This is my first attempt at fanart, with RathxLyn. ...tell me how you like it. It's rough, and I've yet to clean up the spare lines, but I think it's okay for a first try. v.v''

Be honest. Please? I need to improve... drastically... and I know this. It's just hard to figure out faults in your own work, you know? x.x

Wow, that's great how you do shadowing and stuff. Very nice.

Very Good ^_^

Wow! Very good, me likey! ^_^

Yes, very good, Kurai. ^_^

WHOA, the shadowing... it's soooooo sexy, you gotta teach me how to do that. That's mostly what my art's missing, that and good hands....

Personally, I think Rath's face looks a little more like Shin from FE6 than Rath's kind of rough, distant face ((you know, that consistently cold, pissed off badass look Rath always has)) - that one is kinda warm and has some emotion on it.

But then, since it's a romancy pic, that makes sense. I think it's good, I personally suck completely at sketching (only things I'm any good are clay and photography).

EDIT-And Rath/Lyn's supports deal with Rath's distance anyway, so the melting off of that would fit well.

Wow thats really good

:wub:

(except for the fact that it's Lyn+Rath :( Hector>Rath)

It's very impressive. Especially for a first.