you're probably busy, but I need to know if you've ever head this. "Don't fear the darkness, for your eyes lie in the white." Something like that?"said Denlex "That sounds like something one of our fellow Hyuuga would....."the Hyuuga stopped mid sentence. He looked into Denlex's eyes and quickly left. "Well, I guess all that's left now is to find Eugene sensei."thought Denlex very disappointed.

(Wait.... Is this the same one as earlier?.....) :bass:

OOC: Don't bother giving him strikes. Just cut him now. I highly doubt he has the brainpower to be illiterate, judging by his preformance back at PB.

(If you were a member, youd be banned for flaming, or at least in trouble, like yelled at. What kind of example is that? Thats what admins are supposed to do, keep order and set an example!)

(In the original Naruto, not the dub, Might Gai: He's not using Ninjutsu because he can't. His whole bloodline was born of fighters who can't use Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, their chakra can't handle the stress.)

Eugene was in the Hokage's office, filling out papers to approve a mission for himself and Denlex. "Alright, and the mission will be tommorow, correct?" he asked the Hokage.

(It's true though. He's shown no capability to better his english.)

(If anything, he's handi-capable at English.)

(Rossebay were starting from where we left off. That answer your question? :D )

(He's a friend in Real Life, so I wanted to give him a chance. I do see that he doesn't want to try to better himself though. Also, flaming isn't something that admins should do. It's against the TOS of your own site.)

"Hey Eugene sensei! What's going on?"said Denlex bursting into the office.

(It's not flaming. Flaming would be calling him an illiterate idiot.)

(I still agree with Rossebay, but let's not take up room in my RP over bothersome stuff.)

(Yeah.)

Ross was sitting on a hill.(I have no clue whats going on.)

(We're where we left off.)

(Your holding down the character controled by lief looking for some medicine in his pocket and he just said something about trying to kill us (I think I'll have to go back to the old site to figure out for sure). Ringing a bell?)

"...." Eugene stood in silence for a few seconds before disappearing in a puff of smoke.

"I just missed him. Oh well, I guess he'll find me tomorrow. Now, what to do for the rest of the day."thought Denlex seeing the smoke and walking right back out of the building.

A squirrel jumped at Denlex's face, a red ribbon tied to its tail.

"Hey, what the hell squirrel?"said Denlex looking at the ribbon. "Hm, could it be Eugene sensei?"thought Denlex

"Locksy!" called Eugene's voice as the squirrel jumped away from Denlex and ran towards a tree.

"Hey, Eugene sensei? What's with the sneakin around?"said Denlex walking towards the tree Locksy ran towards.

"I have a gift for you. Be ready to leave Konoha tommorow at seven in the morning. Meet me at the south exit." Eugene said as he picked up Locksy.

"Alright, a gift!"yelled Denlex in excitement.

"Now, then. Did you wanna ask me something?" Eugene asked.