Title: Self Revelation
Description: Just need some feed back
Juan - January 31, 2007 03:37 PM (GMT)
Well I have this thing do for a class and I just wanted to know what you guys think. I t had to be in journal type form and we had to write about our worst time in life and how it was resolved or made worse.
At a point in my life all I wanted to do was to be forgotten. I wanted to disappear into the windand never be missed. I imersed myself in selfdegredation and I walked around alone and hollow. I felt cold inside, my eyes were sad and lonely. It got to the point where I could no longer shed a single tear, My heart was covered with ston and ice. I was emotionless, cold, and lonely. I knew what I was. Why deny the truth? I was a beast, an animal unworthy of living. At every turn I was chastised and made fun of, I saw how cruel people can be, I saw thier demons and I saw thorugh thier facade. I also saw friends and couples walking together, thier faces full of joy and trust. I was disgusted and appalled of the sight of thier joy and trust.... But deep in the pit of my cold, sick, and twisted heart I felt a longing for it.
More later once again out of time, and one more thing. So waht if I was emo? If you got a problem well then deal with it, I know what I was now get off my back about and live your own damn lives.
Alex - January 31, 2007 07:36 PM (GMT)
This topic is (going to be) full of emo.
Trace Stratus - January 31, 2007 10:30 PM (GMT)
Here's an idea. Say that the worst time in your life is here and now because you had to do this journal! D:
I Have a Sandwich - February 1, 2007 06:11 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Alex @ Jan 31 2007, 02:36 PM) |
| This topic is (going to be) full of emo. |
I'll take that bet.
'Ivan - February 1, 2007 06:30 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (I Have a Sandwich @ Feb 1 2007, 01:11 PM) |
| QUOTE (Alex @ Jan 31 2007, 02:36 PM) | | This topic is (going to be) full of emo. |
I'll take that bet.
|
Aye, take I, too.
Full of emo, as would be anyone's topic dealing with an essay of such. So. :mellow:
Kipdog - February 1, 2007 08:26 PM (GMT)
What is emo exactly? I've used the word before myself, but I overextended the word to a different definition I suppose. You see, all humans have emotions. That we cannot deny. Is it alright for us to be emotional? Of course. Saying you arent emo would be like claiming you have no emotions, unless of course, you overextended the word like myself. I believe in alot of people's minds, people see the emos as the depressed and sad people. Do people such as ourselves get depressed and sad at all? Yes. But do we show it too much? It depends on the person I'd imagine. If I get depressed at all, I deal with it on my own time, and the main way I deal with it is self promotion. I do alot of self promotion, actually. :P So, if I do somehow get depressed in any sort of way, its gone relatively fast. I sometimes go about the wrong way of approaching thoughts that trouble me, and I know it. But the self promotion has made me as amazingly self confident as I am today. Well, thats my insight on this whole thing. Hm, maybe Im just thinkin about this too much.
Anyways, how did you end up resolving it? Im curious. I've never actually been through such a period myself, now that you've explained what it feels like, Im curious about how you went about resolving the situation (This is saying that you did resolve it, of course. :unsure:).
(Edit: I replaced the word "why" with "way". Wrong word.)
Trace Stratus - February 1, 2007 08:47 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Kipdog @ Feb 1 2007, 03:26 PM) |
What is emo exactly? I've used the word before myself, but I overextended the word to a different definition I suppose. You see, all humans have emotions. That we cannot deny. Is it alright for us to be emotional? Of course. Saying you arent emo would be like claiming you have no emotions, unless of course, you overextended the word like myself. I believe in alot of people's minds, people see the emos as the depressed and sad people. Do people such as ourselves get depressed and sad at all? Yes. But do we show it too much? It depends on the person I'd imagine. If I get depressed at all, I deal with it on my own time, and the main why I deal with it is self promotion. I do alot of self promotion, actually. :P So, if I do somehow get depressed in any sort of way, its gone relatively fast. I sometimes go about the wrong way of approaching thoughts that trouble me, and I know it. But the self promotion has made me as amazingly self confident as I am today. Well, thats my insight on this whole thing. Hm, maybe Im just thinkin about this too much.
Anyways, how did you end up resolving it? Im curious. I've never actually been through such a period myself, now that you've explained what it feels like, Im curious about how you went about resolving the situation (This is saying that you did resolve it, of course. :unsure:). |
I...I think I might of turned emo in the process of reading that! T.T
Kipdog - February 2, 2007 12:46 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Trace Stratus @ Feb 1 2007, 03:47 PM) |
| QUOTE (Kipdog @ Feb 1 2007, 03:26 PM) | What is emo exactly? I've used the word before myself, but I overextended the word to a different definition I suppose. You see, all humans have emotions. That we cannot deny. Is it alright for us to be emotional? Of course. Saying you arent emo would be like claiming you have no emotions, unless of course, you overextended the word like myself. I believe in alot of people's minds, people see the emos as the depressed and sad people. Do people such as ourselves get depressed and sad at all? Yes. But do we show it too much? It depends on the person I'd imagine. If I get depressed at all, I deal with it on my own time, and the main why I deal with it is self promotion. I do alot of self promotion, actually. :P So, if I do somehow get depressed in any sort of way, its gone relatively fast. I sometimes go about the wrong way of approaching thoughts that trouble me, and I know it. But the self promotion has made me as amazingly self confident as I am today. Well, thats my insight on this whole thing. Hm, maybe Im just thinkin about this too much.
Anyways, how did you end up resolving it? Im curious. I've never actually been through such a period myself, now that you've explained what it feels like, Im curious about how you went about resolving the situation (This is saying that you did resolve it, of course. :unsure:). |
I...I think I might of turned emo in the process of reading that! T.T
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I apologize for the inconvenience.
Trace Stratus - February 7, 2007 12:03 AM (GMT)
I apologize FOR the convenience! ;)